[RV] No Longer The Same
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no longer the same
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no longer the same
By: cocoisme
Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO
★ ★ ★
1. Title - 6/10 -
Regarding the title, I presumed i was about to view a romace fiction. However, the title had very little linkage to the story within, hence that would've degraded the stakes.
2. Description/Forward - 7/10 -
It was almost flawless, but something din't quite 'click'. The last few lines weren't that much of a suspense.
(Is SM a person or a company of people?
3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 6/10 -
Nah, the charecters existed. Not much was mentioned and I b
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