CH 3

Rebuilding A Life
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A heavy pounding on his door pulled LuHan from his dreams of a beach, and his eyes fluttered open to be met with the unfamiliar sight of pale brown walls. He sat up quickly in surprise, but as his tired mind took in the sights of the room the former day’s happenings came back to him. With a groan he swung his legs out of bed, flinching at the cold chill that met him and pebbled his skin, and with a grumbled complaint he moved to the door to yank it open. “What?” He snapped, and Mrs. Luo merely gave him a tight smile.

“You will be downstairs to begin work in twenty minutes, LuHan,” she said firmly, and LuHan’s mouth dropped open as he tried to fathom how her mind worked. 

“I can’t get ready in twenty minutes, are you kidding me?!” He said, all pretense of respect going out of him in his irritation, and her eyes narrowed in response.

“Then maybe you should have gotten up the first three times I knocked on your door. Twenty minutes!” And off she went, back down the stairs, leaving LuHan to growl at her retreating back and slam the door. He stomped over to the dresser, eyeing the bed and contemplating just going back to sleep, but he figured that parole officers would probably come drag him out if he did that and so with a wordless grumble he grabbed a fresh set of clothing from the drawers and headed for the shower.

By the time he emerged from the shower, twenty minutes had passed and he knew that he would just have to go the day looking like hell if he wanted to be on time. His pride won, though, and ignoring the clock that was showing 9:46 he carefully combed and styled his hair, used his moisturizing cream that he had so missed while serving his time, and even applied a bit of cologne. As he finally opened his door to head downstairs his clock read 10:18 but he ignored the rudeness of his actions and entered the kitchen. He was greeted with the delicious scent of cooking meat and baked bread, and he reached out a hand to grab one of the sugared buns cooling on a wire rack above the ovens. 

A wooden spoon smacked him hard across the back of his knuckles and he let out a yelp of surprise and pain, his eyes looking immediately to old Tzu to see the man shaking his head and pointing the spoon at him in reproach. “If you wanted to eat you should have been down here on time,” he grouched, and LuHan drew up to his full height to try and intimidate the old man to give him food.

“Well maybe you should have told me what time to be down here,” he snipped back, and reached again for a sugar bun. This time a firm grip on his wrist stopped him and his eyes traveled past the large hand, down the sweatshirt clad arm, and into the face of the wheelchair man. His brows were drawn over his eyes and his lips were tight as he regarded LuHan, but when he spoke he was obviously struggling to keep his voice light.

“You heard Grandpa Tzu,” he said, then motioned behind him to a few buttered rolls on another cooling rack. “You may have one of those, just one, but tomorrow you’d best be downstairs by nine at the latest.”

LuHan yanked his hand out of the man’s grip, though he assumed it would take quite a bit of force to do it and so when the handicapped man let go easily, LuHan stumbled and almost fell on his rear. The other man moved his wheelchair through the kitchen with a practiced ease, and LuHan glared at his back only to receive a swat from the spoon on his hip. He turned to stare aghast at old man Tzu, and the offender merely shrugged. “Don’t glare at Vinson,” he said, turning back to whatever he was cooking on the stove and ignoring LuHan.

With the distinct impression that the old man would see if he took anything but what ‘Oh Precious Vinson’ had allowed, LuHan reached out and pulled a butter roll off of the rest of the batch. The roll was so light and airy that it only served to make LuHan more hungry, but by the time he finished eating it Mrs. Luo was in the kitchen as well and she directed the tall man to come help her with slicing vegetables. LuHan had never done anything of the sort and so after butchering the first two carrots Mrs. Luo took pity on him, took the knife, and told him to go find Vinson.

He did so grudgingly, finding her senseless yet harmless chatter more amicable than anything he might find from the ill tempered Vinson, but he only grumbled a little before doing her bidding. He eyed the sugar buns as he passed but old Tzu gave him the evil eye and LuHan didn’t want to risk another sm

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gaksitalGaksital
#1
Chapter 11: Thanks for this amazing story Tigress! I had to digest it all in one go. Some beautiful character interpretations here. I loved the major character developments for Luhan, but also for Vinson. Not sure if the addition of Fei was necessary as she only appeared twice and for very short amount too? Maybe she was more like a plot driver and someone to finally SLAP some sense into Luhan. I felt a bit frustrated that Luhan couldn't say sorry earlier, and I wanted to see Mrs Luo's reaction when he did, but to me, it seems like Vinson forgave him before Mrs Luo -- that's the impression I got. Vinson really gave him the benefit of the doubt while Mrs Luo is habitually kind, and couldn't voice her inner thoughts. I loved Grandpa Tzu anyways; he just seems to take life as it is.
Also, Luhan's awful first personality stemmed from the fact that his father held high expectations for him. He just became rebellious and drifted apart from his family. Friends do matter in your life, and you turn into the company that you surround yourself with.
I would have loved a sequel to this haha but I know it's too late for that! Anyways, beautiful story as always Tigress! You never fail to amaze me :)
gaksitalGaksital
#2
Chapter 6: Wow, it's refreshing to see the subtle changes in Luhan. I never expected he would step up to ameliorate the situation with the angry customer. I'm beginning to think that Luhan's gaudy lifestyle was just his rebellious way to garner affection from his parents? It seems like he's so desperate here to gain Mrs Luo's affection. The way he tried to cheer her up in the morning, and then when he let her rest and dealt with the customer himself. Will I actually start to like his character now on? O_o
Slowly, I can see that Jimmy's death is taking it's toll on him. He's finally beginning to realise that his senseless actions had broken a very lovely and caring family.
gaksitalGaksital
#3
Chapter 5: Wow, Luhan is just so petty no matter the sitation. I'm not sure if I mentioned it before but I found my favourite character in this story! It's Mrs Luo! Her patience just overwhelms me and her responses are just so endearing and full of doleful kindness T.T I just want to give her a big hug, especially when Luhan was all mean and said some nasty stuff.
The ending shows that he's undergoing a change? He spent his whole life blaming others for his mistakes and the consequences of the crash is dawning on him now.
gaksitalGaksital
#4
Chapter 4: I think my hate for Luhan in this has reached its max limit lol. I can't hate him anymore but he frustrates me so bad. Vinson has every right to be angry and the family's patience baffles me a little. Maybe I'm too angry of a person to deal with a person like Luhan. Although, we do see some subtle changes and Luhan is a bit taken aback with Mrs Luo's gentle nature. Kill them with kindness, so they say. Looks like this approach might just crack Luhan's silver mirror.
gaksitalGaksital
#5
Chapter 3: I'm enthralled by your descriptions in this. You bring details to the smallest of things, like the kids with the soccer ball, the shabby street and the drab restaurant, but also, your characters are so real, I fell like I can bump into them on the street. I still hate Luhan. I wonder if he will grow up at this stage but I can tell that Mrs Luo's honesty has really nailed him on the head. It's the first time I realised him becoming somewhat subservient towards anyone. Damn, he made 6 months in jail seem like a vacation haha. Spoiled brat!
On a side note, my heart just broke for Vinson. He doesn't deserve this and I can tell why he'd be so angry, to have the man who was responsible for his brother's death to sleep under his roof. Ohhhh shivers.
gaksitalGaksital
#6
Chapter 2: Gawrsh *in Goofy voice*, dang, I didn't think you'd create a character that I would absolutely hate right now. I've always read stories where Luhan is portrayed as this absolutely sweet and innocent angel (I'm also guilt of that!), so its refreshing to see your take on it. I imagined myself as Luhan's dad in this lol, because everything he said was what I wanted to tell Luhan (albeit he was wayyyy more polite than what I was thinking in my head!). I'm absolutely thrilled by the emotions you've written here. From Luhan's nonchalance, to his father's disappointment, to Mrs Luo's sorrow. The writing is absolutely amazing -- but sure I've always known that about you :)

I feel like Luhan's sentence is too lax. But I applaud the judge to make him work in the restaurant. I'm just so afraid of how Luhan will treat Mrs Luo while he's there :(
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 1: Oh my days. O_o so I decided to start with this story because you told me it's one of your best stories, and I was curious to see how you would approach an slice of life fic rather than fantasy. I really think I've subbed to the right fic now! I was supposed to read something light hearted LOL but it seems like I'm just drawn to the angst fic. You did a great job of creating a highly realistic and narcissistic idiotic rich boy. There were so many times where I wanted to punch Luhan upside the face, and in the solar plex. Like, how dare he make fun of his poor grandma like that!?
But yeesh that ending, his first reaction was to go and scream at someone else even though the fault was clearly his. Damn you Luhan! But yikes, Tigress, the wording, the crafting of the sentences, the descriptions and the characterisations gave me chills. I'll have to buckle because I have a feeling this will be one of the greatest fics I will encounter on AFF O_o
Amalya
#8
Chapter 11: I didn't cry much (damn my stubborn pride lol) but I've never cried more over someone else's work so you definitely got me there. *still wiping my eyes* There were some scenes which just hit so bloody hard: the last one there, Luhan finally breaking down, him calling his parents, Mrs. Luo on Jimmy's birthday, Fei's reaction to Luhan and his response, the scene in the family room, and just so many points that made me feel in good ways, even if they were somewhat sad. And I swear for the first whole half I was nothing but pissed off and irritated at Luhan so actually making him a redeemable character was a feat in and of itself. Excellent job overall my dear.

You know Twisting Paths is one of my favorites from you and that will likely stay there in the fantasy corner for sure, but this story made me feel. Oh so many feels. *still riding that roller coaster* And I can just envision that last scene in my head too. It's always kindness of some kind that undoes us when we're trying to hold it back or don't know how to react. Goodness. I feel like I should go read something fluffy but I'm not even like bad sad. It's more of a fulfilled sad since the ending itself is hopeful and good. It's just... emotional. And you got me with that line a couple chapters back where Luhan explained he didn't have the money to buy friends. And Vinson's response to why his friends didn't come by was pretty powerful too. But then you had that scene with him and his crutches and I just wanted to flail and grin like an idiot. haha

I have to wonder if Luhan will actually consider culinary school or something now that he's discovered he actually likes to cook. And if he'll keep in touch with Vinson perhaps. I don't know that I would request a sequel but it would be pretty neat to see one possible outcome of how things progress from here. I guess I'll just hope for the best here. It hardly feels worth it to mention the only thing I noticed throughout which were...
Amalya
#9
Chapter 7: And another hard hitting chapter. I really did cry this time when he found the pictures. I can't even imagine how Vincent feels but that hit close to home with all the memories and the sports and the family stuff and just... gyah! T_T Stop playing with my feels!! *not really* lol

Wonderfully done again. I loved the way that Vinson tried to play it strong and put on the brave front for his mother and grandfather but how that facade quickly fell after the fact. I liked it even more that Luhan got to see it. The insight into his inner workings also helped to get a better feel for how he's progressing and I really enjoyed reading what he could admit to himself, if no one else. And that was also really brave of Vinson too. I know it probably wasn't easy for him to get to where he's at as well. His statement of "I'm not a saint" definitely made me smile, not happily exactly, but because it's damnably difficult to try and be one under most circumstances. hah But it's progress with where they are and Luhan himself is still moving in the right direction. Nicely done.
Amalya
#10
Chapter 6: Damn you woman. His birthday? T_T Almost tears. Like legit, tightness in throat, slightly blurry eyes, and I want to just cuddle Mrs. Luo again. Okay. So maybe Luhan is working on redeeming himself, if only because a part of him that he's not really ready to admit to actually likes/cares about Mrs. Luo. I don't dislike him as much now. >.> haha

Short comment is short but this chapter hit hard. *nods*