RV; After Prison

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[CONTENTID1] After Prison [/CONTENTID1]
[CONTENTID2] By: Jaeknight [/CONTENTID2]


[CONTENTID3]

›Title [ 10/10 ]

The title gripped my inside, truthfully. It doesn't sounds that good, but I have a weak spot for simple titles with deep meaning. So I think you did a great job at finding a good title for this oneshot!

› Description and Foreword [ 9/10 ]

The description is quite a tease [Actually, very much of a tease] and I don't think you will have any problems in grabbing people's attention towards this story. The prison is the story itself and I don't think I want it to be written differently, good job!


› Plot [ 14/15 ]

[SCREAMS!] That was terrifyingly very unexpected! I loved it so much, and since I am a strict reviewer, I would sometimes have to read it all over again up to three times but dang, this one is raw which is very good because it is hard to find this anywhere around Asianfanfics. However, the beginning of the plot was kind of a bore since there's not so much plot details. I wished for more insight of Minseok's point of view, actually. But you just took psychological genre to another level, marvelous! The sharp edges, and mysterious angle of the story were enlightening! Not to worry, it turned out very good, indeed since I kept my eyes on it from the first word to the last (Very, very fascinating) ●ᴥ●


› Character Development [ 7/10 ]

The characterization of Kim Minseok was undeniably a bravo! You did a very good job at portraying a person who couldn't bear with chan

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JaeKnight
#1
Chapter 6: PS: Finallyy... someone understood what I'm trying to say about the title hahahaha Thank you :)))
JaeKnight
#2
Chapter 6: Waha~ It's amazing that I saw the review here first before the shop. kekekeke
I'm so glad that you liked the story. However, i'm soooooo freaking guilty that the feeling of the story was, somehow, lifeless and kinda boring. I know that myself, bc I was not super satisfied and confident with the whole shot before and after publishing it. But from some reviews im getting, im considering to revise it (bc they feel it was rushed. but true), and add more feelings (and appearance )towards the character and the story itself. Thus, making it longer (Noooooooooo T_T yeah, not a big fan of long shots) mehe.

I'm a big fan of psychological, mind-blowing movies btw. hehehe That's my schema when writing *evil grinsss*
I'm super happy that you recommend the story to your friends, reallly :)))) hehehehe
Thank you for the awesome review <3333