[CONTENTID1]Ephemeral to Tedious[/CONTENTID1]
[CONTENTID2]By: Hananii19[/CONTENTID2]
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›Title [ 9/10 ]

The title actually defines the story itself! Ephemeral to Tedious, it gives out the mysterious vibe, but meaningful as it also gives out hints to the reader. It’s perfect!

› Description and Foreword [ 9/10 ]

The description was neatly written and it was only a DESCRIPTION of the story, but I found myself craving for more. The graphic poster is honestly very cute and it also applies the happy vibes of the story in the poster so it suits the story very much! But we both know the mystery behind this, aren’t we?

› Plot [ 14/15 ]

This plot is so fresh, I loved it because somehow, because it is different. This one is a new kind of different, but good one. I’m impressed at how you put all the plot and characters together, it seems like it was connected. It was angsty in its own way but also very beautiful until at the very end of the story. It ended in a beautiful way people can imagined of, so it’s perfect, again!

› Character Development [ 9/10 ]

One word for Feihan, badass! Feihan’s character herself screams badass and I loved how you portrayed Feihan as a broken girl. She was lost in her own thoughts but she managed to be herself until the very end even after what happened to her as a child. About Yixing, he was somehow the only character that made me went, “Oh my god,” “Are you serious?!” “Nope, I don’t signed up for this,” Yes, Hananii19, I am telling you how good you were in turning Yixing from