[RV]The Logic of Living
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the logic of living
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the logic of living
By: v66352
Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO
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1. Title - 9/10 -
The title is unique, in terms of having direct linkage towards the plot. Nevertheless, it was too 'innocent' in relation to the concept of your suicidal, angst story. However, i do enjoy plot twists, or should i say, title twist ;)
2. Description/Forward - 10/10 -
The description was equally alluring as the forward, hence, in other words, splendid work! It does protude readers to check out this piece of literacy art.
3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -
You have succeedingly diverse the development for both characters, in terms of 'screen-time'. Both Sehun and 'the girl (see the problem here? she's nameless) are similarly flawed and
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