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Absence of Mentality

Kyungsoo peered out of his cell, that was covered in tallies in every crook and cranny, looking for the nurses he assumed opened the door, but instead he witnessed his family exiting their own rooms, except Lay. He went over to bipolar boy’s cell and saw that he was already gone. When he turned around Soo saw the youngest looking up at him with the begging look to be freed.

“Okay Hun, just turn around and I’ll get that annoying thing off of you,” commanded Kyungsoo. Sehun’s arms were still held inside the straight jacket the hospital locked him into. He was the boy that also lost his mother like Kyungsoo, the boy that killed other women to sew a bunny plush made from their motherly skins. It’s been awhile since D.O last saw that bear around because the men took it away when they first introduced Sehun to his room.

“I have to find bunny, maybe mommy will help me.”

Kyungsoo slipped a smile into the corner of his lip, “mommy will definitely help you find teddy, but…” he grabbed the younger one’s hair tightly in his hand and pulled his face back til the boy’s ear was next to his lips, “if mommy were to get hurt and you didn't protect her, then I will hurt you in ways unimaginable.”

“I w-won’t let mommy get hurt,” Sehun whined. With that Soo took the jacket off of Hun and strolled off patiently to check on the other boys.

Chanyeol was already down the hall skipping to the stairs while talking to himself, “Baekkie,” he hummed, “let’s hurry to the kitchen and eat before everyone eats all the food!” He was the harmless one of the group. His mind corrupted by the disbelief of his friend’s death over a year ago, although he was quite dangerous when paired with Luhan. Luhan was standing in his cell’s doorway deciding whether or not to leave.

“You’re not going to follow Chan? Aren’t you hungry?”

“Where is he he he going?” Lu frantically looked at D.O and down the hall. He was a creepy thing, he freaked Kyungsoo out a little.

“He’s going to the cafeteria.” Luhan rushed off to follow Chan’s steps. Soo sighed with relief of Lu’s absence while starting his own adventure because he knew that somewhere far off Suho would be desperately running to Sector A. His breathing would be extremely rapid at the fear of losing his boys.

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Jeniiin
#1
ok i read this like a year ago, and it was so good an the end was just one huge plot twist!
just wanted to drop by and say, this was a great story and i wish more people would read it >,<
teresaginny
#2
Chapter 7: It's confusing tho reading this, i don't know which one to focus on. I was wondering if D.O, Kyungsoo, and Soo were the same person with multiple personality all the time. I knew there must be a plot twist when i read about Suho going with the group. I think it'd better if Suho was involved from the first chapter, let it focused on Kyungsoo and the other boys, but not putting Suho's role on the side, that way could explained more why it was all just a delusion or hallucination or even a flashback to Suho. Somehow, Suho's problem wasn't really shown in the story, like was it his experience that created guilty, or was it just his imagination, to put him in the mental hospital at the first place.
However, this story and plot is unique, i also like your choice of words, how you were describe the characters and the hospital, and also i appreciate your good job. Keep writing! :)
Seoulqueenka #3
Chapter 5: This is so crazy!!!!!!!!!!... Please update soon!!!!!!!
shoopshoop #4
Love it !! Thanks for the update
Shimmiin #5
Chapter 2: I dunno really what I think but if you only have Kyungsoo's point of view maybe it won't be so confusing..? Well I don't know, I think it will be good no matter what you do ^ ^
shoopshoop #6
Awesome!!!
lunafxstar #7
Great story!
Shimmiin #8
Chapter 1: I'm looking forward for this story! Fighting~