[RV] The Choice
¶BACON YEHET SHOP™¶CLOSED
The choice
review pick - up
The Choice
By: iheartcookie
Reviewer: xXxmani923xXx
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1. Title - 9.5/10
Your poster is very neat looking and it does catches the readers attention. I do like the font you used too.
2. Description/Forward - 10/10
Your description and foreward aren't too detailed; in fact, it's detailed enough to lure your readers in. Also, it was nice seeing credits to the shops and other reviews you had requested for previously, including our shop!
3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10
I don't really see any major character development in the beginning of your story but your characters do go through conflict a lot so your characters are gradually developing, even if it is a little. Your characters' personality traits are described pretty well and there were times I got confused about a certain character but after reading on, the confusion did eventually
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