THREE

EXOPLANET
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She hurt all over. That was what woke her up. She could feel burn and a dull ache in various areas of her body: her neck, left arm, calves. There was a distinct whirring of machinery to her left, complemented by high pitched beeps at regular intervals. Suji couldn't quite remember what happened before this, her memory a blur of colours and sensations. For the first few minutes, Suji could only take in her surroundings through its sounds and smells, her senses overwhelmed by her fatigue and pain.

Questions came later.

She forced her eyes open to a slit, feeling as though they had been weakly glued shut. It took a while for her to register the colours and situation, feeling more confusion than fear or panic. She was propped up on something, allowing her sit up somewhat vertically, her legs stretched out before her, covered by a white cotton blanket. It was somewhat dark; heavy blue curtains surrounding the bed through which a dim light protruded from beyond.

Suji glanced around her, only just noticing the dark mass of hair brushing against her right arm. Minhyun sat on a stool at her bedside, leaning forward until his head lay face down by her side, one hand dangling from his awkward position and another loosely holding hers'. She reached out her left hand to touch him, to feel his soft hair which always seemed to smell of fruit and his cologne, but was distracted by a small stinging pinch, the IV cord halting her actions.

 

"Are you awake now? It's been a while!" A middle aged nurse swept the curtains aside, flooding Suji with light from the rest of the ward, and smiled warmly at her dumbfounded expression as she pressed a few buttons on the IV monitor. She tilted her chin at the stationary figure beside you, continuing in her thick Daegu accent "You've got yourself a keeper there Honey. Never left your side the whole time you've been here."

"Why- Why?" Suji eked out, her voice rough a trembling from disuse. She cleared and continued, "Why am I here? I mean, what-"

"You mean you don't remember?" The nurse shot her a bewildered look, "I'm probably not the one to tell you. Look Hon, I'll ring up your daddy here okay? He's probably upstairs in a consultation with one of his patients." She left in a flurry of wild hand gestures and tapping heels.

 

Suji sighed, fluffing up Minhyun's hair absentmindedly and tracing the shell of his ear with the nail of her index finger as she waited for the nurse to return. In his position, there was no doubt that he would wake up with a stiff back and a crick in his neck.

The room was quiet again, aside from the dull bustle of the ward and Minhyun's even breathing, at least until her mother burst through the curtains with the nurse at her heels.

"Suji ya!" She wailed as she threw her arms around Suji's neck, nearly choking her daughter from the shock of having her mother suddenly appear in a wave of tears and crushing limbs, as well as toppling the sleeping boy from the edge of the bed, "You're finally awake, my poor baby! Are you hurt? Doctor Park said that the trauma of the quake added onto the heat wave across Seoul must have caused you to overheat and pass out."

Suji exchanged a perplexed look with the bewildered nurse as she stuck to the wall like a limpet, as far away from her employer's seemingly crazy wife. She had to somehow control her mother before rumours of the head neurosurgeon's wife going batty in the recovery ward circulated the hospital.

 

"Umma" She mumbled against her mother's cashmere throw, "I'm really fine. I can't really remember what happened but I'm feeling okay right now. You're freaking out the whole ward."

At her words, Hwasung Group's executive director straightened up and her face grew impasse, every bit a professional. Such was her transformation from the hysterical overbearing woman that the nurse felt compelled to rub at the glasses to confirm that the person before her was, indeed, that of only a few moments ago.

"Nurse Lee." She addressed the alarmed woman behind her who replied with a stuttering acknowledgement, "Don't you think this ward is a little too noisy for Suji to rest? I would have thought that the nursing staff would be qualified enough to decided whether or not to admit a patient to their own personal room."

Suji rolled her eyes at her mother's words. Once she became invested into her 'executive director' mode, she would stop at nothing to get what she wanted, not even her own reputation.

 

Nurse Lee bowed and apol

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darkpleasure
#1
Chapter 18: I finally found some time to read the chapter! (busy busy busy~)
Alright, till chapter 17, this story had more of brother-sister relationships for me but now, I totally ship Suji with Chanyeol. He was so sweet and nice to her that I can't but wonder if there's some kind of interest towards her. I doubt he would do such things to any human. Suji leaning on Chanyeol for help and company is so adorable when her facade is unwearable most of the time.
Kris's part was overwhelming. I couldn't but want to give him a hug because, frankly, he's in the worst position any of the characters of the story are in (with the exception of Tao and Chen who are merely mentioned so far). The poor man's heart is broken and to hear someone you hold dear to you scream for help when you can do nothing to save them... it's the worst thing. And now, I understand his wild nature and why he had acted like that towards Suji. Although it was unfair since she had nothing to do with what happened, I understand him. Also, I still want to burn down the Shin Corporation. Maybe even more now that I know that everything started by a man who pretty much was looked after by them. Talk about a betrayal!
Can't wait for the next update~<3
joejoexnielie #2
Chapter 1: omygodd i really love this but umm..u know i kinda love kriskai, chankai, kaibeak sorta am a boyxboy yaio lol like this kind of sotry ( http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/758460/the-one-who-fell-in-love-mpreg-exo-slightangst-kriskai-kairis )
darkpleasure
#3
Chapter 17: huhuhu I hope you're ready to read my long a$$ comment. *evil smirk*
I will start off by saying that your writing is so captivating! The plot has been interesting since chapter 1 and I haven't been this engrossed in a fic for a while now. I also love Suji's character since she acts like most wealthy people- snob, without apologizing, being accepted and feared just by existing/standing. That alone makes her world clash too much with EXO's and I love how she slowly becomes more human as they interact. (the interactions between the ten and Suji are so precious<3)
Suho acting like a brother is quite lovely and Suji has already realized his role in her life, which gives her someone she does not need to hide behind a mask in front of. He and Suji are my favourite characters, along with Kris. He does seem like a good person but is just too hurt to trust anyone, but I can't wait to see his walls break and accept at least Suji entirely.
Also, that Shin Corporation needs to be burned down. Minho as well. And his father (just for my personal pleasure). The things he does is sickening but I will wait to see how the ten aliens and Suji deal with him in the future.
A slight addition; I don't want to be rude but I noticed like two typos in the two first chapters. They were only two but I just put this down in case you want to know. ^^ They don't ruin the quality though.
Okay, this is like 1/5 of what I have to say but it's going to get too long otherwise. I hope you update soon~ I'll become a faithful reader from now on~ ^^ Keep up the great work~<3
BananasForJae
#4
Chapter 17: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAGAGAGA
EXOtic-world
#5
Chapter 17: Oh my god Kaisoo is the bomb you have so done this ship justice in this story, and look who the naughty one is... I seriously thought it would've been Kai... I expected more from you Kyungsoo :P
Nami98
#6
Chapter 17: HOLY THIS STORY<3 Thank you for writing on my wall! The Lord has blessed you with amazing writing skill XD this is seriously awesome! I love this plot! Update soon!!!!
girl_inlove #7
Chapter 17: Ok. So I just finished reading all the 17 chapters that's been updated ad to tell you, I'm in a state of shock right now. How can you write such long updates?! Lol
You're such a good writer. You have a very wide imagination which made this story interesting for me. You know, I love stories with this kind of genre. I just don't know how to write my own.
And I really envy your way of writing. Bravo! How will I ever write something in a real writers way? Haha. Anyway! Good job. I'll be waiting for your next update. d(*^*)b
EXOtic-world
#8
Chapter 16: Hunhan is the most adorable thing, and oh my god Xiulay... This is so perf i'm gonna cry ;W;
xomatic
#9
Chapter 16: dude you how did you even double update whaaaatttt wooooowww authornim is daebaaakkkk???? ugh you are just on point these days, you on fire