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V0UZMEVOYEZ
#1
Chapter 25: MOM SEULGI I AM WHIPPED 4 THIS STORY
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 25: Jaehyun is just so whipped ;w; But I hope he and Yeri can get along. She doesn't need to be so anti-love. Jongin and Seulgi are freaking powerful on their own, and they still became a couple. Hum... Tho I kinda understand what Yeri is thinking... Maybe she can at least be friends -really friends- with Jaehyun. Having a tru friend will not hurt (I think xD).

... Seulgi's is really such a mom to Yeri, isn't she? -run- (but I totally ship this family. Jongin, Seulgi and their adopted child Yeri <3 -run-) And freak. I don't know but I felt like things went down when Seulgi told Jaehyun to get Soojung. xD
hunhansolo
#3
Who's the model in the poster?
V0UZMEVOYEZ
#4
Chapter 24: S C R E A M I N G
baekhyun and hyesun are my precious children i love them
Chisanai99
#5
Chapter 23: My Jungri feels:)
ZeAnonymousWriter
#6
Chapter 24: lololololololol i didnt scream aND YOU CANT CALL BULL ON THAT HA.

(<3 the chapter)

i need sleep :)
scarlettbaek
#7
Chapter 24: Let my ship sail peacefully ya esss
scarlettbaek
#8
Chapter 24: OMG I AM SCREAMING!1!1!1 FINALLY SOME HYESUN X BAEKHYUN MOMENT. OMFG THE ATTRACTION BETWEEN THEM IS KILLING ME, THE TENSION OMG I JUST WANT BAEK AND HER TO KISS AND END THE MISERY ASDJJS LMAO
SarangRae
#9
Chapter 24: tbh I'm laughing at your A/N more than I'm screaming hahahaa I'm happy she's comfortable babysitting the pups. I'd feel really awkward in her position, even with the inherent authority of being the Beta's misi psyche..... Or maybe it's just cos I'm personally not good with kids ^^;
Emilieee
#10
Chapter 24: IM SCREAMING TOO AND SHIPPING IT

Jongdae scares me though omg I feel like he's being a troll but he's also really old and wise and I don't know???
SarangRae
#11
Chapter 23: ...and now it's 5am but I'm up to date
SarangRae
#12
Chapter 13: Hey, new reader here! I've never read a wolf!verse fic where Chanyeol is alpha and it makes sense cos he's really not level-headed enough for it hahaha yikes.
I feel bad for Baek and Yeri...
Maeri_
#13
Chapter 23: Yayyyyy thx for updating authornim ^^ I'm loving the Chem between baek and hyesun:))) it's cheesy but not really but it's cute jdjsjkxjd idk how to say it <3 kkeke hwaitinggg ;)
V0UZMEVOYEZ
#14
Chapter 23: i enjoyed this so much. i'd probably write a paragraph abt this chapter but i'm putting some serious revisions off,,, accidentally rereading this entire fic oops
ZeAnonymousWriter
#15
Chapter 23: <3
jesyra #16
Chapter 23: Very interesting. I enjoyed it a lot. I'm so glad Hyesun and Baek's relationship is going well and that they are both opening up to each other. Ahh, Jungkook finally makes an appearance agaib~

There's so much to look forward to in this fic. Thank you for the update!
zan8901
#17
Chapter 23: Another vision. Interesting. Baekhyun's attraction towards Hyseun is quite adorable. And yay! Some backstory on the Soojung, Jongin and Seulgi situation. Though i'm excited to learn how Seulgi and Soojung became best friends. LMAO when Baek laughed at Jungkook I lowkey snorted. Savage. The Hyesun x Baekhyun ship is slowly beginning to sail and I'm loving it,
hankat
#18
OMG ITS LIZAAA
Maeri_
#19
Chapter 22: HAIIIIII authornim ^^ im a new subscriber and im tots loving this fic. It's prolly cuz im a reverse harem stan {n Sehun is my ultimate bias BAEEEEE <3} but i'm secretly hoping Hyesun is Lamia and Sehun falls in love with her. But I'm merely reminding you that it's just something i want ;) [reference to Jongin and Sehun's cute convo. The bromance between Sehun and Jongin is just too adorable ughh i cant even.] Anyway, Dank chu for writing diz bootipuul fic and HWAITINGGGGGGGGG imma support u till the end authornim ^^
isaisy
#20
Chapter 22: Hello, i rushed to read from the start and i missed out a lot... God damn, I pray hard that Hyesun is not the reincarnation of Lamia, but i just can't help that to think that she is. Gosh, it's totally frustating to try guessing things but its fun! hehe I can't help myself to got pissed off with Chanyeol's attitude sometimes... it's just.... annoying? I see myself will comment a lot like "i can't help" "i guess..." i hope you can cope with that ^^v I really like how you build up things, the politics, conflicts, they revealed one by one and not confusing (at least for me) also Baekhyun and Hyesun's relation build in slowpace which i prefer ^^ she's pretty much knew nothing so it's a little bit unrational if she immediately heads over hell towards baek. Oh, I am really appreciate how you use idol's real name, i got fooled with Sooyoung (my brain worked so slow, you literally hinted Joohyun and Seungwan from RV and yet i imagining SNSD Sooyoung), Mark (I legit though, "i really can't picture Mr. Tuan with childish demeanor" and then i remember my hardworking little bro Mark Lee) & Sunyoung. Over all this is one precious, Gold story you have, and I can't tone down my Hype for future chapters! I want to know about Lady Midnight tho ;) Thank you for sharing us this very very A+ class (are those even words?) story. Take your time on updating :D Nice to meet you authornim! And please excuse my broken english! :D have a nice day~~

oh and your poster is cool. I luv Yeri! (and our Mighty Reaper)