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Detailed or Simple review: Simple.
Message/Purpose of Graphic : Nothing.
Your concerns, if any: All.

First, thank you for waiting patiently and second, for choosing a simplistic route. I can tell it is meant to be light-hearted with a dash romance even though the purpose you've stated is for relatively 'nothing.' But that is okay because by the title and background, it pretty much says it all. I like how you decided to use shapes as letters, just like Kim Sunggyu's 'Another Me' concept, however, there are flaws when using them as well. On the word "Myung" the 'G' looks like the letter 'C' and I kind of read it as 'Myunc" the first time. If it weren't for the fact that I knew L's real name is Kim MyungSoo from the picture, I wouldn't have guessed the first would was "Myung" and then "Eun" for Eunji (I think). I suggest making the hook of the 'G' more defined so it can be readable because unless you know L's real name, you can't really figure out how the names are spelled. Another thing I find odd is the "E" in "MyungEun" has different spacing in the letter compared to the other letters. Even the "M" does not have that much space cut into it. If possible, why don't you change the "E" to make it match the "M" or vice-versa? Like cut triangles into the letter instead of using rectangles. Give it a try. Aside from that, the message of the graphic is clear and the two main stock photos are relevant and visible on the poster. It's nicely edit but the only other thing that bothers me is Eunji, who is a bit darker than Myungsoo. If you can adjust the light on her a bit more, that would be good. Also, the heart between the two sort of sticks out like a sore thumb. It's visible but the background texture is distorting the shape of the heart. Either put an outline/ around it or perhaps make it smaller, I think this would be good to go. 

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Fireglobe
#1
Is this shop closed forever?
mxchiiee
#2
Are you still accepting request?
InfintiySapphire
#3
Chapter 18: TY for the advice and review, I've greatly appreciate it because even when you're a busy you still have time to give me some pointers. In the poster I did the background first and I think I've grasp the part of what you mean by making a collage in a way because for the posters I make so far I usually just cut stocks out and paste so when you mean by collage is it perhaps to enlarge pics and make them interwined with each other? Anyways thanks alot :)
starlight-turtle
#4
Chapter 17: Thank you for the review! (and sorry for the late reply...) I think that you interpreted my poster differently than I did, but regardless, a lot of your advice will be taken to heart.
lexxxi16
#5
Chapter 16: Ty so much for the review. I'll take your thoughts into consideration next time. :)
InfintiySapphire
#6
Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/rejdssI.png
Program Used: Pixlr Editor
Detailed or Simple review: Detailed
Message/Purpose of Graphic (e.g. prompt; if words on graphic, state full phrase): Innocence almost like a sadness about a girl who's all grown up and has an exterior of a strong person but inside she contains innocence. "This innocence is brilliant, I hope that it'll stay." Influenced by Avril Lanviage: Innocence. :)
Your concerns, if any (what do you need help on specifically?): I want to know if its better and any improvement and I grasp only a brief and the elementary stage of blending. Wonder if you can help me and tell me how to blend different textures together perfectly like a puzzle instead of how I did it because mine looks out of place and really simple.... Thanks!
starlight-turtle
#7
Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/c5PzYb3.jpg
Program Used: CS2 lol
Detailed or Simple review: detailed please~
Message/Purpose of Graphic (e.g. prompt; if words on graphic, state full phrase): I did it out of boredom, but was inspired by Luhan's departure and his now broken friendship with Lay, who doesn't want Luhan to forget him. It's kind of an attempt at angst, but not heavy angst.
Your concerns, if any (what do you need help on specifically?): I just want to know how I did in general. This is now my 4th graphic, but I'm most confident in this one. Could you point out areas where I could improve? Thanks~

PS: I know this isn't part of the rubric, but if you want the translation of the Chinese text in my poster, I can send that to you, because it is very relevant to the poster, and if you need that to grade, I'll be happy to provide!
caeruleusclouds #8
Chapter 14: Thank you for the wonderful review and advices! ^^ I will fix it right away and try those experiments you mentioned!
this review is really helpful~ xD thanks a lot!
JaiGuanlin
#9
Chapter 12: Thank you for reviwing this graphic! I was intending for an angsty feel for the poster, so I'm glad that point came across. And yes, Blend Collage is a thoroughly tough app to use when you first start using it, but it's the best thing I can get for free on the Google Play Store since everything else cost money. I love it though. It's quite useful for a free app. (Since most free editing apps are really bad or super limited.) Thank you again.
lexxxi16
#10
Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/FUOhN7E.png
Program Used: Photoshop CS6
Detailed or Simple review: Detailed
Message/Purpose of Graphic (e.g. prompt; if words on graphic, state full phrase): Work out of boredom, again. HAHA! Oh well.....
Your concerns, if any (what do you need help on specifically?):