I'm Sorry

My Player

So you guys really deserve an explanation for everything and I'm sorry this has been delayed for so long

Basically what's happened is... My old laptop broke. So with that was also all files related to this story, the story plots I had planned and the file of all the chapters. I know I already said that I do not plan on continuing writing this story but the laptop breaking was really the final straw on any motivation I had in this story. 

From what I remember of what I had planned out, Mark and Soori were going to become official rather soon. After Soori's birthday chapters I would have made a few more theater romance scenes for the couple before they finally get together. After getting together I was planning on writing a tiny bit about jealous classmates but Soori just stomping on them because she's badass like that. This story would have ended somewhere along there, and I planned on a tiny sequel of a summer vacation where Soori takes her annual vacations to some foreign country. This vacation would have taken her back to her home in LA, and as luck would have it, Mark's family also planned to go to LA. I was contemplating between if the two families stay in the same resort or hotel or neighborhood or not, but I did have many plans for them to interact together in LA. I had Mark meeting Soori's old friends as well as Soori meeting his. And a few jealous Mark scenes with Soori being popular around the boys~ I don't remember much of any drama taking place here other than just Mark and Soori growing more used to dating each other as Mark is disliked by Soori's older cousin/the boy she trusts the most and they have to work to get over obstacles like that and make their relationship more stable. Of course, Soori trusts that her cousin will grow to like Mark but Mark grows more and more afraid and wants desperately to impress him, at the end the cousin sees how much Mark cares for Soori after some injury and he starts to approve. Finally in the third book, and the last one, I would have entered in all sorts of evils. It would be their last year of high school, so 3 years being together and all sorts of things start happening. First, enter back Jungkook and he starts flirting with Soori during a time of trouble for the couple as Mark tells Soori he loves her for the first time but Soori has trouble saying the words back. Enter in Soori's dad for reasons I really do not remember what it was I just know I planned to bring him back. Along with this in the background are all the friends as well, Bambam and Serah are still going strong and JB starts falling for Jinhee more but she continues to reject him. That was as far in that book that I had somewhat planned out. I was planning on ending a little realistically and showing Mark and Soori split ways as they go different routes for college and their future career. I was also going to end on a bit of a bittersweet note as I would have also included the end with Soori finally saying the words i love you back to Mark. Yes i made her take 3-4 years to say it back, I just felt that sort of time would be relevant with a character like her. I might have played around and shown them fade to black to suggest they also made love but Soori is nowhere close to being a character like that. 

I would not have broken them up at any point (of high school) after getting them together I just want to make that clear. But any high school relationship is rocky no matter how long or short it lasts, that was what I wanted to highlight in the story, no matter how tough things are, if you truly love and care for each other it'll work out in the end. I understand most people do not stay with their high school sweethearts in the long run, but that's simply my fantasy and I wanted to focus on that sort of fantasy life. To mess around with you guys I did also plan on an epilogue that would tie the story together with this theme, and the epilogue would be post college. Mark and Soori kept in touch and saw each other from time to time, they still held title of being each other's boyfriend and girlfriend but didn't prioritize each other while studying. Post college, right after their graduation as they are getting promotions from being interns and the like, they bump into each other on their way to move into their new apartments, and decide to pick things right back up from where they left off in high school. This doesn't sound too realistic though, so I would have played around with it a little more because I would want to keep Mark true to his character as well and there very well could have been a chance that they decided to break it off during college and Mark did his thing with other girls but I also felt like after 3-4 years of dating Soori, that side of him would have died, as he said so himself he could change with the help of Soori. The epilogue could have taken many different directions but it would have ended with them making time for each other once again as they get settled into their careers. 

The story took a much more drastic turn than what I had originally anticipated in starting out the story. I did originally plan for Soori being a sweet girl and Mark being the complete player, but as I started writing I felt gross writing those types of characters and I tweaked them slightly. Instead I changed JB and Jinhee to be the complete sweetheart and douchebag, and no I would have not let them get together in the end. I wanted to keep them as true to their characters as possible and I could not pull a scenario of them having a stable relationship with their personalities. I might have also turned Bambam and Serah into an on and off relationship, because I felt Serah's character could have matched in with that sort of relationship. 

So... I've told you guys all these details because I want to encourage any of you (if you want, I'm not really counting on it but it'd be cool to see) to write out any part of the story the way you would have wanted to see it. Or, even rewrite an existing chapter to your preference. If you're satisfied with how it comes out, please do post but also please do link it to me and give me some credit. I'll be happy to link your chapters here as well~ (whether you're satisfied or not please do show me what you've written cuz I'm genuinely curious if anyone would do it) 

And lastly, I'm sorry I never really did finish this story. I wish I made more time for this before I became a high school senior, because life gets harder the closer you get to having to be an adult :c

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Here's the thing. I want to update more than anything. However, I'm on vacation and no laptop. Also, I'm suffering writers block for this chapter. Sorry

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riefor3v3r #1
Chapter 30: It was getting so good too
thelillcat #2
Chapter 29: Please do finish it.
thelillcat #3
Chapter 29: Nooooooooooooo~~~~~~~~~~~~
ZelYTStarling
#4
Chapter 29: Chapter 29:Please finish it. I want to see them together and also i really love this story
Linebae_93 #5
Chapter 28: I finished it!!! God!! I started like7pm I guess?? and now it's 1:43am...I know this is crazy but hey this is me..I can't fall asleep when I'm dying to know what happened next..kekeke But too sad it's end here..update soon authornim~~~ and I actually didn't realize that I had left a lot of comments in here..that's creepy actually!! I didn't know why I did it but I'm not regretting either since the story is good!!! I finished this story in a day and now I had tired eyes..I need to sleep and when I did it this story will eventually appears in my dreams.. which I gladly want..I mean who doesn't want to dream about MARK??? hahaha...okay this is out of topic already.. seriously I'm crazy because I read this story in just a few hours.. I'm tired but somehow it's worth it... hahahaha...Update soon authornim~~~ I really really really love this story!!!!!
Linebae_93 #6
Chapter 27: Mark comforts her..poor Soori..his dad was a total jerk!!
Linebae_93 #7
Chapter 25: so that's why she hesitated with Mark ~~ poor soori~~
Linebae_93 #8
Chapter 24: I think Mark mistaken by saying that Soori is cute because from my perspective he is the cute one!!! oh my god!!