Chapter 5: "They're a bunch of crazies!"

Jumping To The Rescue

Chapter 5

 

            “May I propose to you…that maybe…they’re a bunch of crazies?”

            Hyoyeon sighed at Sunny’s words as they flagged down a cab.  They quickly got in and told the driver where to go.  Before Hyoyeon could even reply to Sunny, her unnie was expanding her wild theory.

            “Perhaps they’re simply sasaeng fans,” Sunny suggested, her eyes still wide and full of wonder.  “We shouldn’t have made contact with them.  Now they’ll think their fantasy is real.  Maybe we should call the police.”

            “Unnie,” Hyoyeon interrupted wearily.  “Maybe you’re right.  Maybe they are crazy.  But they saved my life.  Don’t you think that counts for something?”

            Sunny gave a shameful frown.  “Hyoyeon, I’m so happy they saved you, honest.  Even though I have my doubts about them…I’m grateful for them.”

            “And that’s perfectly fine,” Hyoyeon smiled.  “I have my doubts too.  But let’s honor their request.  Let’s keep this secret between you and me.  If they turn out to be sasaeng fans that kidnap us, we can do something about it.”

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thelittlegoguma
Hi everyone! With the story winding down, tell me what you've thought of it so far! And, are you worried about Soyul?? What do you want to happen?

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LiliMSOSHI #1
Chapter 32: Ou should definitely write a sequel
LiliMSOSHI #2
Chapter 32: OMG I absolutely love this story. Hehe I actually finished it in one day
lambhorns
#3
Chapter 32: okay wow i just have to say

that this was like the best fic i have ever read and that's not an exaggeration.
im like in love with your writing style, it's rather casual (like laid back) and your very flexible with words!!
and then the sentence structure is great too!! like you mix things up and it creates a nice flow to the story!!

and then the way you portrayed everyone was beautiful the poetic and somber jaejoong, his dialouge was so cheesy but it worked so well i loved it!!
and mommy gummi was so precious i love her!! the way you portrayed her was very realistic considering her situation.

i really wish you would've shown more of the rest of crayon pop, like choa and way struggling to connect with people and more of ellin's backstory as a dancer but i guess that's what prequels are for!!

like omg this is like the first crayon pop fic i've read and i'm really glad it was because this is amazing and i like finished it in two days okay
xQui-e-scentx #4
Chapter 32: Yaaaay! That was awesome!
tinajaque
#5
Chapter 32: Yes please!!! A prequel would be nice!!!

AWESOME story by the way :)
zephyrkaze
#6
Chapter 32: yeah, choa and way side story would be really good, looking forward to it :D
and about jaejoong and gummi's relationship... i have nothing to say but i hope they will continue to love each other
multisonicfan123 #7
Chapter 32: OMG please write about Choa and Way that'll be so cool. I teared up at the end and it was a great read.