Exquisite

Toxic
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eight;

 

The morning following her encounter with D.O, Min Jun gathers her sister and their two friends under the tree of their elementary school. Accompanied by flamboyant hand gestures, she begins the recount the happenings of that night.

 

“And then,” she exclaims, “the door opens! And I tumble in, and a boy rescues me!”

 

The three other children regard her with the same skeptic gaze as they had when she suggested that they break into the Ahn Mansion.

 

“Are you sure, Min Jun?”

 

Min Jun nods, “and the boy said that he’d been living in the attic ever since he was young!”

 

She surveys the expressions of her three companions. Her face falls as she reaches a revelation: they don’t believe her at all.

 

“I swear I’m not making this up!” She says.

 

Min Gi and Chanyeol exchange a glance.

 

“Yeah. We believe you.”

 

It is evident that they don’t.

 

“I-I could take you!”

 

“No thanks,” Min Gi says quickly, “the Ahn Mansion creeps me out.”

 

“Same here,” Chanyeol adds, “it’s haunted.”

 

Baekhyun chews at his fingernails.

 

“Yeah, Min Jun, I doubt it’s a good idea to go back.”

 

Min Jun frowns and crosses her arms. Her brows furrow and her lips stretch into a pout.

 

"I don't care what you all think! I don't need you!"

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Innocentsoul123
#1
Chapter 22: Chapter 22: I'm seriously waiting for new update. I Remember You/Hello Monster is my first and favorite drama of D.O. so I really wanted to read a story inspired from that show especially when it stars D.O. himself as the main character. Poor Jongin. I already had a feeling that Sehun's character is too good to be true. I'm surprised Min Jun even allowed herself to open up to him and love him when she's always cautious around every guy but guess deep down she was tired being lonely. I'm curious what happened in the past cause the Min Jun in the past seems to know what D.O. has been through and she even had feelings for him. There's no way she forgot the face of her friend and love, right? I think she had amnesia because of which she doesn't remember him. I wonder what D.O. did throughout these years. Please post another chapter soon Authornim.
ttaemyeon
#2
Chapter 22: EKDJDJXJXJ so, illlicits-nim, for an 18 years old, your writing skill is so, so good. Moreover you start from 14 even! You have this important skill of an author which is able to keep the readers on their toes. I like lengthy fics, but turns out i also like the short fics that this one delivered. Kudos for you! And cannot wait for the update! Hopefully you are healthy and happy always!
ttaemyeon
#3
Chapter 21: Oh my god…
ttaemyeon
#4
Chapter 14: has minjun in amnesia or sumthing? 🥲
ttaemyeon
#5
Chapter 14: every chapter is awfully short😭🙏🏻 but this is so interesting!
ttaemyeon
#6
Chapter 9: Wow… i don’t feel good about Sehun somehow!
ttaemyeon
#7
Chapter 6: so their past was somewhat entangled…
ttaemyeon
#8
Chapter 1: wow… intriguing first chapter!
Baembi
#9
Chapter 22: wow kyungsoo managed to escape and now he’s in minjun’s house kdjdkskd i gather min jun doesn’t remember him from her childhood then? since he introduced himself as d.o? looking forward to what happens next omgg
NeverNinaa
#10
Chapter 4: i seriously feel like this fic has some crazy plot twist or something because minnie just said in the first part that kyungsoo didn't have an abusive uncle, or an uncle at all. you mean everything's happening in this part to kyungsoo is just... happening inside his head? as in... not in real life? omg, that's absolutely insane!