Chapter 3: Wow. i don't even know where to start. So, like Yubin was working with Taehyung and Baekhyun? Wow, I already don't like her. It's sad all the adults of the pack are being punished for something that's not even necessarily their fault.
It's good to know Baekhyun was able to get some of his anger out on the hunter.
I really am liking the revision so far, even if it's only two chapters, but looking forward to more.
Chapter 2: I loved seeing Sooyoung's perspective. Like I guess this just gives a deeper look at exactly why her death started this whole thing. Like before Sooyoung wasn't someone I was concerned about because i didn't know her, nor did they get a glimpse.
I disliked the hunters, but this just makes me what to personally hurt them myself. I also love the small detail you added about Jin yelling for Jungkook to be protected.
Chapter 1: I totally understand the need to improve your writing and wanting to produce a better story for your reader. I guess this gives me the perfect reason to go back and re-read the story, because if you can tell, I had begun to forget several details of this story, like the fact Hyesun had to get theraphy. I'm sure your revised version will be much better than the original, even if the original was also wonderful.
I get what you meant about telling and expecting the readers to understand a few details, like for example the fact that Junmyeon was bonded to Joohyun somehow missed my mind, until several chapters after, but I always just assumed it was so you could bring it up later or something, which is why i never mentioned it much.
Chapter 79: I wish i found this sooner. This story is brilliant! I really really love stories with this genres and i'm glad that i found this as there are only a few stories like this ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ It made me feel a lot of emotions, mostly excitement, happiness, and quite a number heartbreaks ㅋㅋㅋ I would definitely find my way back to reread this story again someday. I also love a lot of the characters and was very satisfied with their character developments. You are an absolutely genius for writing something as awesome as this. This story is every bit of what i'm looking for in a fantasy/supernatural story. Some chapters kept me at my toes and i absolutely enjoyed every chapter. Thank you for letting us in to the magical world you created by your artfully crafted words! ♡♡♡
Chapter 79: Hey thank you for this bonus.. I remember I asked you about something from Jongin's pov about the moment he found out that he can see to his thoughts when he became the king and what he think about Yeri.. You said someone also asked about the moment when he find out that he can see.. And you will write it.. Thank you so much for this.. You almost cover all in this.. Will wait for the much awaited conversation between Jongin and Yeri.. Also can we have some bonus about the changes happened after the war? Like how Cordelia adjusted to her position..may be a little bit of Yixing being a mother hen and fussing at her and pulling his hair for his misfortune that he is stuck with a stubborn child like her.. How everyone took and adjusted in Thunder Run Pack.. From Baekhyun leaving to Junmyeon again taking the charge.. And also how everyone in the underworld reacted to all the new leaders.. Specially those who worked with the old leaders for years..
Chapter 79: I'm late to the update, but you did it. I LITERALLY SCREAMED when I started reading this. Everytime you posted an update in Forever, I kept looking forward to how the family reacted. I was looking for more tears and hugs, but like it's fine cause you know you also included the moment they became the new rulers of the vampires. Can we can a few more scenes of Jongin adjusting, because I'm sure it was a process for him after hundreds of years of not being able to see the people he loves and I really would like atleast a small glimpse of the conversation between Yeri and Jongin.
I want scenes with the Pack before Sooyoung's death, but I feel like Hansol's death would just make feel more upset, because honestly I'm still on over it. It would be bittersweet to read, but i would like scenes after the parents have returned and how they're adjusting to all the changes that happened in the group. I think that would be interesting.
Honestly, please just write about anything, I don't mind reading more about this au. the world you've created was awesome.
- P.S I read all the books but it's been a hot minute and can I just say at times the story just pissed me off. Like I would go back and re-read them but i really don't have the energy. I watched the first movie and barely remembered the plot and then i tried to watch the show, but i gave up like half way through it.
Chapter 5: Congrats!!!
I am re-reading this story again and I cannot stop..the story line, the nerdy Greek history moments, the suspense, the romance - oh I missed the good biopic!. Need to sleep now lol
Chapter 78: Im so glad that I've stumbled upon this story. I really really reallyyyyy love vampire stories ♡ thank you Reya and Tri for your hard work!!
Cordelia and baekyun are meant to be. Yes. They're meant to be.
I cried when Hansol died. Oh my. That innocent boy sacrificed himself for his best friend :(((((
Im so happy for Yer!! And with her new familyyy. I know taeyeong, lady seulgi and lord jongin will do anything to protect her. It would be better if soojung is still alive tho ; ((( (i hope we'll have more yeri-seul-jong bonding soon hehe)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS!! FOREVER, HERE I COME!!!!!!!
Chapter 77: Thank God I managed bingeread this in two days, without sleep. HAHA I don't know what to say other than I love this, like, so much. I love how you potrayed all our heroines like that. Like how awesome they are!!! The story heavily hinting that women are important af and there'll be no amazing history without women in it. I have lost fr words I'll just drop this and proceed to read the spin-off.
THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this, and dear beta-reader thank you so much for beta-read this.
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