CH 2

Rebuilding A Life
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Six months served in the detention center passed slowly and painstakingly, six months without visitors, six months without interaction with anyone but the guards who came to feed him, six months of nothing but a white walled cell with a hard bed and a toilet. LuHan had been allowed books but he had never been much of a reader; he had asked for an iPod or a laptop instead and only been laughed at in response. He spent six miserable months passing the daylight hours with  either sleeping, doing a small workout regimen consisting of push-ups and sit-ups, or playing solitaire with a deck of cards allowed him by the warden.

Six months finally passed, and on the day he was released he was in a fine mood. Happy to be out and sure he could blow off the Luo family with a bit of money offered, he left the detention center with a smile on his face and a bounce in his step. Back to life, finally! He exited the gates and saw his family’s driver standing beside a black Mercedes, the windows tinted so no one could see in, a cap being twisted in the man’s grip as he waited for LuHan. He saw the young man approaching just then, though, and placed his cap back on his greying head and opened the door for him. As LuHan slid into the back seat of the Mercedes, he was already contemplating what kind of car he ought to buy for himself and who he should go see first. He really wanted to just leave the whole scandal thing behind him, so he figured that Yixing would be the best bet; the heir to the largest hotel chain in Asia could hardly be bothered to care about anything than what was right in front of his nose, so he likely wouldn’t bring up the issue.

As the driver slid into the seat ahead of him, LuHan leaned forward to tap the older man on the shoulder. “Take me directly home and prepare one of the sports cars to leave; I’ll be going to the Zhang’s this evening. Oh, and drop by the Samsung store first; I want to buy a phone. I assume you have a company credit card so you’ll be paying for it.” The driver turned his head to say something in return but LuHan waved a hand in his direction and leaned back into his seat. “Drive! You aren’t paid to talk to me.”

A short pause and then the driver gave a sharp nod, the smallest hint of a smile on his face as he turned back and started the car. LuHan gave a sigh as he thought of the food he would order this evening, the alcohol - though he had been warned against alcohol; he was on a six month probation but they didn’t need to know about one drink, did they? – and the companionship of his friends. The car eased into traffic and the motion of the rolling vehicle lulled LuHan into a peaceful doze; he didn’t wake again until the driver stopped the car and turned off the ignition. 

Lifting his head from where he had it propped against the seat, LuHan stared out the window into a lower class neighborhood, the store fronts a bit shabby and rundown and the few restaurants in dire need of paint and remodeling. LuHan narrowed his grey-brown eyes, eyes that were so much like his father’s, and turned to the driver with a harsh look. “Where the hell did you take me? I said the Samsung store, you deaf little ,” he spat out, and the older man turned in his seat to grace him with a long suffering smile. 

“Master LuHan, do you know who pays my salary? Your father. And do you know what your father told me to do?”

“Take me somewhere and rob me?” LuHan muttered, watching a few little boys pass the car with a dirty soccer ball tucked under the shorter one’s arm.

The driver gave a snort before replying, “He told me to bring you here. This, LuHan, is where you’ll be spending the next six months of your life. This,” he pointed to one of the small restaurants and LuHan’s eyes grudging followed his finger to take in the brightly painted sign that cheerily proclaimed to have the best Chinese food in Beijing, “This is the establishment and the home of the Luo’s, the mother and younger brother of the boy you killed. And this, LuHan, is where the parole officer will be checking in to see how well you’re holding up. I do believe that your parole officer has already given you your options?”

Serve the family or serve in prison, LuHan remembered the man’s grim words as he had sat across the table in the interrogation room. “Yeah,” he replied to the driver weakly, his stomach suddenly in knots as he realized that it wasn’t a metaphorical serving but an actual, physical act required of him. No money was going to get him out of this one, and a heavy weight settled on him as he swallowed nervously. “I don’t have anything to wear,” he protested quietly, already knowing that it was a weak excuse, and the driver gave a weary smile and opened his car door to step out and move to the trunk. LuHan heard him rummaging around in it for a few moments, though he couldn’t tear his eyes away from that cheery red lettered

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gaksitalGaksital
#1
Chapter 11: Thanks for this amazing story Tigress! I had to digest it all in one go. Some beautiful character interpretations here. I loved the major character developments for Luhan, but also for Vinson. Not sure if the addition of Fei was necessary as she only appeared twice and for very short amount too? Maybe she was more like a plot driver and someone to finally SLAP some sense into Luhan. I felt a bit frustrated that Luhan couldn't say sorry earlier, and I wanted to see Mrs Luo's reaction when he did, but to me, it seems like Vinson forgave him before Mrs Luo -- that's the impression I got. Vinson really gave him the benefit of the doubt while Mrs Luo is habitually kind, and couldn't voice her inner thoughts. I loved Grandpa Tzu anyways; he just seems to take life as it is.
Also, Luhan's awful first personality stemmed from the fact that his father held high expectations for him. He just became rebellious and drifted apart from his family. Friends do matter in your life, and you turn into the company that you surround yourself with.
I would have loved a sequel to this haha but I know it's too late for that! Anyways, beautiful story as always Tigress! You never fail to amaze me :)
gaksitalGaksital
#2
Chapter 6: Wow, it's refreshing to see the subtle changes in Luhan. I never expected he would step up to ameliorate the situation with the angry customer. I'm beginning to think that Luhan's gaudy lifestyle was just his rebellious way to garner affection from his parents? It seems like he's so desperate here to gain Mrs Luo's affection. The way he tried to cheer her up in the morning, and then when he let her rest and dealt with the customer himself. Will I actually start to like his character now on? O_o
Slowly, I can see that Jimmy's death is taking it's toll on him. He's finally beginning to realise that his senseless actions had broken a very lovely and caring family.
gaksitalGaksital
#3
Chapter 5: Wow, Luhan is just so petty no matter the sitation. I'm not sure if I mentioned it before but I found my favourite character in this story! It's Mrs Luo! Her patience just overwhelms me and her responses are just so endearing and full of doleful kindness T.T I just want to give her a big hug, especially when Luhan was all mean and said some nasty stuff.
The ending shows that he's undergoing a change? He spent his whole life blaming others for his mistakes and the consequences of the crash is dawning on him now.
gaksitalGaksital
#4
Chapter 4: I think my hate for Luhan in this has reached its max limit lol. I can't hate him anymore but he frustrates me so bad. Vinson has every right to be angry and the family's patience baffles me a little. Maybe I'm too angry of a person to deal with a person like Luhan. Although, we do see some subtle changes and Luhan is a bit taken aback with Mrs Luo's gentle nature. Kill them with kindness, so they say. Looks like this approach might just crack Luhan's silver mirror.
gaksitalGaksital
#5
Chapter 3: I'm enthralled by your descriptions in this. You bring details to the smallest of things, like the kids with the soccer ball, the shabby street and the drab restaurant, but also, your characters are so real, I fell like I can bump into them on the street. I still hate Luhan. I wonder if he will grow up at this stage but I can tell that Mrs Luo's honesty has really nailed him on the head. It's the first time I realised him becoming somewhat subservient towards anyone. Damn, he made 6 months in jail seem like a vacation haha. Spoiled brat!
On a side note, my heart just broke for Vinson. He doesn't deserve this and I can tell why he'd be so angry, to have the man who was responsible for his brother's death to sleep under his roof. Ohhhh shivers.
gaksitalGaksital
#6
Chapter 2: Gawrsh *in Goofy voice*, dang, I didn't think you'd create a character that I would absolutely hate right now. I've always read stories where Luhan is portrayed as this absolutely sweet and innocent angel (I'm also guilt of that!), so its refreshing to see your take on it. I imagined myself as Luhan's dad in this lol, because everything he said was what I wanted to tell Luhan (albeit he was wayyyy more polite than what I was thinking in my head!). I'm absolutely thrilled by the emotions you've written here. From Luhan's nonchalance, to his father's disappointment, to Mrs Luo's sorrow. The writing is absolutely amazing -- but sure I've always known that about you :)

I feel like Luhan's sentence is too lax. But I applaud the judge to make him work in the restaurant. I'm just so afraid of how Luhan will treat Mrs Luo while he's there :(
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 1: Oh my days. O_o so I decided to start with this story because you told me it's one of your best stories, and I was curious to see how you would approach an slice of life fic rather than fantasy. I really think I've subbed to the right fic now! I was supposed to read something light hearted LOL but it seems like I'm just drawn to the angst fic. You did a great job of creating a highly realistic and narcissistic idiotic rich boy. There were so many times where I wanted to punch Luhan upside the face, and in the solar plex. Like, how dare he make fun of his poor grandma like that!?
But yeesh that ending, his first reaction was to go and scream at someone else even though the fault was clearly his. Damn you Luhan! But yikes, Tigress, the wording, the crafting of the sentences, the descriptions and the characterisations gave me chills. I'll have to buckle because I have a feeling this will be one of the greatest fics I will encounter on AFF O_o
Amalya
#8
Chapter 11: I didn't cry much (damn my stubborn pride lol) but I've never cried more over someone else's work so you definitely got me there. *still wiping my eyes* There were some scenes which just hit so bloody hard: the last one there, Luhan finally breaking down, him calling his parents, Mrs. Luo on Jimmy's birthday, Fei's reaction to Luhan and his response, the scene in the family room, and just so many points that made me feel in good ways, even if they were somewhat sad. And I swear for the first whole half I was nothing but pissed off and irritated at Luhan so actually making him a redeemable character was a feat in and of itself. Excellent job overall my dear.

You know Twisting Paths is one of my favorites from you and that will likely stay there in the fantasy corner for sure, but this story made me feel. Oh so many feels. *still riding that roller coaster* And I can just envision that last scene in my head too. It's always kindness of some kind that undoes us when we're trying to hold it back or don't know how to react. Goodness. I feel like I should go read something fluffy but I'm not even like bad sad. It's more of a fulfilled sad since the ending itself is hopeful and good. It's just... emotional. And you got me with that line a couple chapters back where Luhan explained he didn't have the money to buy friends. And Vinson's response to why his friends didn't come by was pretty powerful too. But then you had that scene with him and his crutches and I just wanted to flail and grin like an idiot. haha

I have to wonder if Luhan will actually consider culinary school or something now that he's discovered he actually likes to cook. And if he'll keep in touch with Vinson perhaps. I don't know that I would request a sequel but it would be pretty neat to see one possible outcome of how things progress from here. I guess I'll just hope for the best here. It hardly feels worth it to mention the only thing I noticed throughout which were...
Amalya
#9
Chapter 7: And another hard hitting chapter. I really did cry this time when he found the pictures. I can't even imagine how Vincent feels but that hit close to home with all the memories and the sports and the family stuff and just... gyah! T_T Stop playing with my feels!! *not really* lol

Wonderfully done again. I loved the way that Vinson tried to play it strong and put on the brave front for his mother and grandfather but how that facade quickly fell after the fact. I liked it even more that Luhan got to see it. The insight into his inner workings also helped to get a better feel for how he's progressing and I really enjoyed reading what he could admit to himself, if no one else. And that was also really brave of Vinson too. I know it probably wasn't easy for him to get to where he's at as well. His statement of "I'm not a saint" definitely made me smile, not happily exactly, but because it's damnably difficult to try and be one under most circumstances. hah But it's progress with where they are and Luhan himself is still moving in the right direction. Nicely done.
Amalya
#10
Chapter 6: Damn you woman. His birthday? T_T Almost tears. Like legit, tightness in throat, slightly blurry eyes, and I want to just cuddle Mrs. Luo again. Okay. So maybe Luhan is working on redeeming himself, if only because a part of him that he's not really ready to admit to actually likes/cares about Mrs. Luo. I don't dislike him as much now. >.> haha

Short comment is short but this chapter hit hard. *nods*