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SarangRae
#1
Chapter 49: It's nice seeing Baek take note of how things are run at the Head Pack house so he can improve his own pack house--thinking like a leader :)

but sehuuUUUUNNNNNN </3 I feel like there's an extra reason for breaking his bond with Lamia other than escaping the pain of her death. He seems too smart and there's too much at stake for him to just be saving himself some extra heartache. Or maybe I'm making a mountain of a molehill....
Sey-ra
#2
Chapter 49: Yeah i also surprise sehun drop the bomb and would also surprise if Cordelia found any of her relative alive.
CassieSoneElfShawol
#3
Chapter 49: Oh god I can't believe I spent the whole day reading this till the latest update. Thank you for your updates! It's been long since I've last read a good long story :)) Anticipating what will happen for Cordelia!!! This story got me hooked!! Really loved the way you write about each character :)) Looking forward to the side story for Jongin and Seulgi too!!
isaisy
#4
Chapter 49: first thing i notice, poor damian -- i can feel you bro, like im the oldest daughter of my mom and oldest granddaughter from my maternal family, i was always dismissed if i voiced out my opinion on important family matters when i was in high school, but now as i am at uni, and reached 20 they started to hear my opinion, even ask for it. i'll give you a pat on your shoulder bruh!

i knew it, you won't make it as easy as we thought. damn it Issandra, she moved pretty fast. No Baek, c'mon focus on your task, i know you must be super worried of Cordelia's wellbeing but she got yeri, taeyong, yixing and chanyeol, they'll doing fine (or i hope so) Sehun cassualy dropped the news like... it's just registered in my mind why he didn't try to connect with her via their soulmate-link or smth

Alpha Byun praised by an Elder o m g im still not used with this 'Alpha' title on baek lol Soojung you're on roll. Im curious with her tactix in the future! We're going on war soooooooon~~~ yeheeeeee
nadeiyla41
#5
Chapter 49: She gonna be okay...
Fighting!!
Lina_Love
#6
Chapter 49: Okay I need to see Sehun with Sooyoung for some reason and you’re not letting me!!! I’m going to cry!! Just please Joyhun needs to happen for me!!
KAIDEUX
#7
Oh... I thought this was completed ouo Ah, hopefully I catch up before it's complete xDD
SarangRae
#8
Chapter 48: I will never not laugh at Sehun complaining about annoying "old" people that he himself is far older than hahahahah
oh_freya
#9
i screamed when i saw liza soberano
isaisy
#10
Chapter 47: I LAUGHING MY A** OFF, THANK YOU VERY MUCH MIJOO. LOL damn it mother even i got the second hand embarassement omg nooo OMG NOOOO HAHAHAHAHAAHA Chanyeol dude stop trying to be so cool lol How Yeri going to live with Taeyong's handsomeness and people's reaction to him? (idc if this is grammatically wrong or nah)

true, baekhyun may turn into his Little Giant mode if he ever hear what Cordelia going to say lol is this like calm before the storm? GO YERI SHOW'EM WHO'S DA BOSS!!! I see some Taeyong brotherly act there urgh cute ♡♡♡

I prefer Yeri's POV too! Being with Cordelia's pov is like, we're always on edge with new info and all. But it's fine i luv both of them. Thank Reya for updating! You're on roll ;) I was super happy with last chapter even tho you said it was a filler one. cordelia's "if you think im going to make you breakfast everyday for the rest of our lives, then ou're out of your mind" still make me laugh till now. i typed a longa*s comment but accidently delete it (i want to riped my hair so much lol)

but yeah thank u dis chapter is funn ;)
SarangRae
#11
Chapter 47: "Can we just bring out the cookies now and never speak of this again?" SAME AHAHHAhAHAHAHha but aaawwww my sweet Yeri yes enjoy homemade cookies and milk in a warm home environment with a mother figure and your soon to be brother ;___; <3

I snorted everytime Yeri noticed Chanyeol being obviously interested and failing to hide it. I think I like Yeri's POV a bit more than Cordelia's too.
Tatari
#12
Chapter 45: Oh my god, are you trying to tell me that Jiyeon's dad is her uncle from Madrid? It would make a lot of sense why Jongdae would've chosen her family to do the spying. If Jongdae even knew about her uncle and aunt, that is. So my question is, did Cordelia's uncle and aunt already appear? Because if yes, I might have an idea who the aunt in Cairo could be :3 but like always
xiu_mine
#13
just off-topic/story comment.. that poster! oc is liza soberano.. that pretty girl... where was I when immortals came out? lol i think im reading way too many fics. but change isnt so bad. i hope to read this soon. oh and btw, those chapter titles lately are Exo songs.. is there anything you're trying to do dear or its just a random choice?
Sey-ra
#14
Yes finally found a good fanfic even reading the forward makes me so excited.
Chisanai99
#15
Chapter 46: Yes, the prayers has been heard! Thank you so much for adding JH&JM moments! You portrayed them perfectly <333
This chapter- awsome as always!
I am so happy for upcoming Yeri and Taeyeong moments :)
KendallGigi
#16
Chapter 46: Joohyun is such a sweet girl. I like the difference between her and cordelia haha..side story with the reaper and lady midnight! Omo, cant wait for it :)
SarangRae
#17
Chapter 46: Okay but did you learn a new fact about penguins or something...? Why the argument thing hahahah

And omg Joohyun is such a sweetheart personally packing lunch for the boys and General Soojung aaawwww Soojung must feel really weird having a young Lycan packing her a lunchbox of all people but I hope she enjoys it :)
KendallGigi
#18
Chapter 45: Chapter 44: I just finished reading the story and i want more haha but take your time. First, i thought cordelia is lamia becuase of the visions and so i get ahead thinking that it is a sefun fic too but then again there was no tag about him so yeah...Second, i also like how you made these girls (yeri and cordelia) a bit of selfish, i guess, in the sense that they want to gain power in order for them to grow and to protect other people. Lastly, i'm amaze on how you guys put all of my favorite books(percy jackson-in the sense of demigod and all that shizz-and harry potter-of course witchcraft in an intense way and when cordelia understands the snakes it reminds me of voldemort hehe)in this amazing story.

Is it just a coincidence that jiyeon is from spain and cordelia has a relative there? I think not.

Im sorry it was a long comment, i just want to spare you guys from seeing me in the comment section too much. You guys are aweome, the both of you, for bringing us a wonderful novel. Thank you for that. Now, im patiently waiting for your update. Fighting author-nims! :)
isaisy
#19
Chapter 45: is it sort of coincidence that jiyeon's from spain and cordelia has a relative from her mother who currently live in madrid? i'll look for jiyeon's involvement in this ^^

props for you two guyssss! I legit read the Kyrios Story from last chapters more than 3 times. I can't imagine how you two did the overall background story (?) of this story. And special s/o for Tri who edit the whole story! I dunno, i envy you, you're english must be very good >.<

ps. about the things you ask from prev a/n about what we want you to write before the story escalated into more serious war thingy, is it possible to show us how taeyong and yeri interact as a sibling? Yeri has rough childhood with no proper 'love' from her brother so yeah ㅎㅎㅎ thank you btw ^^
fruace #20
Chapter 45: im excited to see how jiyeons story will play out! i wonder how her parents arent any other-worldly creatures considering jongdae is her uncle? maybe theres more to the story jiyeon doesnt know similar to cordelia?