[RV] Don't Look Back In Anger.
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Don't Look Back In Anger.
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Don't Look Back In Anger.
By: karmachameleon
Reviewer: nadahishamazzamXO
★ ★ ★ ★ ★
1. Title - 8/10 -
The title fits to the storyline, however it didn't grab my attention at all. In fact, by looking at the title, I felt that the story is boring - Which later changed.
2. Description/Forward - 8/10 -
Your description is just to the point. It is perfect, as it has the bean of the story. It made me change my opinion about the title xD But as for the forward, I think it would be better if you written a short dialogue between the story's characters. Like for example the one between Baekhyun and Nara at their last lunch before breaking up.
3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8.5/10 -
I, personally, think that the characters of the story matured pleasantly. I relished Baekhyun's character. The mix of love, hurt and guilt a
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