[RV] A Cliche Family

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A CLICHE FAMILY

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A cLICHE FAMILY

 

By: CamilleVendetta

Reviewer: krytoria

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1. Title - 9/10 -

The title is great, it draw the reader’s attention and make them want to read the story
 

2. Description/Forward - 9/10 -

I like the way you did the description where you have a short preview of the story for the readers to see how it is before they read the whole thing.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -

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