Payback

Toxic
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PART TWO - D.O. 

Twenty-Two 

Wielding a large kitchen knife, D.O. stares pensively at his uncle's bedroom door. 

D.O. often thought of himself as a long-term planner. He is a creature of delayed gratification. He did not mind waiting, as long as the result of his patience was worthwhile. He decided at a young age that killing his uncle would be worthwhile. Every beating he endured, every sleepless night doubled over in pain had culminated in this moment. Just a little longer, he would tell himself, when you are older and stronger, you will make him pay. 

At fifteen years old, D.O. is not taller, or healthier than average. Those years in captivity had robbed him of adequate development, but he is blessed with decent genetics. On days when he is particularly bored, he would sneak off and goof around in the forest by his house, where he would climb trees to stay active. When he felt very angry, or very violent, he would punch tree trunks until his knuckles bled. But the pain, to D.O., was worthwhile, because it made him strong. His uncle, in the meanwhile, became older, heavier, and weaker. His alcoholism, combined with his aging, made him slow and sluggish. In the last years of his life, the beatings became increasingly infrequent since he had trouble going up the stairs to D.O.'s attic. Most of his days were spent wasting away in front of the television. 

This is how D.O. found his uncle--slumped over in his armchair, with bottles of liquor

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Innocentsoul123
#1
Chapter 22: Chapter 22: I'm seriously waiting for new update. I Remember You/Hello Monster is my first and favorite drama of D.O. so I really wanted to read a story inspired from that show especially when it stars D.O. himself as the main character. Poor Jongin. I already had a feeling that Sehun's character is too good to be true. I'm surprised Min Jun even allowed herself to open up to him and love him when she's always cautious around every guy but guess deep down she was tired being lonely. I'm curious what happened in the past cause the Min Jun in the past seems to know what D.O. has been through and she even had feelings for him. There's no way she forgot the face of her friend and love, right? I think she had amnesia because of which she doesn't remember him. I wonder what D.O. did throughout these years. Please post another chapter soon Authornim.
ttaemyeon
#2
Chapter 22: EKDJDJXJXJ so, illlicits-nim, for an 18 years old, your writing skill is so, so good. Moreover you start from 14 even! You have this important skill of an author which is able to keep the readers on their toes. I like lengthy fics, but turns out i also like the short fics that this one delivered. Kudos for you! And cannot wait for the update! Hopefully you are healthy and happy always!
ttaemyeon
#3
Chapter 21: Oh my god…
ttaemyeon
#4
Chapter 14: has minjun in amnesia or sumthing? 🥲
ttaemyeon
#5
Chapter 14: every chapter is awfully short😭🙏🏻 but this is so interesting!
ttaemyeon
#6
Chapter 9: Wow… i don’t feel good about Sehun somehow!
ttaemyeon
#7
Chapter 6: so their past was somewhat entangled…
ttaemyeon
#8
Chapter 1: wow… intriguing first chapter!
Baembi
#9
Chapter 22: wow kyungsoo managed to escape and now he’s in minjun’s house kdjdkskd i gather min jun doesn’t remember him from her childhood then? since he introduced himself as d.o? looking forward to what happens next omgg
NeverNinaa
#10
Chapter 4: i seriously feel like this fic has some crazy plot twist or something because minnie just said in the first part that kyungsoo didn't have an abusive uncle, or an uncle at all. you mean everything's happening in this part to kyungsoo is just... happening inside his head? as in... not in real life? omg, that's absolutely insane!