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PAST THE GLARING SCREEN
by _junmash

Hi, author-nim. I'm really busy by now so I'd just be detailed in what you wanted me to focus on. I'll promise I'd still be thoughtful to it. (grins) And basically what you asked for was the only thing you needed.

1. Title (98%) Stunning.

2. Foreword (90%) - Add designs or organize it artistically to brighten things up.

3. First Impression & Anticipation (90%)- Not that much because this kind of plot is unfamiliar for me, and the poster doesn't give too much detail to what the story is, but it gives the mood. But it's okay :)

4. Story Proper (87%) - Your request was: Please tell me something about the flow and the foreword. Also if there are some plot holes and things that don't make sense. Thanks so much and I hope you accept this request. ;, so here it goes:

But before that:

He'll just print it tomorrow first thing = I find this weird and I have no idea how I can correct this. Think of revising this. 

Okay. here we are.

First of all, I'd consider this thing as a psychological art. I don't know how that hits you, but this drabble is abstract, dark, gloomy, neurotic, etc etc. The f