Chapter 1

Criminal Love (DISCONTINUED)
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Aya woke up the next morning with a terrible headache, it was a very bad idea to drink so much yesterday. Not only that, she got awoken mainly because of the same nightmare again. It was more like a simple dream but sometimes it can be considered an awful thing if it contains painful memories that you would want to forget.

The memories of what happened when she was 17 still flash in her head, she always tried to erase it but in vain. She was now 25, it's been 8years now, but she was just thinking of how far away he must be now, and he still hate her for nothing. She just scoffed a bit and shook her head; he wasn’t even thinking of her and now its been so many years already.

She just wanted to forget about him and move on.

She was taken from her thoughts when she was dragged closer to someone’s body. She groaned a bit closing her eyes as she felt soft lips kissing her neck. She accidently let out a low moan.

“Chanyeol.” She called out softly as her hands were roaming around his bared back.

She just moved away from his hold and just laid on the bed next to him. From what she remembered they were celebrating someone’s birthday and they were all drinking to the merry. She remembered just drinking too much that his colleague had to bring her back home.

But she still had some consciousness when they both had last night.

It won’t be the first time anyway.

Eunhae chuckled a bit as Chanyeol w

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snowtaems
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Chapter 6: This story plot had so much potential, despite some minor errors in terms of grammar.
It’s a pity you discontinued it TT
Kurosawa_Shizuka #2
Chapter 5: Ahhh please update this! I enjoy your writing a lot so I've decided to read all your stories! I really like this story :) Author-ssi, please update soon! ^-^
noomin #3
Chapter 5: Wht will tae say??
noomin #4
Chapter 4: Update soooon plzzz
TheKpopper_ #5
Chapter 1: 1.When you write, dont repeat ur words! Like 'again' "I had dream again of that terrible nightmare" stop here..no need to put again..again!
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2.you should accord ur verbs! Like you wrote 'flash' in this sentence it should be "Flashes".
3.The line where Eunhae asks Chanyeol what happened last night, shes like in a curious mood, right? Then you should put it like that: "C-c-chanyeol what happened....." shes is curious but hesitate to asks since shes drunk!
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4.Theres a part that dont makes sence...they were ON THE BED, when did chanyeol got the time to put her against the wall even if you said that the wall was close? You should have put something like: 'in a blink of an eye chanyeol put me against the wall' or something like that..ok.
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5.I think you missed a word in this sentence: "He my neck" and he started her neck, i think you missed a word cuz i didnt understand the He my neck thingy! xD
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6.Gotta praise you here. The line Key said: "Aaaa what the heck is that" seems like what Key would really say! Tehee! x)
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Overall the plot story is good! But you should revise your verbes a bit! xD theres some mistakes here and there! But well people wont mind them! ㅎ-ㅎ
Keep it up! :)