RV; Something Like Infatuation
flxramean's Review Portfolio[CONTENTID1]Something Like Infatuation[/CONTENTID1]
[CONTENTID2] By: coffee_ [/CONTENTID2]
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›Title [ 9/10 ]
The title itself gives me a whole bunch of curiosity because I don't know what was the genre of the story (Thought is was going to be angsty kind of story at the first place). Fascinating!
› Description and Foreword [ 9/10 ]
Simple but neat. I loved the way you put the 'will' question at the end, what a way to pique someone's curiosity, huh? Somehow you revealed a little bit of plot there made me craved for more! With questions such as "Why?" "How?" "Who?", I found myself clicking [Next >] ///(°∀°)\\\
› Plot [ 13/15 ]
The plot were beautifully outlined, arranged and flowed. I had no problems with the plot eventhough it wasn't the most original plot for me but I was actually expecting for more (or maybe not yet). The story put my mind at ease, maybe because of its unintentional comedy implied in the story (the fluffiness got me cringing, in a good way xD). Overall, it was interesting although it was barely two chapters, the craves were there! Put more plot details and it will be good to go. I see lots of potential coming through the door, so keep up the good work!
› Character Development [ 9/10 ]
I loved Myungsoo's character the most! He was funny, gutsy and cute (ouch). I had to stop myself from squealing too much because of his jealousy toward Howon, and his possesiveness toward Sungyeol. I tota
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