◔ Review: Wouldn't Change A Thing

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WOULDN'T CHANGE A THING
by Babokwang30  RATING:
★★★★★ (87/100) Hi, author-nim. First of all, after seeing that your story was Baekyeol and fluff, and had a child character in it; I-I couldn't resist myself from playing a really cute song and to draw what I feel. LOL. I'm a crappy artist, but the story's vibe is really cute etc etc. By the way, the song I was playing is When I Was... When U Were... by S.M Ballad. Let's do the review!

(*NEW Rubric) Title (95%)- Simple, cute, interesting, light, bright and relevant. Having this seen as the title and seeing the poster and summary as I scrolled down felt so right on the skin.

Foreword (89%) - The foreword is okay, just a little bit unorganized. Though I like the poster, but I had a little hope that Chanhyun should have been there. That could have impressed me and other readers more; bringing out the essence of the story. And for the appearance of the foreword/desc., use a layout or simply just align photos and texts, add borders, use dividers... that would be enough.

(*NEW Rubric) First Impression & Anticipation (93%)- Well, this rubric shows how the entertaining aura of a story gives to a user who hasn't read it yet. First impression was great, disregarding of the characters, I actually like how the summary goes. Which was a similar one that I had just a few days ago, and I saw there was something already like it... Which was a little bummer, but as for you it is unique and most importantly, it drag in readers to read. Of course.

Story Proper (80%) - First chapter I noticed some things already. I like how the first part works though, it was really cute and brilliant to start off with Chanhyun who was hid
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I'm sorry for the delay guys. I'm really busy these days because of school orientations + heavy chores. But I'll do your requests this upcoming week. :D

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dolcelatte #1
Chapter 1: requested! thank you so mich
pearlgoldeu
#2
creamcoloured-
#3
Chapter 3: Requested! ^^
paradisease
#4
Chapter 13: Oh wow. I didn't expect my request to come so soon. c: And it's alright! o/
Yeah, I'm not really much of a fan in fixing the description/foreword too much since I in thinking up stuff to put in the description/foreword. ;u; And thanks for the tips. But I...don't really know how I could fix those mistakes, since I think my mistake is the way I typed it all-in-all(?) q u q
And what do you mean...Luhan's situation is too personified? Forgive my stupid T^T
I intended it to sound insignificant as possible since it's "Jongin's monotonous life". Lol i don't even know what i'm typing now. orz
Well, I don't know, the goal is to make readers want to know more? I think. (and i terribly failed to achieve my goal orz)

AGAIN, thank you so much for the review! T^T
honeylove
#5
Chapter 1: Hi, I would just like to say if you want to refuse my request, it's okay. I don't want to trouble you by reading that extra long story of mine. Besides, I already got a review from another shop so you can drop it if you like.
MissLovergirl360
#6
Chapter 2: Do I just request via comments?
yeolwho05
#7
I requested for a review!
Will be waiting patiently. :)
PaperHearts14
#8
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OnlySweets
#9
requested a poster! thank you ahead of time
aleric
#10
Here's to reaching 100+ subscribers and for many more to come! :)