Prologue

Born In The Dark
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"Look at how a single candle can both defy and define the darkness."
 - Anne Frank

 

Smoke fills the air of the dull room. The walls are raw brick and the sides of the room are lined with boxes, stacked up to the ceiling. In the middle of the room, a bare light bulb illuminated the scenery poorly. Two men are sitting at a table; one young, maybe in his mid-twenties, the other one around 50. In front of both of them are standing glasses with a brown liquid. Most likely Whiskey.

The older man, Taebi, has a lit cigarette squeezed in between the index and middle finger of his right hand, and, with the same hand, he grabs his glass, taking a deep chug without leaving the younger one out of his cautious eyes.

His stubble and the dark circles under his eyes make him look even older than he is. All the searching and chasing in the past made him tired. But finally he found someone – someone that is able to help him put his ongoing race to a rest.

The younger man leans back into his seat, lazily propping the ankle of his one leg on top of the other knee as he coolly stretches out his hand, inspecting his nails professionally.

His light blonde hair reflects the dim light as a grin spreads wide across his face, distorting his features into a scary grimace. The flipped up collar of his long, black coat makes him look dangerous and the calm he keeps, despite the gruesome request he has just received, adds up to the picture he makes.

“So, how long do we have, Taebi?” the youngster sneers, not thinking about respecting his elder with honorifics. His chin snaps up as he speaks, his voice raspy and deep as he eyes his opposite. He leans back even more, balancing the chair on the two rear legs.

Taebi's face darkens and he sets down his glass, revealing that his finger's are trembling. He isn't able to hide that he is scared.

Scared that, just maybe, he is doing the wrong thing. He stubs out his cigarette on the wooden table, right next to two photographs that are placed in the middle of it.

The edges are worn-down and filmed over with the yellow signature of passed years. How often has he taken them out before? He can't remember. But he remembers brushing over the faces in the picture, imagining how everything could have ended if he didn't make that stupid mistake back then. H

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rapmonttaemune
#1
Chapter 24: Im not gonna lie, I felt so spooked out when I reading this story, especially the parts talking killing and all bad dreams and stuff.
But it was such a good story oh my!
Tae and Jimin were too good, I felt like as if they were my friends.
What I mostly love d and want to thank you Author, is because you made Kim SeokJin extremely look cool.
Even tho he didn't get to be with the love of his and wasnt the main character but you made him appear really cool in my eyes
I come across too many fics that always described Jin as a princess or give a silly and laughable personality. I was actually hoping that Dasom would developed feelings for him!
It was such a good story but there is something Im confuse about, her real name is Yoon Dasom? Like she bwent living Dalnim as a fake name?
dreamshop
#2
Chapter 24: Dont tell me they (suga and maybe Dal too) still kill people for a living!

The story started out very promising, Dal and also every character was so well described. Very very well described. As the story goes on there seems to be lack of character development though, not that the characters are too flat, but it seems they dont feel a lot alive as the beginning to me. I bet it's just me. The beginning parts were seriously gold :) so good job author-nim!
dreamshop
#3
Chapter 19: Wait dalnim pulled the trigger but no one near the room heard a slight bit?
Author nim you really scared the out of me with her fierce character. I'm still holding a silly hope that she at least feel bad for doing such thing to an innocent (and disturbing...) girl. Anyway this scene came out kind of unecessary? I dont know just felt like her death got nothing to do with the plot.
Anyways, I just want to point out another thing before heading to read more. Her past story was kind of similar to one character's from Rules of Deduction by loviet. Just some key detail, but diferrent outcomes and such :) of course, its just a coincidence. Dont misunderstand me please.
Army_jiaying #4
Chapter 25: I was drowned in my tears omg i couldn't stop the teas from flowing. To be honest i was quite glad because it's been quite awhile since i am able to at least tear up. I've been feeling very emotional yet i can't release any of it even if something sad happened it just feels numb but i do know i really want to cry my heart out , the only thing stopping me was no tears was flowing out no matter how hard i tried. SO THIS FIC WAS DEFINITELY WORTH READING AND I AM SO GONNA SUPPORT UR FUTURE WORKS!! (=^ェ^=)
retire
#5
Chapter 25: so, this is it. the last two chapters, you got me there. i was almost laughing all the time everytime hoseok appears but i ended up crying, hahaha. good job, authornim! interesting plot, not too fast paced and just nice. it's time to move to your new story now. hwaiting!
sehunthesheep
#6
Chapter 24: Now my eyes feel sore. Its all on you and your amazingly sad story, authornim!
amberjeon
#7
Chapter 23: this made me cry so much :(( hoseok :((
hanhansol
#8
OH MY GOSH I THOUGHT JUNGKOOK WAS SUPPOSED TO DIE!! And it hit me really hard when Hoseok did
shineeFANt #9
Chapter 25: This story was so great and sad at the same time. I actually cried when hoseok died but thank you for writing this
red_knight #10
Chapter 24: This is a great story!! Sadly hoseok died :'( .. Love it , Authornim :D