—REVIEW—
BROKEN DREAM
by 130193

I'm constantly modifying my request chapters. I just think the last ones were hard to read. Is it okay now, author-nim? :)

Title (85%)- The title is very simple. Most of the times when I read a good title, I get overwhelming emotions. Titles like this don't have that much element, and it feels to plain... personally, of course.

Foreword (85%) - The foreword is unorganized. The poster had dull colors that I couldn't stare at it for a long period of time. The texts on the foreword was weirdly aligned, and I couldn't just see the relevance of it. Sorry if I am that stupid.

First Impression & Anticipation (83%)- I honestly had to say something about this. The foreword was a little messy, as I said at the rubric above. That's why I didn't have a good impression to it, and the anticipation swirled in to some voice whispering in my mind that I shouldn't read it. I'm not schizophreniac, it's just that what was at the front wasn't that attractive. It's the cover that drags in readers, because in that you must immediately show them what is inside. So you must grab that opportunity to beautify your foreword, poster and description. Although I think it is somehow parallel... I guess.

Story Proper (90%) - The plot was an okay for me, it was good and I felt that it had a unique and interesting taste to it. Though the dialogs really threw me off as I expected more from it. The details were weird too