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blodynyx
#1
Chapter 24: WHY DID JONGDAE SAID SOMETHING LIKE THAT OMG this making me extra EXCITED to know what's to come
blodynyx
#2
Chapter 23: Finally! Finally she told Baekhyun about her visions. I hope they seek help of Jongin. I'm so curious as what is the connection between Baekhyun Hyesun and Yeri.
blodynyx
#3
Chapter 20: ISTG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I am so thankful for the universe to let me discover this certain gem. I am ssssssooooooo excited I couldn't left better wording of my comment. KDMFNSNDKSK
blodynyx
#4
Chapter 15: I don't think I'm going to get any sleep tonight either. THIS IS SO FUN TO READ I CAN'T STOP MYSELF
KimHyeJoo #5
Chapter 78: I LOVE THIS!
thank you for sharing this :) :) :)
nonetheless #6
Chapter 78: I. loved. this. Ok hear me out, I love reading like Greek mythology, werewolf, and vampire stories. and all of these together in one story is literally the best. Read this in two days cause I could not stop reading. Such a good story and you guys are amazing writers!
Seulkai99
#7
Chapter 41: Finally Baekhyun become Alpha!
rish_15
#8
Chapter 64: I can't believe I didn't find this story before. It's amazing. Not only is the writing amazing, but the plot itself is intriguing. It was a little confusing in the beginning, considering you were telling two different perspectives. I can't wait to read the sequel, because even though one conflict was resolved, I can't get this out of my head.
SuhoLoverDebo
#9
Chapter 78: I subscribed this story for a long time ago but I was waiting for this to complete.. Now I read it and I finished it in 2 days.. I just love this.. I love reading about ancient Greek mythology.. Stories about God's and and all.. And this fic is really very good in that aspect.. I loved all the characters and the development of their characters.. Cordelia just amazed me.. And Baek is perfect for her.. He helped her always.. Stayed by her.. Supported her and even showed her the right path.. When she started loosing herself to her power he stopped her.. They are really meant for each other.. Sehun needs to clear his head and move on.. I am sure we will see that in Forever.. Jongin is one of my favorite character in this story.. I saw in previous chapter that you posted a link for a Jongin-Seulgi back up story but I can't find it.. I would also love to read from Jongin's pov about what he think of Yeri.. Specially when they first met.. I love Yeri and Taeyoung's relation.. Jongdae is one unique character and also very enjoyable to read.. Jiyeon is totally unexpected.. I also enjoyed reading the part of God's.. And I feel bad for Heades.. Zeus really need to put his pride aside..
Thank you for this amazing story.. I will look forward to Forever..
bebexol
#10
Chapter 74: It was relieving to be able to have that last scene with Yeri and SooJung, I'm glad you ended up writing it and adding it in!
bebexol
#11
Chapter 64: Knowing that Seulgi, Yeri, Jongin and Taeyong all have that family structure is so sweet. My heart melted when Jongin and Seulgi reacted the way they did to the reveal, it amused me to know Sehun's battered and bruised now.
But that last scene! My gosh, I wasn't expecting Sooyoung as well!
bebexol
#12
Chapter 56: Noo Hansol!! I never saw that coming! Every chapter feels like a big move and progress for everyone, the war feels like it's getting really close and I'm curious to see how it will go after what has happened in this chapter
Iminthezone #13
Chapter 26: "City in singapore" ... wut?
luv_kero
2447 streak #14
Chapter 78: I remember you making plans to write Forever a few years back, so I'm glad you decided to go through with it in the end!! :D It's awesome to hear about your journey with this universe and to see how it's developed from its initial inception. ^^ And thank you to Tri for being an awesome beta and it's so cool to hear that you were inspired by Reya to continue writing as well!! x] We love meaningful friendships!! :') Anyway, I'll head on over to Forever now and I'm super excited for this sequel!! :)
sweetdreamerz #15
Chapter 77: & the facts that I really love Baekhyun is just adding the cherry on top. I got to imagine him as a very important hero in this story (a saviour), with a great love life & a personalities/qualities that I always imagine him to have. How I wish I can give the world for him (^_^).

On another note, this super hero thing reminds me of his supposed new group (the AVENGER). I don't know how I should react/feel about this. He just got so high up in the sky after his successful solo debut. & now this 'SuperM' seem drag him down. I'll support him but all this negativity really make me sad (-_-).
sweetdreamerz #16
Chapter 77: I don't know why? But most of the time I felt that Jiyeon & Yeri are Baekhyun's & Cordelia's bonded children (^_^). They really look up to them & seek comfort from them whenever they are in trouble & distress. & most of the time I really believe that both Baekhyun & Cordelia actually treat & protect them like one.
I felt that connection/bond or whatever it's called when I read their chapters especially the recent chapters. & it's really warm my heart. I can feel their emotions towards each other whenever any of them face difficulties & danger. I can see/felt how much they care for each other. & how proud they are for each other. Surely love to read more of their interactions if I can.

& Thank you for creating this story. I really love it (^_^). Please never ever think of taking it away from here. I would like to come here & read it from time to time.
I will never leave/unsubscribe this story & I'll wait patiently & excitedly for your good news (^_^). Take as much time as you need.
Sey-ra
#17
Chapter 77: It was such a long and wonderful story. Thankyou for writing this beautiful story.And iam waiting ,i love surprises.
Sey-ra
#18
Chapter 77: It was such a long and wonderful story. Thankyou for writing this beautiful story.And iam waiting ,i love surprises.
luv_kero
2447 streak #19
Chapter 77: Wow, it's crazy to think that Cordelia and Baekhyun's story has ended now, but I really liked how you wrote the conclusion. ^^ While not all of their problems are solved, like Cordelia pointed out, they're on a great trajectory and I think the new High Council will be able to do a lot of good for the world now. :) Granted, even then, some bad things are probably going to happen in the future, maybe related to the Council or completely unrelated (who knows haha) and it's not always going to be smooth sailing, but it's a start for now and that's good enough for the moment. :')

I wasn't expecting Sehun to abdicate the throne, but it does make sense when I think about it, and I think Seulgi and Jongin will be great rulers. ^^ But I wasn't surprised to hear that Jiyeon is pregnant now, LOOOOL. XD And I'm also not surprised that Baekhyun decided to give up his leadership position in Thunder Run, since he was made alpha during a very turbulent time and he felt so much pressure making such life-changing decisions. Not to mention, being Thunder Run's alpha meant he would've had to stay in Korea, where Cordelia wasn't going to be, and there was no way that Baekhyun would ever willingly choose to be away from her. It does make me sad to hear that Yeri was in such a dark place and I really hope things get better for her. :'( She's been through so much from the very beginning and that definitely took a huge toll on her mentally. Hopefully Sehun comes around soon and starts being more open with her, because Yeri needs support more than ever now and it would be very helpful if Sehun could stop living in the past to focus more on his future. OTL

All in all, thank you for writing such an amazing story and congratulations on sticking with it until the very end!! :D Definitely not an easy feat, but you did it, despite the obstacles you had to hurdle over in real life, and I'm really glad you took that break for yourself. ^^ You're an amazing person and I'm really glad I got to know you through Immortals!! :)
123manju #20
Chapter 77: Well I must say I am a little sad to see it end, but also glad because the gang can get their break from all that trouble. This story was really well written and the plot was amazing. It is so far the greatest story I have ever read and I am really glad I got to read it. Thank you for creating the beautiful masterpiece. And I am glad you thought of yourself first and took care of yourself. I hope you are doing better now. I sincerely thank you for writing this as always.