◔ Review: Wouldn't Change A Thing
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WOULDN'T CHANGE A THING
by Babokwang30 RATING:
★★★★★ (87/100) Hi, author-nim. First of all, after seeing that your story was Baekyeol and fluff, and had a child character in it; I-I couldn't resist myself from playing a really cute song and to draw what I feel. LOL. I'm a crappy artist, but the story's vibe is really cute etc etc. By the way, the song I was playing is When I Was... When U Were... by S.M Ballad. Let's do the review!
(*NEW Rubric) Title (95%)- Simple, cute, interesting, light, bright and relevant. Having this seen as the title and seeing the poster and summary as I scrolled down felt so right on the skin.
Foreword (89%) - The foreword is okay, just a little bit unorganized. Though I like the poster, but I had a little hope that Chanhyun should have been there. That could have impressed me and other readers more; bringing out the essence of the story. And for the appearance of the foreword/desc., use a layout or simply just align photos and texts, add borders, use dividers... that would be enough.
(*NEW Rubric) First Impression & Anticipation (93%)- Well, this rubric shows how the entertaining aura of a story gives to a user who hasn't read it yet. First impression was great, disregarding of the characters, I actually like how the summary goes. Which was a similar one that I had just a few days ago, and I saw there was something already like it... Which was a little bummer, but as for you it is unique and most importantly, it drag in readers to read. Of course.
Story Proper (80%) - First chapter I noticed some things already. I like how the first part works though, it was really cute and brilliant to start off with Chanhyun who was hid
WOULDN'T CHANGE A THING
by Babokwang30 RATING:
★★★★★ (87/100) Hi, author-nim. First of all, after seeing that your story was Baekyeol and fluff, and had a child character in it; I-I couldn't resist myself from playing a really cute song and to draw what I feel. LOL. I'm a crappy artist, but the story's vibe is really cute etc etc. By the way, the song I was playing is When I Was... When U Were... by S.M Ballad. Let's do the review!
(*NEW Rubric) Title (95%)- Simple, cute, interesting, light, bright and relevant. Having this seen as the title and seeing the poster and summary as I scrolled down felt so right on the skin.
Foreword (89%) - The foreword is okay, just a little bit unorganized. Though I like the poster, but I had a little hope that Chanhyun should have been there. That could have impressed me and other readers more; bringing out the essence of the story. And for the appearance of the foreword/desc., use a layout or simply just align photos and texts, add borders, use dividers... that would be enough.
(*NEW Rubric) First Impression & Anticipation (93%)- Well, this rubric shows how the entertaining aura of a story gives to a user who hasn't read it yet. First impression was great, disregarding of the characters, I actually like how the summary goes. Which was a similar one that I had just a few days ago, and I saw there was something already like it... Which was a little bummer, but as for you it is unique and most importantly, it drag in readers to read. Of course.
Story Proper (80%) - First chapter I noticed some things already. I like how the first part works though, it was really cute and brilliant to start off with Chanhyun who was hid
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