Chapter 34: I am ready to see how the power will get to Cordelia's head. I am also ready to see Baekhyun and the Thunder Run pack afraid of her. I guess I'm rather sadistic, but fear comes with power and being a hero like you said. An even if she weren't a demigod hero, she's still tied to a pack, so I'd expect there to be some sort of challenge she would be forced to face. I think anyone with power needs some form of vulnerability to stay sane because it's a part of them. You can't cover it up. It's cathartic to have a big cry anyway.
I'm expecting a struggle for her to reign in control. It would be unrealistic otherwise considering how new to literally everything she is.
Chapter 34: aah i feel bad for hyesun :( the first time she met her mom and the time was limited. i missed my mom, i wish i can be back at home this week :(
Yes, i agree. she's been tough, with tons of new information, the adjustment needed to the Underworld, she endured so much. It's saaaad :'(
ME! ME! I'm ready for Baekhyun!! It's been a long time! I miss Baekhyun x Hyesun moments >.< I' supee curious about Baekhyun's reaction later when Hyesun (well, if Hyesun want to tho) share the all brand new (music lol) information. ^^ Thank you for updating! Have a good day :D
Chapter 34: I WASN'T READY FOR THIS, WTF YIFANFOREVER
Anyway, wasn't CORDELIA kind of lowkey complimenting herself when she met her mom? lol
I didn't think that it was weird that she would smile after she woke up. The thing that confused me was the context. Yeah, like... She burned someone by the magic that was set free/the spell of Alyona but I don't really get the context to the "I've never been better." (in the sense of power, I mean, not about knowing who she is or meeting her mom, etc.) like ??? Then again, I had a long day and don't want to think too much XD maybe that's why I'm confused.
I reeeeaaally loved the "Life rarely is fair for heroes" though. I feel like many people forget that when they write villain/hero AUs. Same goes for the villain, too, though. Life isn't fair for them either, and so for everyone else. ...I should stop before I'm getting deep here xD
Both outcomes end in heartbreak... *thinking face* I wonder which people each ending involves. One for sure would be Baekhy- wait. Who said CORDELIA needed to be the one heartbroken....?
.......You're not being extremely evil and letting my otp die, are you? (Jongin/Seulgi) FIGHT ME.
Just kidding XD (seriously, though, I mean it)
Back to the burning part... Please don't turn her into one of those going-nuts-and-evil-because-I-suddenly-have-so-much-power characters. I've read this too often, it hurts my head. I've only read ONE story where that went well. Her changing isn't bad at all (even for the worse), I mean that's a natural cycle, but THOSE characters aren't really. She's a Kyrios and a demi-god on top of that, so she should be able to handle the powers (not exactly the forthcoming war, though) without going all nuts and evil because of it (YET). Is it even comprehensible what I'm trying to say? XD I'm kind of sounding confusing even to myself... I should go to bed. But it's only 8pm. But I really should go to bed. But I wouldn't be able to sleep anyway. *shrugs*
By the way, hold on a minute. I just remembered something.
ALYONA IS A GOD, TOO? I don't remember this ever being mentioned? And what. The. Hell? How? When? Why? *cries in European*
TL;DR: Great chapter. I'm tired. But great chapter nonetheless, even if I'm confused.
(This is the shortest summary I had ever done in my entire life XD)
xo Tatari (finally a comment length that's somewhat acceptable, I had been worrying lately if I'm suddenly incapable of writing longer comments lol)
Chapter 33: DON'T YOU DARE CALL THIS A SAD EXCUSE OF AN UPDATE IT'S BEAUTIFUL.
That being said, I loved the tension at the end of it.
Sorry that I don't have too much to say except that SHE FINALLY MET HER MOM OMG I WAS WAITING FOR THIS.
Have a beautiful day, darling.
Chapter 33: Hello, long time no see ^^ I hope you're doing well :D If im not in such a lost condition, i might cry on that last scene tho, it's touching >.< And Yubin, i want strangle (no, umm... yank maybe?) you, so bad, betrayal is the worst gurl. Survive, Hyesun. Baek will kick their soon when he know you're in this kind of situation. Thank you for updating girls ^^ Stay healthy :D
Chapter 32: Ok first off, I'm sensing Twice? If so, the hype is real! But since Yubin is there I'm gonna guess that there are probably non-Twice members? Or maybe Yubin is one herself? But that doesn't work, because isn't she Wonder Girl's Yubin, right? Next thing, I really love how Hyesun's threatening/warning the cove with the Reaper. And becuz of your Author note I can't wait till they discover her name! Also I hope whatever stress you had when creating this story is gone or soothed! Being stressed out is quite taxing so I hope/wish you for the best!
Chapter 32: wait... are they, the girls in labyrinth, good? like kind? ugh how to say it, like not a bad treath to her? i just finished reread the whole story again because i think i missed out little clue that can't fit in brain since last chapter lol (i confused at one moment, 'so who the hell died that night? Fei or Wooyoung or someone else?' then go back to chapter 1)
That feeling, Hyesun, i feel you, gurl. The feeling of being betrayed is, urgh, one of the worst feeling ever. Bring it, Hyesun! I say, even they have bad intention for you, just take the free training from them, then you are a smart girl (a demigod at that) you practice the whole training to them with a little modification (if that even exist or possible) so that you won't be predicted LOL (who am i to speak like that goshh)
maybe i just stressed out with everything, please excuse my randomness. i hope everything's going well for you, Rena and Tri ^^ Update this just when you guys have time, we'll wait! ;D
Chapter 32: Ok yeah, that chapter DID come out of nowhere and I'm so goddamn happy about it :D
I remember something I had wanted to mention earlier, too. I really love how Jongdae's practically a walking information source. Like he knows everything about (almost) anything at any time. ing love it :D I'd want him as my friend, but not his curious nose in my lol
That last line tho. I was laughing for a minute straight at the badass-ness of it. The Reaper card is always the best card you can pull lol I can practically imagine all their faces going white like a sheet of paper. I can't wait for her own name (it's just going to be Cordelia later or still Hyesun?) to make everyone scared for their lives. That's gonna be epic.
And yaaay, she finally meets her dad! ....kind of lol
Chapter 31: Ooo, that twist though, never expected minseok to be a satyr. I like how Seulgi is basically Yeri's mom, she sure is lucky to meet her XD hope she'll get along with Taeyong
Chapter 32: Omg yas, im so excited for this little arc. Don't get me wrong, i lurve fluffy and protective Baekhyun but im excited to see what Hyesun can do on her own. Also can't wait to see what unfolds on Yeri's side, it's all so interesting
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