—REVIEW—
THE PLAYFUL HEAT
by Cutie-Pie

Yes! Someone requested for a Kaisoo fic review. Good choice of going here, author-nim! (laughs)

1. Title (100%)- The title is a 100% turn on! It's quirky and witty; I just love how you placed the two words together and it just brings up a whole story by itself.

2. Foreword (95%) - Clean, fun and pastel! I like it, it suits everything well. Though I had a personal problem with the Foreword section. The letters looked suffocated (too close to each other), but that isn't a bad thing. It's just that I think I'd notice and read it better if it had more text spacing.

3. First Impression & Anticipation (93%)- The genre, the characters, and the feel/vibe that the foreword gives is really anticipating me to read what's inside. And I think it's the same

4. Story Proper (93%) - Gosh, no text selection again, for the second time. But I guess I wouldn't really need them here. I'll be doing corrections and stuffs, praises, etc.

You said, if you could check out closely on my grammar, that would be lovely!, so here it goes:

He scratches a back of his neck = He scratches the back of his neck

Kyungsoo sight again = Kyungsoo sighs again

He just found a reason to be annoying little ... = He just found a reason to be an annoying little ...

...he finally manages to speak up = I think it's better to use managed since you used 'after' in the first line.

A game ends with the victorious... = Which I think should be, "The game ends with the victorious", because it was followed by addressing to a noun.

water still dripping of his hair = This is one of my common mistakes too; "water still dripping off his hair" 

I throw it away = threw

Jongin's eye are wide as Kyungsoo's every time he hears that food is wasted = Jongin's eyes a