Intro- what experienced readers look for

Why People Hate Your Story

Original Rant → Why People hate your story~ Part 0- My initial rant (written in 2010)


1)      A good storyline that can be followed- it sticks to the plot (as in the side couple doesn’t steal the spotlight)

The plot has to be interesting and unique, not just another high school fic where two people meet, face obstacles, and fall in love. Readers enjoy the twists and confusion of fics as long as the events are reasonable and enticing enough for them to hang onto cliffhangers waiting for the next chapter. More importantly, readers usually only care about their bias and don’t give much thought to the side stories going on.

Events need to be described properly with adjectives and details blossoming from the page. Vague, conversation based fics are boring and have no depth. All readers would rather read a very well written scene that takes place in five minutes than a scene that skips around for an hour or several short scenes to explain the same thing. Action, reaction, and effect, most of all, the character’s feelings.

2)      Justified facts and events

There are some things that tick readers off, like facts being wrong, stereotypes, and impossible situations. Characters with fake personalities are also cringe worthy. One of the biggest reasons readers stop reading fics is because the author portrays a flawed fic as if their reality is correct. Readers know how life is and you can’t fool them into thinking that actually looks good.

3)      Good writing and structure

Of course, readers like the fic to be neat. That means no character profiles because those clutter up the foreword, font is all easy to read and one unified color, type is all aligned to left or justified, there isn’t script writing, there is proper grammar, only one person speaks in a paragraph, and there aren’t any POV changes. Some readers are more lenient with what they consider “good writing” but those that have been reading longer will not tolerate amateur mistakes.

4)      Unique and captivating characters

Often times the female leads in a fic will have obscure personalities that either leave readers with the feeling of emptiness because of their lack of connection and understanding, or distaste. Readers usually don’t connect to the females and even find themselves turning to boyxboys pairings just to read about their biases only when the girls just don’t cut it. As most readers are young girls, the female protagonists have to be fully developed and creative. Girls usually all act the same, following their respective fanfic stereotypes of shy, cute, arrogant, or cunning.

The male roles don’t need as much development when they are the idol, but they still require the elements of a realistic human. It’s annoying for obvious points to be emphasized, like their appearances and talents. When it comes to character, the unusual personalities and thoughts are what are looked for.

All characters have flaws and perfections, these traits make them different from the other characters. If the characters aren’t fully developed, they appear just as words to readers instead of as real people that grow and change over time.

5)      Updates

Readers that are also writers will be the most sympathetic when it comes to not updating, but they also expect a few updates every now and then. It shows that authors are dedicated and interested in the fic as well that they have a pretty decent foundation for the fic already. Authors that update everyday often come out with poorer quality chapters because they rushed. Readers love quick updates as long as the quality of the work is not compromised. They will willingly wait years if the fic is just that good. However, we don’t enjoy waiting at all.

Above all, fics that update frequently are easier to keep up with and stay in our minds better. After a long wait for a chapter, some details are forgotten or even the entire storyline. 

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Scarlet_Sky
#1
Chapter 37: Ahhh, this was really entertaining to read. I love your tips... and also your sarcasm. lol
kesujo #2
Chapter 33: For me, I often just deal with subs-only stories by subbing to it temporarily, but most of the time, I read the first few chapters, lose interest, and unsub. I'm also like you where I firmly disbelieve in sub-only mode; there was one instance one of my stories was subs-only, and that was when AFF automatically marked every story with a trigger warning with members and subscribers only, and even then, as soon as I found they changed that, I removed the marker.
To me, someone who uses the sub-only option are those who don't have confidence in their own content to attract subscribers. But sub count isn't necessarily an accurate metric of viewership of your writing: if one wanted to do that, story statistics or chapter statistics is a better representation of how many people that still read your stuff
curiousdaffodil
#3
Chapter 28: Absolutely agree with you regarding description and dialogue.
I read some stories that lacked description and more dialogue. I want to explain to the authors about this, but because my english isn't really good and limited, I often don't know how to tell them and what to say to them. This really helps. ^^
Montai
#4
I love this
kesujo #5
Chapter 25: Hey, so reading this sorta made me think about chapter lengths ...

My chapters usually have, I'd say, around 3000 words each. Usually, my chapters are divided based on time skips (sorta).
That's not to say that I don't have a few time skips in my chapters, but I guess it'd be more accurate to say that I divide my chapters based on events. You know how some events will happen right next to each other and other events require some time to pass, right? That's sorta what I mean by that.
So I guess my question is: what do you think the ideal chapter length is (for you personally and what you think is the most effective for general reader bases, as in not just AFF but people who read in general)? Would something like 3,000 words suffice, or is the 10,000 word length better?
Of course, this question sorta varies from story to story (how it's laid out, how it's narrated, etc.), but from what you've seen, what's the best?
meangel
#6
Wow, this was published when I'd just turned 12 and I'm reading it now as an 18 y.o.
I do like writing a lot, and English is not exactly my mother tongue, yet I don't think my English is bad.. It's just not academic.

So hopefully with this, I'll improve my writing style as I continue my writings. I don't necessarily agree with all of your opinions but it has helped me improved a bit for now and hopefully will help me more in the future when I come back for more tips.

Thank you so much for this! It's truly appreciated!
charlislekim
#7
Chapter 37: just wanted to say that you have the best tips and i love it! you don't beat around the bush and get straight to the point! it really helped me^^

i agree with everything you said in all of your chapters, but that's how you attract readers in every website, right? haha aff, wattpad, etc, everyone wants a good dose of cliche and cheesiness :)
Twiceline_
#8
Chapter 9: I like how straightforward you are. It really helps with how my writing is and to be honest I have done a lot of the 'not to do' tips. Sometimes you're so straightforward its funny instead.
espoirtwt #9
Chapter 6: i'm laughing at the accuracy of these cliché plots. sometimes i give them a try, but i just can’t tolerate some.. it’s totally the same thing all over again and pointless to read.