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Detailed or Simple review: Simple.
Message/Purpose of Graphic : Nothing.
Your concerns, if any: All.
First, thank you for waiting patiently and second, for choosing a simplistic route. I can tell it is meant to be light-hearted with a dash romance even though the purpose you've stated is for relatively 'nothing.' But that is okay because by the title and background, it pretty much says it all. I like how you decided to use shapes as letters, just like Kim Sunggyu's 'Another Me' concept, however, there are flaws when using them as well. On the word "Myung" the 'G' looks like the letter 'C' and I kind of read it as 'Myunc" the first time. If it weren't for the fact that I knew L's real name is Kim MyungSoo from the picture, I wouldn't have guessed the first would was "Myung" and then "Eun" for Eunji (I think). I suggest making the hook of the 'G' more defined so it can be readable because unless you know L's real name, you can't really figure out how the names are spelled. Another thing I find odd is the "E" in "MyungEun" has different spacing in the letter compared to the other letters. Even the "M" does not have that much space cut into it. If possible, why don't you change the "E" to make it match the "M" or vice-versa? Like cut triangles into the letter instead of using rectangles. Give it a try. Aside from that, the message of the graphic is clear and the two main stock photos are relevant and visible on the poster. It's nicely edit but the only other thing that bothers me is Eunji, who is a bit darker than Myungsoo. If you can adjust the light on her a bit more, that would be good. Also, the heart between the two sort of sticks out like a sore thumb. It's visible but the background texture is distorting the shape of the heart. Either put an outline/ around it or perhaps make it smaller, I think this would be good to go.
I hope this review was helpful. :)
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