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CassieSoneElfShawol
#1
Chapter 53: I was wondering if Cordelia should trust the snake because you know snakes.... and the snake warned Cordelia to not trust any of its kin so I'm not completely sure that the snake won't betray or trick Cordelia. Thank you for the update! It's my first day for intern and I'm feeling slightly better after having to read your story HAHAHA Have a nice day!
scarlettbaek
#2
Chapter 52: And I'm definitely in for the sequel!!! ^^ it's amazing how you have all of this(your stories) planned out before-hand!
scarlettbaek
#3
Chapter 52: THIS CHAPTER IS SERIOUSLY SO CUTE I'M DYING ASDFGHJKL I FEEL YA ALPHA BYUN!1!1!1 ;;;;
ilikecheese
#4
Chapter 52: YAS
SarangRae
#5
Chapter 52: "Shut up and let me bask in this moment!" they're so cute ugh mate is always so cute and fluffy and cuddly hhhnnnnnnngggg (also look at Joohyun trying to gauge Junmyeon's reaction in order to accommodate support)

Oh god as soon as I read "especially Mark" bit about the pups and trouble, I got this awful worry that he's gonna do something with good intention but endanger himself and/or the people around him. Him saying "What if we want to go to?" (btw should be *too) I just aaahhhh please stay s a f e

As for the OC-centric-ness of the sequel, I think there's definitely a risk of "will people still be interested?" but I've seen this artist on Instagram gain a following from this entire AU based on Mystic Messenger (this Korean mobile game) and her characters are all OC children of the game characters. So yeah, it's possible to still keep some interest from the original setting.
CassieSoneElfShawol
#6
Chapter 51: Is there any possibility that Lamia will still end up together with Sehun though? I really hope to see more of their moments knowing that they were once soulmates.
CassieSoneElfShawol
#7
Chapter 51: Yes please HELL YEAH I FREAKING WANT IT oh god I want to know Taeyong's thought process, seems like it will be interesting to know what he is thinking of because the difference between his behavior and the rest during the ride with Jongdae. Give me anything related to this story I WILL SUBSCRIBE AND READ IT!
Mikinnou
#8
Chapter 51: A couple that lost their soulmates? Hm, I am sure Yeri is one of them and I would say Taeyong but I don't remember him losing his soulmate so maybe Sehun?
Mikinnou
#9
Chapter 51: HELL YEACH I FREAKING ING WANT IT
meinri
#10
Chapter 51: HELL YEAH I FREAKING WANT IT.
SarangRae
#11
Chapter 51: Waaaaiiitttt 'human niece'. Jongdae can't be Jiyeon's legit uncle unless her parents are (or at least one of them) are ancient too. Are they??? But damn, Jongdae so... (I want to say irritating or something but uh hahaha) to have a law written up just for him. He sure is something.

HEYY LEAH, I FREAKING WANT IT
Chisanai99
#12
Chapter 51: HELL YEAH I FREAKING WANT IT SO BAD !!!!
Yerinator #13
Chapter 51: HELL YEAHHHHHHGG I FREAKING WANT IT
Angel14 #14
Chapter 51: YOOOO HELLL YEAHHHHHHHH
fruace #15
Chapter 51: PLEASE DO A SEQUEAL!!!!!! i love this story sooo much so please continue with it!! also....is the couple going to be yeri and sehun since they both lost their soulmates? or will it be someone else with the future chapters to come m? im so excited!!
Sey-ra
#16
Chapter 51: wow that was a surprise Cordelia has a nieces and Baekhyun and Cordelia sequel i cant wait.
Chisanai99
#17
Chapter 50: When Jongdae appeared the first thing that came to my mind was ,,Suprise , I bet you didnt see the last of me" :)) i love that drama seeker <3
SarangRae
#18
Chapter 50: fricking Jongdae hahahahaha
Sey-ra
#19
Chapter 50: Aww kim jongdae either he is good or bad i just love his character.
fruace #20
Chapter 49: i think soojung is upset b/c sehun and lamia has always been her ideal couple. considering she hasnt found her misi psychi yet and jongin is with seulgi, its probably heartbreaking her to see that sehun and lamia are no longer bonded