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Lina_Love
#1
Chapter 41: I really like all the chapters you uploaded till now but, i really miss Sooyoung and Sehun and Lamia..... Really love your story <3
isaisy
#2
Chapter 41: new character and new alpha. shiiiiiiiiit baek as an alpha is like an open choice and probably the best, but i wasn't count to the point baekhyun officially get the alpha title. is it okay to feel funny tho? like baekhyun was so fed up with both suho and chanyeol and he just " off you wolves i covered your and your mess when it's not even my obligation at first and now you want to show your high in here? dude lemme show you who's the boss" baek was so done with them lol welcome alpha byun!
sweetdreamerz #3
Chapter 41: OOhh Alpha Byun.. I like how it sound. I love this chapter (^_^). Wish it could be longer though. I AM in DESPERATE need of this story. But nevertheless, a big hug for you. I really love this. Make the next chapters faster please (^_^). I am too excited for my own good. Don't know if I can survive if it takes too long.
SarangRae
#4
Chapter 41: the incredible hulk ahahhahah i'm just imagining baek as a bright green wolf with little shorts on now oh god
Chisanai99
#5
Chapter 41: Great chapter! I don't know if I am the only one but a really enjoy couples like Yeri and Jungkook or Joohyun and Junmyeon. But main pairing is of course my favourite:))))
Keep doing good work, I can't wait to find out how it will turn out!
Yerinator #6
Chapter 41: Baek as alpha!! Yay!!!!! I've been waiting for this ((:
I wonder who the pups are though
anyways JUNGKOOK I was so shook to see him! Never expected that! Anyways it was a great chapter and I really wonder how the plot will unravel...especially with Jungkook and the strident girl involved (:
scarlettbaek
#7
Chapter 41: "I knew you were wild Baek, but i'm not into " I'M WHEEZING LMFAOOOO
scarlettbaek
#8
Chapter 41: Call me weird but OMFG BAEKHYUN WAS SO SO SO HOT I LOVE HIM EVEN MORE LOLLL
Tbh I had predicted this to happen and i'm beyond GLAD that he is finally the Alpha!!! And i find that Jiyeon girl very suspicious...
wolfie503
#9
Chapter 41: OHHHHHH THE LITTLE GIANT BECAME THE ALPHA OF THUNDER RUN...YEASSSSS!!

And this scene though "i knew you were wild,baek,but im not into " LOLOLOL hyesun has changed...um wait..it is cordelia...yeah..cordelia
wolfie503
#10
Chapter 40: Baekhyun went "KKAEGO BUDICHOYA HAE" IFJKEJDEKDKOESO
Yerinator #11
Chapter 40: Baek×Cordelia is cute!!
Wondering who that trident girl is though...maybe someone poseidon related?
Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!
COriginal #12
Chapter 40: THOSE BAEK X CORDELIA MOMENTS THOOOO (Which i am referring to this chapter and last chapter to which I apologize because I am suuupppperrrr late af. As always...) But um, because my shipper heart can't function right, right now nor my mind, and I don't even know where to begin on expressing my love for BXC's love, I'm just gonna start talking about Trident girl. What's with her?? Also, I can't remember well (due to my peanut sized memory) but was there something in the past that had to do with Posiden?
sweetdreamerz #13
Chapter 39: "It goes down down baby... It goes down down baby..." *poor my heart, they are so sweet* "Shimmie Shimmie KokoBop... I think I like it..."
SarangRae
#14
Chapter 39: I love longhaul fics hahahaha there's so much to cover that you need to take a long time anyway woohoo~
scarlettbaek
#15
Chapter 39: ......OH MY GOD FINALLY YES YES FINALLY!!!!! HOLY I AM SQUEALING INTO MY PILLOW SHHAHAJJANA THIS IS SO SWEET FAN WE HAVE NORE OF IT AGAIN? LIKE?? I WANT MOREEEEE??!!! <333

The prospect of Baekhyun becoming the Alpha did cross my mind as well because from what I have seen so far, he's /the/ one who keeps the pack together and is acting as a pillar supporting it from falling apart. I believe he's the backbone of the pack without a doubt. And he definitely gives off the alpha vibes too!! Esp when he barged into that other pack (i forgot the name LOLL) when Cordelia was kidnapped.

Baekhyun is lethal I can't-
OMG PLEASE MORE EXCHANGE BETWEEN THE TWO!1!1!1 #BaekSun is SAILING
ohplsno
#16
Chapter 39: oh god, oh god /screams/ OH GOD THIS IS HAPPENING /ULTRA SCREAMS/ YAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSS
arosequartz
#17
Chapter 39: *SCREAMS AT THE TOP OF TME CLIF*
wolfie503
#18
Chapter 39: *SCREAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNM*