Chapter 45: rip Jiyeon. fashion style questioned by a child and then into an other-worldly (and Otherworldly) war as an informant and spy, first by her own uncle and then by a random group of teenage werewolves....
Woohoo Tri! Betas and editors are so cool. Like it's hard enough to sort out your own thoughts as a writer, but having to sort out someone else's thoughts can be difficult too. And then there's the possibility of clashing opinions and styles etc... But hooray for creative collaborations!
Chapter 44: Power MV was so confusing, they did some kind of parody of their powers (MAMA FLASHBACK WAR!!!) but I had a smile on my face for the entire time so I give it 10/10 (and that last Baek scene...)
About the filler, it may seems a little bit annoying and sorry if it is but I would really like to see Yeri being friends again with Jungook and also some family moments beetween Yeri, Jongin, Seulgi and Taeyeong. Greek stories are really interesting and they are building up the whole story!
And maybe I would like to see some small bonding moment or interaction beetween Joohyun and Junmyeon since they are mates (and since they are my ultimate ship for life<3)
Whatever you decide to write- I will be happy! I love your style and concept of writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapters<3333
Chapter 44: The mentioning of school in the beginning had me feeling anxious lol School's starting again next week and I SO don't want that. Save me pls
By the way, I had thought Jiyeon would actually be a demigod, too. So she's supposed to be a full human? I had never expected for Jongdae to be the one to have sent her like....dude XD It makes one wonder just what he really tries to obtain. It doesn't solely seem like information anymore. I've been getting headaches lately from thinking too much about too many things. I think I'm just gonna stop trying to figure out things in this story and let the things come to me lol I have no concentration whatsoever lately anyway. (But I'm wondering if Cordelia will actually cast a truth spell on her like mentioned before to be able to get the real information out of her.)
I can only agree with Cordelia though. The gods make everything unnecessarily complicated.
Additionally, I wanted to say that I finally remember what Kyrios makes me think of. (I don't know if I had even mentioned that before XD) Anyway, I just remembered that there was also a character in One Piece called Kyros and the similiarity in the name nagged at the back of my mind the whole time and I finally remembered why. It's not important to you at all to know that but I'm just happy I finally got this out of my head lol
About the fillers you're asking for: I'd like to see more of you bringing in mythology. I really enjoy reading that. I just really want fillers lol or if possible, just write some bonus chapters. If possible.
And yes, the MV killed me, but from laughing. I thought it was ridiculously funny. It's cool though, but still funny to me lol
xo Tatari
(It's annoying me that the last comments and this one are so....empty, you could say? My brain is mushy lately and totally doesn't work the way I want it to. And I need to get back to studying now -.- I really don't want to XD Does anyone in your story happen to have the power of stopping time, pleeeaase? I'd even be willing to pray to Chronos to freeze time for a while lol)
Chapter 43: Okay, I feel like I'm missing out on something in this chapter. Something about what Issandra really meant when she was disappointed with Alyona. I can't seem to access all the information in the back of my head and I hate it XD
Also, I think I understand what you mean with "give you a heart attack if you're reading into it negatively." It's about Yixing, isn't it? I don't really know, but Yeri's thoughts about all of them made me wonder that. There's just too little known about him and I guess it would be a turn of events if he turned out to be the true head of the Coven of Darkness lol I'm far-fetching right now, aren't I?
But something I wanted to say, too, was that I think that you write Yeri the best out of all characters. I can understand her way of thinking, calculating and feeling the best out of everyone. You write her so nicely :)
Soo, just one more chapter left to read now.
Chapter 42: Okay, so I haven't read in I-don't-know-how-long (maybe since I last commented...which is almost two months ago...? Idfk lol) and I honestly have to say I'm confused. But I'm not even sure what the hell I'm confused about.
I just realized with this chapter, though, that I have to read up Greek mythology again, because I totally cannot remember the Trojan war, but I remember things like Paris and the Golden Apple and Aphrodite cheating on her husband with someone (though I don't remember who that was) and him setting up a trap to catch her, but instead caught himself lol I just remember random things I read about and it seriously makes me want to regain what I had forgotten about Greek mythology.
Anyway, I was really confused in the beginning of the explanations to the Coven of Darkness because I confused Cassandra with Issandra and just felt like none of it made sense. I had to reread this chapter to understand lol
Also, I loved the change of Cordelia. She's getting more badass lately. I laughed hard at the indication of a when Baek brought Jiyeon to her lol so random, I didn't expect a joke from Cordelia like that :D she never striked me as the kind of person to make a more obscene joke lol It seems like she's slowly getting comfortable with Baek to make jokes like that. I can't imagine her doing that around the time they first met.
I wanted to say more, but sadly I don't remember much in detail of the last 5-8 chapters I had read a few days ago, but I found it quite funny that you're uploading right now while I'm trying to catch up to the latest chapter lol I didn't look at the number, but I think I only have two more left, right?
Well, I'll leave another comment anyway if there's something left for me to say.
Until then :)
xo Tatari
PS: I'm not sure if it was you, but have you posted in the feed (some time back) that you would need to rethink/rewrite some things because of something about religious aspects? What was that about? (If I'm confusing you with someone else, just ignore this bit lol)
Chapter 44: Wait how old is Kyungsoo again? Hahahah that smirk with the glasses omg
I wonder if Yubin ever actually enjoyed spending time with Hyesun before... seeing some flashbacks of the two of them before sh*t hit the fan might be nice. Otherwise I'm curious to see Cordelia hanging out with the pups to see how much they like her in the pack.
Chapter 44: I'm REALLY enjoying this story. I love the way you've shaped Cordelia's character and wrote her growth and changing personality. The "Little Giant" aspect of Baekhyun and subverting the alpha cliche by having him be a beta was refreshing and really fun to read.
My one complaint is: "[Hades has] always wanted a place on the mountain." I studied the Classics all throughout college and had a focus on Greco-Roman mythology and it's always irked me when Hades is painted as a villain. Even though he's the ruler of the Underworld, he had influence on Earth as well. The only reason why he was ever disliked was because he's a super stickler for the rules of the Underworld and is (almost) relentless in keeping them {and only Persephone could convince him to bend them [e.g. Orpheus and Eurydice]}. People made their most important oaths on his name knowing he'd super punish the one who broke them and was often called "Zeus of the dead". My recommendation for an edit would be to replace Hades with either Eris (goddess of strife; the slightest insult would set her off and girl would LOVE to up) or Melinoë (the bringer of nightmares and madness; she's the daughter of Persephone and either Hades or Zeus-disguised-as-Hades. Either way, she has a short temper but just wants to be LOVED. I have no doubt Issandra's posse could twist that into their favor.)
Anyways, totally unnecessary and excessive opinion but just wanted to throw in my two cents. In the end, it's your story and you do you. I and many others will love it all the same.
Chapter 43: weLL GUESS WHOS LATE TO THE PARTY AGAIN ??? ???? hint, it's the person writing this. But fr tho I use my phone and actual browser to go on this site hence why I always forget that I do infACT HAVE AN AMAZING BOOK WAITING FOR ME THAT UPDATES AND PROBABLY DID UPDATE LIKE 3 TIMES IN THE SPAN THAT I'VE BEEN GONE but anyways
I just finished the past 3 chapters in like a blur, with me just finishing the last chp, and will now comment on the chpters and what is still in my mind.
ALSO SWEARING IS USED. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED
1) THEY HAVE KIDS. NOT ONE. BUT TWO. KIDS. K8DSA. PROBABLY ADORABLE KIDS WITH GOOD VISUALS. WHO I SAY, ARE CLOSE TO YERI. YKNOW WHAT THAT MEANS??? MEANS YERI AND CORDELIA WILL BE CLOSE TO EACHOTHER IN THE FUTURE or yknow might not. But makes sense because with all the threats in Cordelia's life, she's not gonna want strangers or acquaintances to be around her children. She'll prob want people who she knows won't be snakes (like a certain ex-friend).
2) Cordelia's family just got wayyyy more complicated. And even I, a Greek Mythology enthusiast( who really isn't because I don't know about Greek Myths except for the Gods. I know, im fake. But im trying. And this book, which is the plug, is helping me with just that. WHICH RELATES TO MY NEXT PT) can see.
3) YOU ARE AWESOME. IDK WHAT IT IS, BUT THIS STORYLINE IS OFF THE FREAKING CHARTS. LIKE OML,,, DID U STUDY GREEK MYTHOLOGY OR SOMETHING?? OR DID U JUST LOOK UP EVERYTHING AND EVERYTHING AND PUT IT ALL TOGETHER. BECAUSE CHEEZUS, THIS IS GOLD like no joke, with the scene that Cordelia is reading those books, and like just the whole book itself, it all ties in into some greek myth. Big or small. And then u tie that greek myth into the actual characters lives. Like with Taeyong and Cassandra. And my small brain registers that this must've been a lot of work. Unless Im overreading things and this was a piece of cake because u actually know greek myths in and out. But its really fun and interesting to see all these different myths.
4) okay, now that Ive gotten the hype outve me, lets us all take a moment of silence for the ship Jungri
CUZ THAT IS DEAD
or atleast docked atm because rn is obvi not the time for romance. Especially since JK was actually a rat. (Who actually really isnt but still isss) But yknow what? I expected it. I knew he still cared for Yeri and stuff, but I was just like, JK is a loyal man. He must still be loyal to Jin and them, who ultimately, are much closer to JK than Yeri was. But yknow, I liked the way how he was exposed and that he actually is trying to make and effort in trying to see Yeri uNLIKE A EX-BROTHER. And also we get to see a little glimpse on hiw yeris ex family is doing. Still being a douche, I see. (Cough, le father, cough)
6) also can we get another moment of silence for jaehyun and all those sad thoughts that yeri had about him. i cri everytime
7) ALSO MY BOI BECAME ALPHA INSTEAD OF THE POWER.HUNGRY STANK CHANYEOL ! WHOOP WHOOP (firetruck) !!!
8) also who is Jiyeon supposed to be?? Like idol wise? Which jiyeon is thisss
9) i swear I make no sense in all these 9 paragraphs i just typed. I was hyped, and was like these last 3 chpts were bomb asf so imma make an essay. Which I am sorry about because they probably dont make sense and I swore in atleast all of em. And i think this was everything I wanted to talk about
10) WAIT A MINUTE. NOPE NOT OVER. LIKE DID YALL SEE MY GIRL SLUGGIE BE LIKE TO JK, YERIS OURS NOW. TELL HER FATHER HE AINT SEEING HER UNLESS HE WANNA MESS WITH LADY MIDNIGHT AND THE REAPER. ALSO HOW EARLIER JONGIN WAS LIKE READY TO PUT JK 6 FEET UNDER IF HE REALLY WAS STILL GONNA KILL YERI and idk if my speculations on these moments r correct but I sure do think so. I also wonder how Yeris father is gonna react to her newfound parents. Terribly, I pressume.
Also that Yeri and Cordelia team up at the end. Like woo-ee. Things gettin more interesting, with the two main girls finally now getting together
Chapter 43: kyaaaah nooo I didn't intend to binge read but finished reading this in like 3 days. Your book is so so good! I imagine this being a series that has the possibility of being published ? keep up the good work authornim!
Chapter 43: The thing that tick me off is when Yixing spoke about the possibility that Issandra wasn't the real master mind.. And for some reason, Yixing gave me a weird vibe, almost negative XD It made me think and maybe he is the one behind it all. Or for a bigger plot twist it could Jongdae or someone else we don't know of. And maybe someone manipulated Issandra into killing Alyona... Or I'm just overthinking too much XD
Chapter 43: i dont know if this was mentioned in other chapters but alonya trained issandra?? seems very sketchy im sure a back story will be coming as to who exactly issandra is. i dont wanna make any guess without her appearing more, shes very mysterious. anyway im super tired tho so maybe this was mentioned before
Chapter 42: First of all, her vision has me sHOOK. OH MY GOD THEY HAVE TWO KIDS THIS IS SO CUTE AGSGAHAH I WANNA HAVE KIDS WITH BAEKHYUN TOO--
UMMmm erase that, so moving on, holy molly this chapter sort of filled in all the gaps and confusion I was having and also Cordelia's family background and wtf Baek is the aLPHA LET THAT SINK IN ES HE IS SO HOT ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS HIM LOOKING Y WITH THE ALPHA AURA OOZING OUT FROM HIM SOMEONE STOP ME I'M RAMBLING
i'm seriously getting interested into the whole greek thingy thanks to this fic I just hope Cordelia's vision comes to true(it obviously will, right?!) maybe peace will settle but we all know how heavy of a price we have to pay just to have "peace"
anyways aside from the heavy stuff, the fluff killed me and thAT KISS IN THE END BAEKHYUN WHY ARE YOU SO ROOD
ASDFGHJKL BYE
Chapter 42: After this chapter, I am left with the question- what will make Yeri this strong as you described ?;)
But O MY GOD I was good with Greek mitolgy and reading this is helping me remember all the thing I learned in school!
I am super duper excited to see the Council meeting (mainly cuz od my Yeri x Jungkook ship^_^). I really wonder what will happen<33
Ahh, waiting can be tiring but in the end is worth it! <3
Chapter 42: Greek Mythology... Wowww. I think I just got educated. But too many info & too fast. I'm getting dizzy here. Never knew it was that complicated. I need time to absorb all this informations. But I understand that this part of story is important for the story development. So it's fine.
But other than that, this is a good chapter (^_^). We got to see Cordelia's & Baekhyun cute little family. That little girl is gonna break million hearts when she grew up. & I can't wait to read the chapter about the council meeting. How would everyone react to Alpha Byun.... I really can't wait (^_^).
Chapter 42: thIS is why I'm not studying classics in uni despite taking it in high school. If I were putting this into modern context, everyone is related to half their Facebook friends list and ing the other half, or maybe even ing their relatives (I'm looking at you, Oedipus...) and it just causes too much drama. No one can keep their hands to themselves, not Zeus, not humans. If someone isn't ing someone else, they're probably kidnapping or killing someone.
Chapter 42: chapter 41: i think the one cassandra truly loved is kyrios, her son. love comes in all forms and future cordelia never stated it was romantic love. plus if cassandra truly loved achilles i dont think she would try to kill him...idk tho. the part that just stands out most to me is that "only your blood can find it" just makes me think that its only herself canf ind the chest since cordelia is descendent of kyrios. just my thoughts lol
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