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isaisy
#1
Chapter 38: this chapter is like the most anticipated chapter for me, you know, interaction between the two main girls, hyesun/cordelia finally meeting baekhyun, taeyong being a brother figure, seulgi's subtle motherly act, this is what i subscribed for!! (okay that's overreacted but kyaaaa >.<) when she said something about snakes, in my head, the onmy thing that appeared was, "pa...parsel....parsel-tongue ability?". Honestly, i really want to share theory or guesses, but you know, my old brain is heated up with my real life problems, my brain can not quickly connecting this hint to that hint /yeah so lame/ BUT i pretty sure everyone want yeri ended up with sehun -- but don't forget we have jungkook who already with her since day 1 u,u

this album's tracklist is lit a f im not kidding exodus was fire but this album is a bomb! personally i like forever, chill and going crazy ;D thanks guys for updating! i am #teamSuho for alpha battle ㅎㅎ
fruace #2
Chapter 38: chap 37: OMG okay heres my theory: we already know that sehuns effect on lamia has disappeared and she has become blood thirsty once again so im thinking that means they are no longer mates (maybe due to the fact she was dead and that shes in sooyoungs body) and as we kno jaehyun has died :(((( and at the end of this chapter despite sehuns greatness it said that yeri still felt worried abt him perhaps bc the bond has already begun since both have met already idk thats what im hoping HunRi are my ults so i would love to see that :)
COriginal #3
Chapter 38: Okay but Yeri totally moved on (not got over it, but simply focused/distracted herself) from Jaehyun's death better than I did lmaooo. Also can I just get a hallelujah for that small TaeRi moment and a late toast to their budding friendship and newfound sibling relationship. But now onto my theories!! So I have many theories. But first I want to ask, will Yeri acquire new abilities/powers in the future? I know (or think, I can't remember the process. But based on my past thinking: ) Yeri can't acquire any powers the normal Vampire way. It's too late for that. But maybe through a God, like Chanyeol? And I know you probably won't tell me but oh well. It was worth a try. And this all relates to my theories you see. So 1) Either Yeri finds love with Jungkook, or ends up marrying Sehun and becomes Queen. But this seems far fetched... 2) Sehun ends up dying to reunite with Lamia and Yeri becomes Queen herself because she has some great power or something. Because I don't think Yeri could become Queen as a normal vampire when there is Jongin and Seulgi who can rule. 3) Sehun gives Yeri his powers. This one came out of nowhere, it's just a random thought. 4) Yeri kills Sehun because he's actually a naughty bean. This one also came from nowhere.... 5) Sehun becomes Yeri's new mate. And this one came to mind because you said yourself that Aphrodite can take pity on you and bless you with a new one. And honestly with all that's been happening with Sehun and Lamia, Aphrodite better give him a sorry basket or something. Also poor Yeri never got to deeply know Jaehyun Smh. 6) Sehun adopts Yeri instead of Seulgi and Jongin. Which leads her to become Queen. Idk with this one tho... 7) Sehun kills Yeri for whatever reason. This one seems plausible?.... 8) Sehun is actually related to Yeri through her mother because she was secretly something magical!1!1!1 okay now I'm grasping straws. But this is basically all I got.... I'm sure I'll think of some other theory (seeing as y'all got me hooked) and I'll be sure to share...
sweetdreamerz #4
Chapter 38: Hi there lovely author (^_^). Sorry for taking too long to drop my thought here. & thanks for this chapter. I'm sad because of the death of Jaehyun, but I can't help myself to cheer for Baekhyun & Hyesun sweet reunion (^_^). & I have a very important questions. I can't stop thinking about it so I really wish for an answer.
1. WHY can Baekhyun be appointed to be the Alpha of the pack? Both of the Alpha are not stable/suitable enough to lead the pack. Beside, Baek actually, practically already lead the pack all this while. So, I really didn't get it. Why can't he have the 'Alpha' title?
2. I want to know how/what is their dynamic role in the pack? I mean, is this like most of a/b/o concept where they're born to be alpha, beta & other(omega? Sorry I'm not sure this story have any omega & I'm too lazy/sleepy to read from the beginning right now) or the Alpha & Beta title in this story just something they gain for their strength, intelligence or family rank?
3. I might remember it wrong, so please correct me if I do. In the 'Little Giant' chapter they acknowledged Chanyeol for his said sacrifice to save sooyoung. He received his blood gift which I believe the reason beside the challenge with Jumyeon, why they gave him the tittle Alpha. But they did nothing for Baekhyun courageous act. He didn't just save all of them but he even managed to kill all the vampire alone as a child & left unharmed. From my view, what he did is bigger than chanyeol, he deserved some recognition for it. & I believe even the reaper believe so. He even evaluate him as a future leader (I really want him to be the one). But WHY everybody else including himself against the idea?
IF it is really the fate like Baekhyun believe, well then, I'll pray for the miracle. Hyesun is gaining more power now & more enemies as soon as they all know about her. Baekhyun needs to be as powerful & as strong as she is to keep up with her. He needs the pack strength to help protect her. & he will only fully able to do it if he is the pack Alpha.
I'll look forward for your next chapter & I hope it will be soon enough. I hope things will only get better for Baekhyunnie & Hyesun.

I haven't listen to all their song yet. I've been too busy this week. I'll decide after I finish (^_^).
scarlettbaek
#5
Chapter 38: LOL okay so in the span of your last update and this one, i've officially become an NCTzen and Jaehyun is my bias LOL(followed by Taeyong, Ten and Jonhnny) so I was a bit reluctant to read this chapter because I knew it was going to be a tad heavy for me (considering tHAT WITCH KILLED ME BABY BOI)
I love Hyesun, or Cordelia (her name sounds beautiful btw does it have a meaning?)
Poor Yeri, who just met him recently and having to have gone through that trauma T_T stay strong baby girl <33
And the exchange between Baekhyun and Hyesun was absolutely adorable ahshhahaa (where do I sign up to get a mate? wELP) I lOVE AND SHIP THEM SO MUCH!1!1! At this rate i'm honestly craving for more exchange between them(which is probably going to happen soon hopefully) #BaekSun #HyunHye #BaekHye #BaekCor (this one sounds weird LMAOO XDD) Baekhyun looked so badass when he drove that jeep (HE IS SO HOT OMG)
Okay, sorry for rambling, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! The showdown is going to be dope!
<333
COriginal #6
Chapter 37: *sighs* Looks like more (awaited) drama is going to go down. And you dont even know how excited I am for the future fights! But also I wish you a late yet happy anniversary!! Like you don't even know (again Lmao) how much I love this book! (Even if you killed my baby #ripJaehyun) I really appreciate all the effort that you and your beta has done and I hope to see and admire it even more in the future~ Your dedication to this book is also quite amazing and astonishing seeing as I usually always lose interest (or am too lazy to update) in my fanfics. And I sincerely hope that you do well irl. Like your health and such. But I really do want you to know Author, that I absolutely love your book and is a complete fan. :) (P.S can I just quickly add in that your writing skills are A M A Z I N G. Like, I didn't even see the unedited ver. but I bet it was still flawless. And P.P.S, Congrats to your beta for getting a job!! I am no where near that stage of life yet but I heard it can be quite a pain. So I wish her or him for the best in their future!)
Lina_Love
#7
Chapter 37: Is it weird that I want Sooyoung to stay as herself and King Sehun falling for her? :P XD
SarangRae
#8
Chapter 37: Congrats to your beta! I should start looking for part time work again hahaha I have a casual job but I'd like regular hours... And congratulations to you for your one year anniversary :D

The last line aawwww a strong couple who knows their other half is strong and trusts their capabilities <3
isaisy
#9
Chapter 37: Yeaaay double-update! It's been a hectic life of Baekhyun, he should have loosen up a bit. You know, prior to this chapter i have hard time imagining The Reaper and Lady Midnight as a badass couple, can you see them being tender, soft for Yeri and Baek? Okay maybe Jongin wasn't appear that soft or tender but he seems kinder/softer to Baekhyun >.< Can't wait for Baek x Hyesun meeting, Yeri x Hyesun having convos, and i am lowkey want to see Taeyon comforting/babying Yeri hehehehe I ask too much ._.v Claps for Triiiiiiiii! Hope you'll have fun with works ^^ Thanks Reya for the double update! :D
isaisy
#10
Chapter 36: Did...did you just....kill (urgh i got no other choice of words) Jaehyun? Did he die? Yeri just slowly accepted himmmmmm :'( Oh you know when i finally grasp the abctual place they're heading to, i proudly smile like a stupid girl, "damn, chapter 35 and the two main girl finally meeting each other!!" No sad feeling for Yubin, excuse me ;) But wait, back to first question, did jaehyun die? we lost him?
COriginal #11
Chapter 36: HOLD ON. HOLD THE FLIPPING ON. DID... DID MY BABY JUST DIE?? DID MY BABY, MY BABY JAEHYUN JUST DIE!?!?!? WHO. I'M ASKING WHO DID IT BECAUSE THIS IS WHERE THEY MESSED UP. AJSJGKKDH JAERI IS NOW FLIPPING DEAD. I REPEAT, THEY ARE DEAD. JUST LIKE MY BABY
meinri
#12
Chapter 36: DID JAEHYUN DIE?

And more like I'm waiting for the chapter where Baekhyun flips the world for Cordelia.
scarlettbaek
#13
Chapter 36: Oh things are getting more exciting!! Hyesun aka Queen Cordelia is a badass! I'm soooo looking forward to her transformation! ;-; Jaehyun please don't be hurt.
Oh and btw so Soojung, Seulgi and Jongin all share a history? LMAOO i'm sorry i'm kinda ignorant when it comes to other characters
wolfie503
#14
Chapter 36: There are so many heartwarming moments here actually lol..i really like taeyong character here,hope he is not a bad character and seulgi seems has already fond of yeri huh...and cordelia though,badass..she just killed all the girls without hard feelings

I really like this chapter ^^ im happy
Yerinator #15
Chapter 36: Ok I'm lost whats going on
SarangRae
#16
Chapter 36: So. Many. Things. In this chapter make me happyh hahahaha

1. Taeyong dropping the adoption bomb basically like "wassup, sis?"
2. Seulgi pretending she doesn't care about Yeri and that she's only adopting her to make life difficult for Van Helsing but then brushing her hair as she wakes up :')
3. Yeri not handling satyr!Minseok, and gushing over ancient items
4. Sassy and blunt Cordelia just in general
5. The fact that I can't pick a favourite line of dialogue from Cordelia
Ack-fox1
#17
Chapter 36: Are Joohyun and Seungwan Okay??? O_O
Feryal #18
Chapter 14: OH MY ING GOD!!!! seulgi's husband is jongin!!!!? I CAN DIE FROM OVERLOADING HAPPINESS!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! I was dying to know if her husband is kai!! MY SHIP IS SAILING HERE!!
wardiah_
#19
Thanks for the update! I love it^^
SarangRae
#20
Chapter 35: JONGIN MAKING A DAD JOKE <3 I LOVE!! Also Junmyeon practically said "My father will hear about this." ahahahah omfg

Baekkie aawww. I feel like he's the closest thing to a proper leader figure their pack has right now, and being a second-in-command is still a leadership position, so Jongin was right. Baekhyun is a leader, technically as like a second-tier leader, but he also has qualities of a head leader. As long as he uses those qualities, his instinct and initiative, that's the only thing that matters.