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kahazi
#1
Chapter 70: Wow ive finished reading all of this 69 chapters within 2 days .. and i might say this is amazing you could even make this to be a book
exonoah
#2
Chapter 26: ! She's a demigod????? I'm...Spazzing! Squealing like a dying goat!
exonoah
#3
Chapter 16: and Zeus plucked her eyes out? Oh? yes, it's the same Lamia I thought..XD no, I mean except you changed it a little bit.
exonoah
#4
Chapter 14: I only found this story after maybe you won the bid coz I saw the ad, hehe. So, "Why does Jongin wear the blindfold?"
Well because he's y with them? :p LOL sorry kidding. I mean, yeah, he's y anyway. But I think, he wears blindfold because...
Well is it like Basilisk and cockatrice thing? the death stare? Like, not fully imagine how it would be if I say, "I looked death in the eye and lived to tell the tale.." I think, people might actually die if they see him in the eyes. Like, he has this aura...this power emanating from him. HE is DEATH for sake! ok, not death, REAPER, but since he's called THE REAPER and not A REAPER, I think it kinda implies the semblance. P.S. He is iest so far tho, ugh I want to die just so he can come take me! And if I could really see him in the eye, my life is such a small price to pay! (provided my basilisk theory is correct.)
ooh ooh also, is the Lamia in your story the same Lamia who was Zeus wife? it could so much fun..but I dunno if she is.. She was just sleepless and mourning her children, thanks to Hera.
ShaHanimAljufry
#5
Chapter 70: I hope u can update faster cause I'm afraid that my memory about this whole plot twist and so many characters in this story will fade away n I don't want to read it from the beginning because it was tiring my brain lol. I'm not trying to pressure you thou
I'm in love with this fanfic . U r the best authornim
ShaHanimAljufry
#6
Chapter 62: So this is mean that yeri is Queen Yeri? Lol I cant brain. Yeri new soalmate is king sehun. To much to handle. But I love both of them so it's okay. I bet things will be awkward and weird. The 16 years old girl with just Turn couple of months ago is a new soalmate to a king of vampire that has life like a thousand years already. Wow just wow wow wow
loveNJ
#7
Chapter 15: So, she's Lamia ...?
loveNJ
#8
Chapter 14: Is it because anyone who made eye contact with him would ... Die ?
Since he's the reaper ..? No ..?
evelyeenwatson #9
This is really an amazing story.i had to finish all the chapters in one sitting. Wow.. T_T.. does anyone know the name of the lady in the poster?
Brekhna
#10
Chapter 14: Is kai blind
Ghad20
#11
Wow sounds amazing
I like the way you link all of these characters I love it ❤❤❤
Peripatetic
#12
That poster tho!!
kpop23
#13
ahh this seems so good so far! i'm excited to continue reading~
dborwin2309
#14
The description already had me sold but what pushed me over the edge is that my mums name is also Lamia ,... and the fact that the queens lover is sehun , perfect HAAHAHAH ,
KimmyNurry
692 streak #15
Congrats on winning the bid! ^^

p.s: I like the way you introduce your story!

p.p.s: Good luck and most of all have fun writing! :)
Dreamer_KatieM
#16
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Ikifahmy
#17
Chapter 70: oh my god, why have i not stumbled on this before?? this really the bomb!! hope for new chaps soon...love-iki
COriginal #18
Chapter 69: wow, omgord what. who, what, when, where, how? Ummmmm. Sooooooo. Im back?? After 3 long months???or something?? Um, what? So, really, you probably could care less, and I dont blame u :) but long story short: life is . I just couldn't for a bit :(. But im not gonna bore u!! Cause it's gucci rn so all I can say is I CAME BACK AND SO FAR THE 3 CHAPTERS I MISSED ARE REJUVENATING ME <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Okay, 67: at first, because i came back after a long period of time i was like, okay wow. Damn. Lotta words. Lotta different perspectives that i may or may not have payed specific, scrutinizing detail too. Great. But i went back, read 2x, to avoid another misunderstanding, and was like WOW. DAMN. Like tf, how could I miss these big plotlines???? Like i swear im slow asf. But basically, be4 67 I was like, okay so: Cassandra > then Alonya > then Cordelia. :) WELL IG NOT BISH. APPSRENTLY CASSANDRA HAD A SON FIRST WHO MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE HAD ALONYA?? i swear, i forgot a lot. And a hoe aint tryna search thru to get her facts straight. We here for a good time, not a correct time ^-^ No im just joking. Imma probs go back and read the entire damn book again to 1) get the family tree right and 2) JUST BECAUSE. WHY? CAUSE IT A MF GOOD BOOK. Which brings me to say omfgord. The way how you incorporate real greek figures into all of this is something my puny head would dream of. It's amazing. IT GIVES ME L I F E. Also your writing stule in general is so beautiful ;_; and i wish emojis were available here cuz these emoticons aint doing my reactions any justice. But fr, 67 was gold dammit.

68 and 69: So basically, calm before the storm. Anticipation is building up and i am stokeeeedddddd. I am very relieved to see all of my faves living in the daylight (or actuallt not really. Not atm) and I AM EXCITED. Also sometimes i forget that Taeyong is old himself. And the big fight. I cannot wait to see what goes down!!!! But Jacob Von Slinky or whatever, needa chill. Idk who he is but why he admamt on taking back Yeri? If its her ex-daddy, she dont want you!!!! She dont need you!!! But LMAO YES Cordelia still cordelia snd gives no s still. But overall, im in love. And im sorry for leaving my dear ole love. Its been iffy.

ALSO TRIS YOU AN AMAZING HUMAN BEING THAT IS VERY VALUED. AND THX SO MUCH <3 but yeah, xoming back to the author note about the sequeli stuff. First of all, girl you are amazing. You're great. You're SPECTACULAR. All the work youve done is more than enough. To do all this while Uni. is incredible. You've sure worked hard dear :) So idk. I'm fine with anything. Slow updates? I'll take it. That reception for Forever? Have no idea what that means but im fine with it as long as u fine with it amiga. Despite my disappearance for the while, just know you'll always have a fan behind you :)
Chisanai99
#19
Chapter 70: With every chapter I prepare myself for a big finale. Cordelia just gets more and more badass ;D
Seeing Jongin as super protective dad is so funny but at the same time this reminded me how much I miss our Thunder Pack squad and Seulgi ;(
But anyway:) keep doing good work and dont worry- take your time author-nim <3