[CONTENTID1]Not You[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2] By: t0pslyfe [/CONTENTID2]

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› Title [ 9/10 ]

Right on! Although it is very simple and a bit common, but I liked it! It fits the story right on spot! After reading it, I can totally connect it with the title as it expressed the melancholic theme of the one-shot.

› Description and Foreword [ 8/10 ]

Fourteen words. Fourteen words, gal! You put only fourteen words, and it was more than enough to burn the curiosity flame inside readers. I don’t think you’ll find the area ‘attracting readers’ hard if it was written that way. So, good job!

› Plot [ 13/15 ]

At first, the plot was pretty predictable. Strangers – Acquaintances – Fell In Love. But at the END! The end was unexpected! I had myself re-read it for three times, and yes, I wouldn’t want it to end in any other way! I don’t know how did you came up with the idea for it to end like that, but I supposed you’ve done a great job at that ^‿^

› Character Development [ 8/10 ]

TOP had such a complex personality for us to understand, there weren’t so much details about him (I was actually craving to know more about him) but I guess readers knew what his opinion about Lee Seunghyun at the end of the story. I just loved how you defined TOP’s character as an antisocial with love in his heart, kindness shaded under his merciless eyes an