The Temptation

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Han Saejin was an ordinary girl who just left Busan for Seoul. She had never expected that she would meet someone from her past when she was willing to forget him. What would happen in her life when the trouble maker Byun Baekhyun always made her daily life felt like hell, and the very calm and gorgeous Oh Sehun came to save her like a prince in Wonderland?

Characters:

 

Byun Baekhyun

Grandson of School Principal. Cold-hearted guy who likes to make fun of the people around him. He's basically a lonely person who needs to be protected by someone.

 

Oh Sehun

A quiet boy who rarely talks. Has crush on his own homeroom teacher, but his life has changed after he met Sae Jin.

 

Han Sae Jin

An ordinary girl from Busan who came to Seoul for continuing her study. She has problems with his father who left her few years ago and decided to live with her mother even though she's currently living in the dormitory alone. She hates Baekhyun and his gang, but she couldn't deny that Sehun is attractive.

 

Foreword

Hello all !!

This is my very first english FF on asianfanfics (lol)

Please forgive me if there might be any grammatical error because English definitely is not my first language^^ but don't be afraid, I'll try my best to make this story special for you ;)

find me on twitter  : @Gwiyeomidori

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psm710 #1
Chapter 7: am I dreaming? I'm not, right? Please tell me I'm not cause I'm too happy that you've updated this OMG!! Anw Sehun likes her? Af I can feel a competition here XD I like how Sae Jin was angry to Luhan that's cool she looks so strong ㅋㅋ
I'll anticipate the next chapters from you~^^
psm710 #2
Chapter 5: I've just started to read it a few minutes ago then I found myself finished these 5 chapters. I'm going to look forward to the next chapters. Hope your problems will solve properly. Authornim, fighting!
BBhyunhunter #3
Chapter 4: what is this??? I am on blank state when I read "luhan is baekhyun's lovely brother". you are killing me writer-nim!! LOL
I am waiting for your another chapters. please, make sure there is no more delay post. hahaha I really waiting for "baekhyun-saejin-luhan" scene
hope you will get your newest notebook ^^
Ryuubi242 #4
Chapter 3: in chap 2 jiyoung said that sehun likes her sister, elder girl isn't she?? made me think about Miranda Kerr _ _"

I'll scream with my loudest voice if in Sae Jin's position. baekhyun wake up suddenly. that's look like a died body try to life again *don't imagine it*

I'll go to chap 4, see ya! :))
Ryuubi242 #5
Chapter 2: whoaaa~ why why??
oh sae Jin-ah~
for the second I'm speechless. oh, I should go to the next chapter soon!

oh but wait! can u guess me ??
honestly I'm your old reader!

I'm flyrain24 who forgot my password TT
and I made the new one :"

ok just that, I'll go to the next chapter!

sampai berjumpa midori-sshi! ^^
flyrain24 #6
Chapter 1: ah, right! in this chapter I want to be in Han Sae Jin position!
I can imagine that Sehun was very damn y and awesome with his lips habit even if he was a fcking damn playboy! and oh really I want to have an overportective brother like Umin TT
wait, kyuhyun?
whoa, Mr.Cho, congrats! your name mentioned in this awesome ff!

good job bae! keep writing senpai nim! ^^
flyrain24 #7
/pray for my comment that it will be appear on comment box/

ok, I just wanna say that it was so cool!

yah, the casts are adorable boys sebaek.

I'm S.P.E.E.C.H.L.E.S.S !!

terimakasih senpai-nim, indirectly you added my limited vocabulary LOL

see ya in my next -annoying- comment, midori-san!
kaihae9486 #8
Chapter 4: I just knew you've updated the new chapter! chukkaeyoo~
and there's also Chae Rim in this story ^^
keep on writing! I'm waiting for the next chapter
and best regards from Baekhyun and Sehun from TLP INA last saturday
I wish you can be there with me and our friends next year :))
chuu :*
FLeeny #9
Chapter 3: nice plot! i wonder what will happen next. pls update soon ^^
kaihae9486 #10
Chapter 1: well done you lil sist!
you should've made your debut here long long time ago~
have you told ani about this fic? I'm sure she will be surprised like we did.
"that Kyuhyun guy" Lol Minseok hahaha
and never forget your forever main character hyejin too ^^
if you want to borrow my laptop to write the next chapter just ask me kkkk

fighting author nim!
lots of xoxo from byun for you! :p
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