Criminal Love (DISCONTINUED)

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Description

Being a police officer isn't that easy

But what if something from your past came back

 

Would you face it or run away from it?

Foreword

You just finished checking a part of a town.

You returned back to the police station.

You find out that a criminal need to stay with you.

Will you accept it when you found out that it was someone you never expect to see and though you hate.

 

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snowtaems #1
Chapter 6: This story plot had so much potential, despite some minor errors in terms of grammar.
It’s a pity you discontinued it TT
Kurosawa_Shizuka #2
Chapter 5: Ahhh please update this! I enjoy your writing a lot so I've decided to read all your stories! I really like this story :) Author-ssi, please update soon! ^-^
noomin #3
Chapter 5: Wht will tae say??
noomin #4
Chapter 4: Update soooon plzzz
TheKpopper_ #5
Chapter 1: 1.When you write, dont repeat ur words! Like 'again' "I had dream again of that terrible nightmare" stop here..no need to put again..again!
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2.you should accord ur verbs! Like you wrote 'flash' in this sentence it should be "Flashes".
3.The line where Eunhae asks Chanyeol what happened last night, shes like in a curious mood, right? Then you should put it like that: "C-c-chanyeol what happened....." shes is curious but hesitate to asks since shes drunk!
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4.Theres a part that dont makes sence...they were ON THE BED, when did chanyeol got the time to put her against the wall even if you said that the wall was close? You should have put something like: 'in a blink of an eye chanyeol put me against the wall' or something like that..ok.
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5.I think you missed a word in this sentence: "He my neck" and he started her neck, i think you missed a word cuz i didnt understand the He my neck thingy! xD
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6.Gotta praise you here. The line Key said: "Aaaa what the heck is that" seems like what Key would really say! Tehee! x)
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Overall the plot story is good! But you should revise your verbes a bit! xD theres some mistakes here and there! But well people wont mind them! ㅎ-ㅎ
Keep it up! :)
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