**NEW STORY: DEAL WITH THE DEVIL**

Born In The Dark
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Hello everyone!

I just wanted to let you know that I'm currenty working on a new story called Deal With The Devil.

It will have 5 chapters of which 2 are already published.

Genre: angst, romance

Characters : Ji Young (OC), taehyung and Jimin

 

 

23 year-old Nam Ji Young is the heir to one of Korea’s biggest companies - or at least she was, until her father introduces her to her half brother, her father’s illegitimate son who had mysteriously appeared in their life. After a suspicious man bumped into her on a night out with her best friend Jimin, everything she believed in proves to be wrong and her life slowly slips out of her control.

 

 

“This is beyond your imagination, Ji Young” he whispered. “This is real. I am real.”

“Go away!”

I couldn't remember jumping up from my seat, but my own, shrill voice echoed through my own ears and I felt my finger nails digging deep into the flesh of my palms.

All of a sudden, I was really self-conscious and felt the burning glares of the students in the bus on me.

They started whispering behind their hands, looking at me like I was a...a freak.

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rapmonttaemune #1
Chapter 24: Im not gonna lie, I felt so spooked out when I reading this story, especially the parts talking killing and all bad dreams and stuff.
But it was such a good story oh my!
Tae and Jimin were too good, I felt like as if they were my friends.
What I mostly love d and want to thank you Author, is because you made Kim SeokJin extremely look cool.
Even tho he didn't get to be with the love of his and wasnt the main character but you made him appear really cool in my eyes
I come across too many fics that always described Jin as a princess or give a silly and laughable personality. I was actually hoping that Dasom would developed feelings for him!
It was such a good story but there is something Im confuse about, her real name is Yoon Dasom? Like she bwent living Dalnim as a fake name?
dreamshop #2
Chapter 24: Dont tell me they (suga and maybe Dal too) still kill people for a living!

The story started out very promising, Dal and also every character was so well described. Very very well described. As the story goes on there seems to be lack of character development though, not that the characters are too flat, but it seems they dont feel a lot alive as the beginning to me. I bet it's just me. The beginning parts were seriously gold :) so good job author-nim!
dreamshop #3
Chapter 19: Wait dalnim pulled the trigger but no one near the room heard a slight bit?
Author nim you really scared the out of me with her fierce character. I'm still holding a silly hope that she at least feel bad for doing such thing to an innocent (and disturbing...) girl. Anyway this scene came out kind of unecessary? I dont know just felt like her death got nothing to do with the plot.
Anyways, I just want to point out another thing before heading to read more. Her past story was kind of similar to one character's from Rules of Deduction by loviet. Just some key detail, but diferrent outcomes and such :) of course, its just a coincidence. Dont misunderstand me please.
Army_jiaying #4
Chapter 25: I was drowned in my tears omg i couldn't stop the teas from flowing. To be honest i was quite glad because it's been quite awhile since i am able to at least tear up. I've been feeling very emotional yet i can't release any of it even if something sad happened it just feels numb but i do know i really want to cry my heart out , the only thing stopping me was no tears was flowing out no matter how hard i tried. SO THIS FIC WAS DEFINITELY WORTH READING AND I AM SO GONNA SUPPORT UR FUTURE WORKS!! (=^ェ^=)
retire #5
Chapter 25: so, this is it. the last two chapters, you got me there. i was almost laughing all the time everytime hoseok appears but i ended up crying, hahaha. good job, authornim! interesting plot, not too fast paced and just nice. it's time to move to your new story now. hwaiting!
sehunthesheep #6
Chapter 24: Now my eyes feel sore. Its all on you and your amazingly sad story, authornim!
amberjeon #7
Chapter 23: this made me cry so much :(( hoseok :((
hanhansol #8
OH MY GOSH I THOUGHT JUNGKOOK WAS SUPPOSED TO DIE!! And it hit me really hard when Hoseok did
shineeFANt #9
Chapter 25: This story was so great and sad at the same time. I actually cried when hoseok died but thank you for writing this
red_knight #10
Chapter 24: This is a great story!! Sadly hoseok died :'( .. Love it , Authornim :D
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