[RV] Young & Beautiful
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Young & Beautiful
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Young and Beautiful
By: juliyah
Reviewer: nadahishamazzamXO
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1. Title - 7/10 -
This title is okay. However, It's not hooking, I think another title would fit better.
2. Description/Forward - 6/10 -
The video helped in showing how the story is going, but the forward was just too plain. Also, Is it like a prologue? Because a forward, mostly, contains a hooking part from the story itself.
3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -
I liked how you expressed sehun's character with time, but I honestly didn't see any
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