Chapter Fourteen

The Taste of Death
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The park in front of Savannah Choi's home was brightly lit by ornate black lampposts that lined the cobbled walkways. It gave the illusion that it was still early in the evening. Kyuhyun was a couple of meters ahead of me. If Savannah sees him, he'll immediately fall back and make a turn. Then I'll take over and tail the suspect. That way, Savannah won't get too suspicious that somebody's following her.   I heaved a sigh and adjusted my pace, trying to keep a safe distance between me and Kyuhyun's mop-like hair. Suddenly, the mop disappeared.   Omo! Did Savannah see him? I thought nervously. My heart began pounding against my chest. This is it. I guess I'll have to take over.    I walked faster hoping to catch up to the suspect who was probably way ahead by now. As I half-jogged, a dozen million thoughts came pouring into my head. What if Savannah is carrying a gun? What if she suddenly turned around and shot me? What if she's leading us into a trap? What did I get myself into?     I almost screamed when someone grabbed me from behind, their hand clamped on my mouth. I felt myself being gently pulled back, behind a skinny tree; felt someone's breath on the side of my face.  "Shhh..."   The hand slid down from my lips and I turned to face my captor. "Kyuhyun?"   He didn't reply. Instead, he pointed at the brick townhouse facing the park's exit. I could see Savannah standing at the top of the steps, probably waiting for someone to open the door.   "No. This can't
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jykmbrly #1
Chapter 18: Hello... i'm new reader in asianfanfics and this is the first ff that i read in this blog.
What a cute seokyu.. well, this ff have strong feel that i can feel too. Especially when jess in danger situation *coz i'm jess fan too*
And the important point is, the SEOKYU.
Thankyu seomuch authornim... keep writing SeoKyu fanfics^^

#sorryforbadenglish
xellegeronimo
#2
I love it! Hope you can make another SeoKyu Story! <3
ItSeomates
#3
Chapter 18: Such a sweet story....I'm really in love with this story...You're the best authornim...jjang.....^_^
jesc09 #4
Chapter 18: Oohh this is good! ^^, i read it all in one go. Very interesting. But i think an epilogue would tie up all of the gaps, such as how Kyu started feeling something for Seo or if he even does, and what happens after. I hope u could find time to add a last chapter in! ^^,
MinSeoKyu #5
Chapter 18: Love it seoomuch!>_<
lovefulness
#6
Chapter 18: Can you please make an epilogue or a sequel? Huhuhuhu.
Just_Vicky-Jung
#7
OMG, this's weir...
musical_empire_
#8
Chapter 18: im... im... drowning in the cuteness... like... omg...
"And I'm sorry for this too."
AHHHH~!!! ^^
he's right though, no matter how hard you work, if you're not doing what you love and if you're not surrounded by those who love and care about you, life won't be as great as you'd hope for :) great words of wisdom, i liked that!
:D i loved this story so much and i enjoyed this so DANG much, i cannot tell you how curious it made me. it's hard to find some great fanfics like this that give me that excited feeling when i see that it's been updated. this story is one of those!
i hope some more great ideas come flying at you and that you keep writing them! ^.^ i look forward to any more stories in the future!
ANYWAYS THAT LAST KISS AND THAT LAST LINE! AHHH~! x3
rosematics #9
It was actually more chaste than I expected this to end, which was really nice, because a majority of fanfics I read actually ended with either a lot of heated, passionate kisses or the two lovers getting tangled up in the sheets of a bed.

Though your chapters were a lot shorter than I hoped, they were great. It reminded me that even short sentences could tell you a lot if written effectively.

Thank you. I really enjoyed the story. <3
500sunny500
#10
Chapter 18: THAT LAST PART.
THAT KISS.
THAT SWEET KISS.
AND THAT LINE: "And I'm sorry for this too" <3

This story did not disappointment. It was beautiful and cute and the romance made my heart skip. >//<
Thank you for this lovely story. I truly enjoyed reading it, even though I didn't comment much.

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BUT THAT KISS. THAT KISS AT THE END. <3
MY FEELS. IM DROWNING. <3 <3 <3