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luv_kero
2447 streak #1
Chapter 76: Oh, wow, I definitely wasn't expecting Lamia to come back as a minor goddess!! :D How exciting!! This really is the best solution for everyone, given the circumstances, and huge props to Cordelia and Yeri for coming up with this plan!! ^^ And I don't blame Sehun for acting the way he did. He's got a lot to process, with Yeri being his new bond and Lamia safely alive after suffering so much. And it's not like he completely got over Lamia already and for her to be back, it must stir some emotions within him. >___< But he's also making it clear that Yeri is someone who means a lot to him and I know those two will eventually figure things out, despite Sehun's stubbornness. :')

Much love to you as well!! <3 Thank you for continuing Immortals until the end and I'm so excited to read the last chapter!! x]
luv_kero
2447 streak #2
Chapter 75: As much as I love Zeus, I definitely agree that he's waaaaay too stubborn and prideful whenever it comes to Hades. :') There's no need to let the rest of the world suffer because of a long-standing family feud, but being the King of Gods probably makes you feel like things HAVE to go your way or else. OTL I love your portrayal of Hades and how chill he is, LOOOOOL. XD And he's also a lot more polite here than other iterations make him out to be, which is super refreshing, and it's nice that Cordelia's prayers got acknowledged. ^^
123manju #3
Chapter 76: I really want to know how Jongin and Seulgi are doing. Especially with the fact that he can see. But wow I cannot believe this is coming to an end. I really enjoyed reading this story so much. It always brought up my mood after working the whole day. Thank you so much!
sweetdreamerz #4
Chapter 76: I've been re-reading this story so much that I've lost count of it by now. & I've never get bored of it
I wish you can add more chapters before it end. One chapter alone is definitely not enough.
I want to read more about the aftermath of the war especially about Baekhyun & Cordelia love life. (The war took most of their quality time that it left too little for romance). & if possible about their babies (coz I want at least 2 boys & 2 girls).
Reading this make me forget about my misery & stressful life. & I don't want to imagine that its gonna end with just one chapter (-_-).

By the way they are getting cuter & lovely these past chapters especially this one (^_^).
Rosezee_exol
#5
Chapter 76: Omg,omg,omggsgjshhdjcj.. the ending of this chapter is so cute I'm squealing. <3 ^-^
NinjaAngel #6
Chapter 75: Hi, I just came across this stories a few days ago and I want to let you know that this story is sooo amazing. I’ve read up to the latest chapter in just a few days. It’s hard to find such story with amazing plot and storyline as well as good command of English, especially one with Baekhyun in it. I’ll make sure to check your other stories. And thank you for devoting your time and energy in writing such great stories.
gogogirl26 #7
Chapter 75: Zeus always selfish, if only his ego wont wjn over him.
Rosezee_exol
#8
Chapter 75: Oh wow!! That was.. a piece of cake for Hades. Zeus should've asked for help earlier, lol!! :-D

Andddd.. Baekhyun has been sleeping like a log while all this happened. =_=

Ahhhh!! I really need some Baek x Cordelia scenes. (TT)

How many chapters have left, btw!?!?
luv_kero
2447 streak #9
Chapter 74: Wow, this turn of events was so unexpected and I'm so glad you decided to include it in the end. :) I never would've imagined that Melinoe had so much power, even though she is a goddess, and I love how Yeri also did something for Jongin as well. :') And good on Jaehyun for deciding to work towards achieving rebirth. ^^ I'd probably opt for the same result if I were him (but it's for completely existential reasons LOL). And omg, ahhhhhh, having little Hansol back in the picture, even for a little bit, made me so happy!! x] I've missed him so much since his death and I think it's so sweet that the first thing he wanted Yeri to do for him was absolve Baekhyun and Mark. They'll really appreciate hearing that, especially after the war. :')

But, omg, as if Soojung already weren't one of my favorite characters, this chapter made me love her even more and I feel like I can now confidently say that she IS my favorite character from Immortals!! :D When I think about it, I relate to her a lot when it comes to unrequited love and that didn't hit me until she was placed in the Mourning Fields. Granted, I don't think I'm wasting my life on unrequited love anymore (or I hope not, LOL) so I won't end up like Soojung did, but the sentiments are the same and I feel for her a lot. And I also hope that Soojung learns to wholly love herself and be proud of who she can be on her own as she goes through this new period of self-discovery. :)
hamsterboo
#10
Chapter 74: Aw thank you for the plug ;-;
gogogirl26 #11
Chapter 74: I've been reading till this last chapter in just two days... and i must say this really amazing story. Thankyou so much for writing such story! And im suggest song for this story is Lily from Alan walker. This totally having vibe on it. Its been long time im reading story about greek myth and surely i need to catch up with my knowledge about it. But its okay, you trigger me to learn it again :) i love all charachter here, they all just perfect! Thx again :)
Sey-ra
#12
Chapter 74: I love ur story.i not complaining tho but you seen to have a lot of yeri side story.i want more of the lead pair.
sealseulgi
#13
Chapter 73: oh no will yeri be like lamia
sweetdreamerz #14
Chapter 73: Oh my god!!! Have the girl gone mad?
tonnettie
#15
It's Liza Soberano. ohh
luv_kero
2447 streak #16
Chapter 73: I completely forgot that Cordelia and the rest were "normal" high school students at the beginning of the story until Cordelia compared dealing with the Otherworld politics to her assignments in school. ^^; Wow, it's been a crazy journey since then and there's still more to go. :O I totally understand her and Yeri (everyone, really LOL) feeling so out of it and kind of in disbelief with how the main battle against Issandra is finally over, but the overall war against Darkness still needs to end somehow. OTL But they just need to take things one at a time while they can and I'm glad Cordelia isn't rushing off to her next task, because it definitely wouldn't end well without proper rest and re-centering herself. >___<

ALSO, THE CLIFFHANGER HAS ME SUPER HYPED AHHHHH~~
Rosezee_exol
#17
Chapter 73: The cliffhanger. Sjdjdhdjdhs.. YERIIII IS POSSESED BY THAT GODDESS OF MADNESS AGAIN. OMG!!!!!

Also, I want more Cordelia x Baekhyun moments. T_T
nekochibi-chan
#18
Chapter 32: Smart girl telling them that she is on a friendly term with the Reaper
luv_kero
2447 streak #19
Chapter 72: I'm so excited you're back!! <3 I hope life has been treating you well this past year and there's no need to apologize about your absence!! Things happen, which is understandable, and hobbies fall to the wayside. But, at the very least, you're back and it's awesome that you've finished writing Immortals!! :D Super hyped to read the remaining updates and see how Cordelia's story concludes!! ^^

Anyway, Soojung's sacrifice made me so sad and I really wish she had been able to survive. T^T She's a character that I didn't expect to love as much as I did when she was first introduced and even until the end, she was charismatic and strong. At the very least, she prevented Yeri's death, which I'm thankful for, even though I wish it had come at a different price. Q___Q I'm so angry that Yeri's biological father would do that to her though. D< He's the worst and I'm so glad that Yeri was the one to end him. It wouldn't have felt right if anyone else had executed him and he doesn't deserve any of the honor he was working for.

BUT YOOOO, I WASN'T EXPECTING ISSANDRA TO END LIKE THAT. It was all so quick and unexpected with everything else that was going on, that I didn't think you'd throw in a THIRD death, not to mention arguably one of the most important deaths in this war, at the last second!! :O Wow, Cordelia did that so smoothly; I'm imagining the scene in my head and it's AWESOME. :')
gogogirl26 #20
Glad found this story! I will read it later.. thanks..