[RV] A Christmas Escapade
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A christmas escapade
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A christmas escapade
By: ChuntsunBaes
Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO
★ ★ ★ ★
1. Title - 10/10 - I was caught up by the title at first glance, it is unique in a sense that it is considerably a "one of a kind" title. The fact that your title has direct linkage to the plot allows readers to generally foreview the plot. nevertheless, it was a 10/10 perfect title for the story.
2. Description/Forward - 7/10 - Overall, it was good, but the lack of suspense degraded it, it wasn't good enough to nudge readers into definately wanting to view this piece.
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