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luv_kero
2447 streak #1
Chapter 70: Oooh, very heavy chapter (but then again, all of the chapters lately have been pretty heavy XD) and I really liked seeing all of the factions come together. ^^ I'm definitely not surprised by how Cordelia handled the meeting, haha. She knows what she wants and how to get to it. :P But I'm also really happy about how she and Baekhyun talked to each other in the beginning of the chapter. Even though they were having a sort of disagreement at first, they talked it out and explained their sides so that the other person knew what was on their mind. And they ended up understanding each other. :) Good communication is always the key to a good relationship and I love stories that portray that. ^^

And take your time with the update! Don't want to rush good-quality work. :) And thank you, Tri! Good luck on your exams! I had a midterm this morning and I'm absolutely drained, haha. ^^;
SarangRae
#2
Chapter 70: lowkey rip Alpha Byun but no Alpha Wu at the meeting? Could Cordelia not have thought of last words that weren't blatantly ual sigh truly a teenager and novice leader

"too weak to live"...how do you draw the line between weak and powerful? Once all those who are "weak" are gone, don't the least of the "powerful" become weak in comparison by new standards? When and how do you know when to stop this... purge?

Praise for Tri woohoo! I've started beta-ing for someone so I wanna show some love from one beta to another :) I hope your exams go well!!
isaisy
#3
Chapter 70: i agree. the first part until the the higher official of underworld meeting have a different feel from your usual writing, like...it's not all over the place, but it's still different of how you usually write it. it's ok btw, you make me nervous with that opening baek x cordelia conversation, i thought they're going to have a loooong argument.

oh OH AND I SEE A PROTECTIVE FATHER ACT RIGHT THERE hello jongin! it's been long! AND! AND! Cordelia's last words to Jacoby LOL IM LAUGHING HERE thank you for that smart move cordelia, we need a little sassiness in the middle of this serious war. Yixing maybe can teach Cordelia a way to hold her tongue, she's unstoppable! urgh she's going to be one cool leader. Nothing but respect for my High Priestess u,u

Thanks for both of your hard work, Tri & Reya!!! Good luck on your exam Tri! *\(^0^*\)
SarangRae
#4
Chapter 69: "To make her point, she took the girl into her own arms," I don't think I've said this before but General Soojung is officially Yeri's Auntie now. Sorry, I don't make the rules. (yes I do HAHAHA) Honestly I love how no one is comfortable with this new misi psychi bond. I'm looking forward to how it will make life difficult for literally everyone. But ouchie Yeri face planting on top of the twitching aww :(

"it's a forbidden--" giRL CaN YoU NOT THEN PLS honestly she's taking so much on. The thing about Baekhyun knowing she's be spoiled if she grew up with her real mom and the thing about not being able to run fast and the Powerful Surname thing..... can she just chill out. Or can someone /really/ remind her that while she is part god, she's still part human too. She has limits, and there are boundaries even she shouldn't cross. It doesn't seem right that she's using forbidden magic.

And I hope you aren't stretching your own limits with university and writing and just life generally. Your education and career are good things to strive for but don't forget to relax sometimes too! <3 As for the continuation of this series, I hope you're able to start and finish Forever seeing as you've already posted it, but I don't think the BaekDelia's kids sequel should be as important because a) they're all OCs and realistically idk how well that'll go down on a site filled with idol fiction b) that'll probably happen quite some time into the future and by then you may lose motivation or time to write
isaisy
#5
Chapter 69: duuude, Brother Taeyong is back! that's how i put my younger siblings when they went out of the line u,u and then baekhyun plus his father-in-law that's.... sweet....? he got his acceptance (not that they really need it), plus baekhyun being a good partner right there. I love supportive boyfriend! anyway~ now that they got the treasure, what are theybgoing to do with it? Are they going to give it back to The God? I am so anticipating Cordelia x Issandra face off danggg~

Your education comes first Reya. It's amazing you still write when you're hectic with last year uni stuff (i'm trying to understand because me too, the pressure to graduate is pretty big that's why i wandered in aff pretty often this day). Ugh, lemme give you a biiiiiiiiii~~~~g hug!!! ({}) take your time! It's up to you to decide about sequel, you are one of my fav author here so i'll support you no matter what! ♡♡♡ good luck with your study ♡♡♡

Tri! Hello! Have a nice day girl! Thank you for your updates on story feeds~ hope that the other reader can understand ^^
Sey-ra
#6
Chapter 69: i dont mind to wait as long as u finish of what u have started.
luv_kero
2447 streak #7
Chapter 69: Awww, the conversation between Baekhyun and Apollo was sweet, even if Baekhyun was kinda awkward, HAHA. :P But it's so evident that they both really care about Cordelia and want what's best for her. :) And wow, they actually got the chest!! :O Hopefully this Trojan Horse works. I don't think anyone will suspect Taeyong of having the real vial, since he's been pretty lowkey throughout the war (and in general, LOL), but I like how Cordelia came up with the reason of him holding onto the vial. ^^ And we're coming up to the last big battle!! :D How exciting and I hope Cordelia doesn't overexert herself. She's staking everything on this final battle. >____<

And don't apologize for the gap between updates! School first! I'm also a senior in uni, so I totally get wanting to prioritize finishing your studies in order to graduate. I'll definitely be supporting what you write and I'm perfectly fine with slow updates! And I'm fine with whatever you decide to do for the sequels. :) Take care of yourself!
Mikinnou
#8
Chapter 69: Oh, you are in your last year? What major?
They found the chest. Wow. xd it was so simple xddd
Of course we want sequels! doesnt matter if quick updates or not :P
Yerinator #9
Chapter 69: holy heck this was good
maral_exo_l
#10
What is the girl's real name?!
ikran12 #11
Chapter 41: dammit i wanted to comment in the end but baek is the alpha adkkskdfkgdrfdmhghaffdc girl iam screaming he deserves it more than anyone
luv_kero
2447 streak #12
Chapter 68: Holy cow, I definitely wasn't expecting a chapter on Cassandra, but wow, this really takes me back to the published Greek myth AUs I used to read in the past. :') Like I used to never care about Cassandra, but then my sister brought home a book called Troy High (a modern-day, HS!AU featuring Cassandra) and she's been a lowkey fav since then. XD And I've been liking Achilles more, because I'm Fate trash and Fate/Apocrypha ended two weeks ago (it's an anime LOL bc i'm anime trash LMAO), and Achilles was one of the better characters there (even though the plot and characters were kinda messy tbh but w/e it was a spinoff so i wasn't expecting much anyway LOL).

BUT YEAH, wow, that was a lot of random stuff, but basically, I love your take on this part of the Trojan War. :') And you integrated the two into your AU so well and I can't believe this is ending in eight more chapters. OTL But at least we still have Killers and Forever, so I don't have to say goodbye to this universe yet. :')
hyodina
#13
Chapter 68: finally done with all unread chapters homg that was wild ride and now that complete truth already revealed I just hope everything can go fine (but yeah, what's life without some angst BUT) I just wish no one's dying again TTTTTT hansol's death still hurts TT
tbh I can't even say who's pov is my favorite again now first chapters I love hyesun's pov but then shifted to yeri but now...cordelia's character is so..likeable ahahaha I love when she's unleashing her inner fangirl heart to good looking people lol Taeyong scene was so hilarious
key_key1
#14
Chapter 68: I don't know you already update since last year because iam busy searching new story to spend my spare time. Tbh i don't really understand with history in this story and my english still zero so just little i can insert in my head. King sehun and yeri relationship is hard one, it difficult for them because sehun still love his past soulmate and yeri just lost her mate but immediaetly they meet and become mate. I understand yeri can't easily accept that but is sehun already accept it? Because he hurt when yeri say she want to forget their bond. I will wait baekhyun cordelia sweet scene and maybe yeri king sehun bond.
Kyungsooa #15
Chapter 52: this chapter was one word: aDORKABLE
Chisanai99
#16
Chapter 68: Holy bananas! That really suprised me! I think I have to re-read a few chapter cause I think I missed some things.
But OMG so many things happened! I am so ready for what's about to happen.
Nancy is so pretty and she really looks like Liza. But honestly Im okay with everything you come up with ;)
Mikinnou
#17
Chapter 68: Nancy would be better, Somi doesn't look as innocent as Cordelia is (and well, I just can't picture Somi as her)
What the happend in this chapter? XD I think I will have to rereas it a few times XD
Heh, Cordelia is asking for Sehun, heh, heh.

Can't wait for the next chapter
isaisy
#18
Chapter 68: ffffff the last 3 chapters were intense af. omg, i don't know what to say, my mind can't proccess how sehun finally confront yeri and his duality towards yeri, and then the truth, AND TAEYONG REALLY LIVE THAT LONG? HOLY SHTTTT!!!! Omg, so it's really a thing for mortality after all, i thought they're going to got trolled by them. I find it really, assuring (?) that the two princess, Lamia and Cassandra were good friends (or partner) :')

im not going to miss those 8 remaining chapters. i love this story too much ♡♡♡♡ ps. for teilight reference, i felt so cheated when i watched the last installment of twilight, i thought they went all out and fight, for real. and i prefer nancy! :D
Kyungsooa #19
Chapter 40: i honestly love the change of pov’s, it just makes everything so much more interesting
Chisanai99
#20
Chapter 67: My mind went literally crazy after reading this! The relationship beetween Sehun and Yeri is really hard to understand. For now, I am enjoying that awkward, push and pull relationship they have because I am curious what will happen in Forever ;)
Jungkook, my poor boy got rejected. I still hope that Yeri will trust him again and they will at least stay as close friends.
And OMG Cordelia and the sass! I imagine how awkward must have Apollo felt when he saw his daugter kissing a boy in front of him. That cracked me up xdd
Also, will we see Thunder Pack or Soojung again? I kinda miss them...
Great chapter as always. I cant wait for what you have in store for us Author- nim <3 <3