TWO

EXOPLANET
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"Oppa, I didn't see you afterwards." Suji pouted into Hyorin's phone, having lost hers in the debris. She leaned against the front gate where everyone was waiting for their parents to pick them up, wheeling their bicycles out or walking home.Minhyun had never broken a promise to her before and she was going to make sure he didn't start now, having been taught by her father that excessive leniency bred bad habits.

"I know. Abeoji felt the quake and sent people to pick me up. I tried to find you but they forced me to go."

"What did he say?" Suji's brows knitted together in concern. Minhyun had been feeling pressured by his father about their company affairs lately and Suji felt the need to stand up for her boyfriend, despite his father being the CEO of one of the largest conglomerates in the world.If she hadn't been sure of the man's approval, she would never have dared raise a brow against him.

"Nothing much. He just wanted to make sure I was alright. I heard about your friend, Minah. Is she alright?"

"Minah?" Her brows twitched even further together, "She's not really my friend, but she's fine. She just passed out from shock and blood loss."

"Alright."

"Will you pick me up?" Suji flashed Hyorin a quick smile as she looked on and turned away, hand covering over the receiver, words accusing yet her tone a cute whine, "You promised. You promised you'd walk me home. What if something happens on my way home?" She could almost hear him fall apart on the other end of the receiver, the short pause signifying the heavy burden placed upon his shoulders.

Of course he would cave. Her aegyo was her iron hold over the boy.

"Wait a second." His voice broke off in a burst of static and Suji frowned at the cellphone in annoyance. It was an old model, hardly worth anything these days.

 

She tossed it back to Hyorin and looked her up and down nonchalantly, "I need to get you a new phone Hyorin-ah. Yours has been outdated for several years."

The shorter girl looked up at her in a mixture of disbelief and excitement, "You're joking right? Seriously?"

Suji scoffed and rounded on her, hands on hips, "Of course! I'm Kim Suji! It's not like it's any trouble for me to get a new phone for you."

She felt a light tap on her shoulder and sighed before turning around. She was really getting quite sick of all these boys always getting in her- She blinked, unsure for a moment whether she was imagining the figure before her but the tall handsome boy grinning before her was so realistic and so utterly Minhyun that she couldn't believe she didn't recognise him from his touch alone.

 

"Oppa!" Suji threw her arms around his neck and felt his wrap around her waist and hold her tightly against him. She breathed in deeply, the light smell of his cologne mixed with the lingering fruity scent of his shampoo so distinctly familiar that it felt as though the day had never happened and they were simply about to go home together after another ordinary school day, "When did you get here? Were you here the whole time?"

"I was watching close by." She felt his chin move against her hair and knew that he was probably smiling, basking in her attention.

"I knew you wouldn't leave me." She patted his shoulder gently and pulled away.

Minhyun took her hand an interlinked her fingers with his before finally turning to their star struck company, "Have a nice day Hyomin-sshi."

He shot the girl a grin before leading Suji away, missing Hyorin's whisper of "That's not my name…"

 

 

The walk home from school was always a moment of joy for Suji since being able to walk beside Minhyun like an ordinary couple in public would change once Minho officially worked for the company. A reporter had once trailed them from school, taken pictures of them together and attempted to blackmail Minhyun's father by threatening to release them to the public. Within the hour, that reporter was charged with blackmail, child harassment, illegal distribution of personal information as well as a whole string of other offenses, some of which may or may not be true.

Since that time, not a single member of the paparazzi dared to touch Shin Corp's golden boy and his girl. At least, not until the new CEO, Minho, is crowned in a few weeks, in the light of their father's illness.

Despite Minhyun's popularity at school, he has never been noticed much throughout elementary and middle school, having been a late bloomer up till the age of fifteen. Throughout that time, he had been Suji's shadow, known only as Kim Suji's childhood friend.

A weed in her garden; a waste of her time.

He was sickly looking, as though a puff of air could blow him away. Nobody ever understood why Suji defended him, sat with him, turned to him whenever she was happy or sad, at any time of the day. It made no sense that a girl who had everything going for her would pay any attention to a nobody half a head shorter than her, let alone treat him like something that mattered. What nobody had even considered was that he did matter to her.

He was her whole world.

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darkpleasure
#1
Chapter 18: I finally found some time to read the chapter! (busy busy busy~)
Alright, till chapter 17, this story had more of brother-sister relationships for me but now, I totally ship Suji with Chanyeol. He was so sweet and nice to her that I can't but wonder if there's some kind of interest towards her. I doubt he would do such things to any human. Suji leaning on Chanyeol for help and company is so adorable when her facade is unwearable most of the time.
Kris's part was overwhelming. I couldn't but want to give him a hug because, frankly, he's in the worst position any of the characters of the story are in (with the exception of Tao and Chen who are merely mentioned so far). The poor man's heart is broken and to hear someone you hold dear to you scream for help when you can do nothing to save them... it's the worst thing. And now, I understand his wild nature and why he had acted like that towards Suji. Although it was unfair since she had nothing to do with what happened, I understand him. Also, I still want to burn down the Shin Corporation. Maybe even more now that I know that everything started by a man who pretty much was looked after by them. Talk about a betrayal!
Can't wait for the next update~<3
joejoexnielie #2
Chapter 1: omygodd i really love this but umm..u know i kinda love kriskai, chankai, kaibeak sorta am a boyxboy yaio lol like this kind of sotry ( http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/758460/the-one-who-fell-in-love-mpreg-exo-slightangst-kriskai-kairis )
darkpleasure
#3
Chapter 17: huhuhu I hope you're ready to read my long a$$ comment. *evil smirk*
I will start off by saying that your writing is so captivating! The plot has been interesting since chapter 1 and I haven't been this engrossed in a fic for a while now. I also love Suji's character since she acts like most wealthy people- snob, without apologizing, being accepted and feared just by existing/standing. That alone makes her world clash too much with EXO's and I love how she slowly becomes more human as they interact. (the interactions between the ten and Suji are so precious<3)
Suho acting like a brother is quite lovely and Suji has already realized his role in her life, which gives her someone she does not need to hide behind a mask in front of. He and Suji are my favourite characters, along with Kris. He does seem like a good person but is just too hurt to trust anyone, but I can't wait to see his walls break and accept at least Suji entirely.
Also, that Shin Corporation needs to be burned down. Minho as well. And his father (just for my personal pleasure). The things he does is sickening but I will wait to see how the ten aliens and Suji deal with him in the future.
A slight addition; I don't want to be rude but I noticed like two typos in the two first chapters. They were only two but I just put this down in case you want to know. ^^ They don't ruin the quality though.
Okay, this is like 1/5 of what I have to say but it's going to get too long otherwise. I hope you update soon~ I'll become a faithful reader from now on~ ^^ Keep up the great work~<3
BananasForJae
#4
Chapter 17: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAGAGAGA
EXOtic-world
#5
Chapter 17: Oh my god Kaisoo is the bomb you have so done this ship justice in this story, and look who the naughty one is... I seriously thought it would've been Kai... I expected more from you Kyungsoo :P
Nami98
#6
Chapter 17: HOLY THIS STORY<3 Thank you for writing on my wall! The Lord has blessed you with amazing writing skill XD this is seriously awesome! I love this plot! Update soon!!!!
girl_inlove #7
Chapter 17: Ok. So I just finished reading all the 17 chapters that's been updated ad to tell you, I'm in a state of shock right now. How can you write such long updates?! Lol
You're such a good writer. You have a very wide imagination which made this story interesting for me. You know, I love stories with this kind of genre. I just don't know how to write my own.
And I really envy your way of writing. Bravo! How will I ever write something in a real writers way? Haha. Anyway! Good job. I'll be waiting for your next update. d(*^*)b
EXOtic-world
#8
Chapter 16: Hunhan is the most adorable thing, and oh my god Xiulay... This is so perf i'm gonna cry ;W;
xomatic
#9
Chapter 16: dude you how did you even double update whaaaatttt wooooowww authornim is daebaaakkkk???? ugh you are just on point these days, you on fire