PROLOGUE

Rebuilding A Life
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“For once just take responsibility!”

LuHan threw the speaker a snide smile. “Yeah, yeah, whatever. Just stop nagging at me, for crying out loud!”

His father’s face turned very nearly purple with rage, his mouth opening and closing as he tried to think of something to say to his wayward son. “You… you are the only child I have, dammit, and I wish that weren’t true! You’re a disgrace, an ill manned, spoiled, selfish kid!”

“I’m not a child, father,” he said curtly as he grabbed his jacket off the back of the sofa. “And I am not listening to this right now. I’m going out.”

His father, the prominent Senator Lu, moved to block the doorway. “Are you kidding me, LuHan? You’re twenty three years old, why are you acting like this? You’d think I wanted you to donate your heart or something, not grace your grandmother with your presence for thirty ing minutes!”

LuHan let out a sharp sigh as he rolled his eyes. “Dad. I am not going to go to some old fart's home to get my clothes smelling like . She’s old. Let her be. Why should I waste my time watching her die?” As his father’s mouth gaped like a fish out of water, LuHan ducked under his arm and slid out the door, a smile on his handsome features as he slid into the driver’s seat of his expensive German engineered car. His father came flying out the door of the house to yell something at him, but he turned the key just then and as the powerful motor roared to life, he gave his father a mock smile and a condescending wave before stomping on the gas to spray pebbles all over the lawn as he sped away.

He was sick of his father nagging at him, for everything, always, acting like LuHan's life was his concern! If it wasn’t about his phone bill or the careless way he spent his money, it was for the reports of his misdoings at the local clubs or his dalliances with the drunk girls he met there. His father always claimed his actions gave their family a bad name, and always harped on him about ‘taking responsibility for his actions’ or ‘acting more mature’. This time it was over his grandmother who wanted to see him; LuHan honestly couldn’t see why the old woman wouldn’t just go die already. She was always meddling with him his entire childhood; mussing his hair and making him eat things he didn’t like. Stupid old lady.

He pulled to a stop in front of his favorite club and looked in the mirror to adjust his hair once again before plastering his winning smile on his face. Stepping out of the car, he met up with his friends and was immediately allowed entrance to the establishment. The booming bass pulsed through the floor and into his expensive shoes, making him feel alive and at home. He maneuvered his way through the crowd, allowing his hands a of two when he passed an attractive person, and finally ended up in front of the bar. The bartender turned to him with a dazzling smile; LuHan was known here both for his temper and for his money. 

“What can I get you tonight?” The man yelled to him over the music, and LuHan opened his mouth with the name of a light cocktail on the tip of his tongue, but what came out instead was, “Give me a shot of the hardest stuff you have.”

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gaksitalGaksital
#1
Chapter 11: Thanks for this amazing story Tigress! I had to digest it all in one go. Some beautiful character interpretations here. I loved the major character developments for Luhan, but also for Vinson. Not sure if the addition of Fei was necessary as she only appeared twice and for very short amount too? Maybe she was more like a plot driver and someone to finally SLAP some sense into Luhan. I felt a bit frustrated that Luhan couldn't say sorry earlier, and I wanted to see Mrs Luo's reaction when he did, but to me, it seems like Vinson forgave him before Mrs Luo -- that's the impression I got. Vinson really gave him the benefit of the doubt while Mrs Luo is habitually kind, and couldn't voice her inner thoughts. I loved Grandpa Tzu anyways; he just seems to take life as it is.
Also, Luhan's awful first personality stemmed from the fact that his father held high expectations for him. He just became rebellious and drifted apart from his family. Friends do matter in your life, and you turn into the company that you surround yourself with.
I would have loved a sequel to this haha but I know it's too late for that! Anyways, beautiful story as always Tigress! You never fail to amaze me :)
gaksitalGaksital
#2
Chapter 6: Wow, it's refreshing to see the subtle changes in Luhan. I never expected he would step up to ameliorate the situation with the angry customer. I'm beginning to think that Luhan's gaudy lifestyle was just his rebellious way to garner affection from his parents? It seems like he's so desperate here to gain Mrs Luo's affection. The way he tried to cheer her up in the morning, and then when he let her rest and dealt with the customer himself. Will I actually start to like his character now on? O_o
Slowly, I can see that Jimmy's death is taking it's toll on him. He's finally beginning to realise that his senseless actions had broken a very lovely and caring family.
gaksitalGaksital
#3
Chapter 5: Wow, Luhan is just so petty no matter the sitation. I'm not sure if I mentioned it before but I found my favourite character in this story! It's Mrs Luo! Her patience just overwhelms me and her responses are just so endearing and full of doleful kindness T.T I just want to give her a big hug, especially when Luhan was all mean and said some nasty stuff.
The ending shows that he's undergoing a change? He spent his whole life blaming others for his mistakes and the consequences of the crash is dawning on him now.
gaksitalGaksital
#4
Chapter 4: I think my hate for Luhan in this has reached its max limit lol. I can't hate him anymore but he frustrates me so bad. Vinson has every right to be angry and the family's patience baffles me a little. Maybe I'm too angry of a person to deal with a person like Luhan. Although, we do see some subtle changes and Luhan is a bit taken aback with Mrs Luo's gentle nature. Kill them with kindness, so they say. Looks like this approach might just crack Luhan's silver mirror.
gaksitalGaksital
#5
Chapter 3: I'm enthralled by your descriptions in this. You bring details to the smallest of things, like the kids with the soccer ball, the shabby street and the drab restaurant, but also, your characters are so real, I fell like I can bump into them on the street. I still hate Luhan. I wonder if he will grow up at this stage but I can tell that Mrs Luo's honesty has really nailed him on the head. It's the first time I realised him becoming somewhat subservient towards anyone. Damn, he made 6 months in jail seem like a vacation haha. Spoiled brat!
On a side note, my heart just broke for Vinson. He doesn't deserve this and I can tell why he'd be so angry, to have the man who was responsible for his brother's death to sleep under his roof. Ohhhh shivers.
gaksitalGaksital
#6
Chapter 2: Gawrsh *in Goofy voice*, dang, I didn't think you'd create a character that I would absolutely hate right now. I've always read stories where Luhan is portrayed as this absolutely sweet and innocent angel (I'm also guilt of that!), so its refreshing to see your take on it. I imagined myself as Luhan's dad in this lol, because everything he said was what I wanted to tell Luhan (albeit he was wayyyy more polite than what I was thinking in my head!). I'm absolutely thrilled by the emotions you've written here. From Luhan's nonchalance, to his father's disappointment, to Mrs Luo's sorrow. The writing is absolutely amazing -- but sure I've always known that about you :)

I feel like Luhan's sentence is too lax. But I applaud the judge to make him work in the restaurant. I'm just so afraid of how Luhan will treat Mrs Luo while he's there :(
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 1: Oh my days. O_o so I decided to start with this story because you told me it's one of your best stories, and I was curious to see how you would approach an slice of life fic rather than fantasy. I really think I've subbed to the right fic now! I was supposed to read something light hearted LOL but it seems like I'm just drawn to the angst fic. You did a great job of creating a highly realistic and narcissistic idiotic rich boy. There were so many times where I wanted to punch Luhan upside the face, and in the solar plex. Like, how dare he make fun of his poor grandma like that!?
But yeesh that ending, his first reaction was to go and scream at someone else even though the fault was clearly his. Damn you Luhan! But yikes, Tigress, the wording, the crafting of the sentences, the descriptions and the characterisations gave me chills. I'll have to buckle because I have a feeling this will be one of the greatest fics I will encounter on AFF O_o
Amalya
#8
Chapter 11: I didn't cry much (damn my stubborn pride lol) but I've never cried more over someone else's work so you definitely got me there. *still wiping my eyes* There were some scenes which just hit so bloody hard: the last one there, Luhan finally breaking down, him calling his parents, Mrs. Luo on Jimmy's birthday, Fei's reaction to Luhan and his response, the scene in the family room, and just so many points that made me feel in good ways, even if they were somewhat sad. And I swear for the first whole half I was nothing but pissed off and irritated at Luhan so actually making him a redeemable character was a feat in and of itself. Excellent job overall my dear.

You know Twisting Paths is one of my favorites from you and that will likely stay there in the fantasy corner for sure, but this story made me feel. Oh so many feels. *still riding that roller coaster* And I can just envision that last scene in my head too. It's always kindness of some kind that undoes us when we're trying to hold it back or don't know how to react. Goodness. I feel like I should go read something fluffy but I'm not even like bad sad. It's more of a fulfilled sad since the ending itself is hopeful and good. It's just... emotional. And you got me with that line a couple chapters back where Luhan explained he didn't have the money to buy friends. And Vinson's response to why his friends didn't come by was pretty powerful too. But then you had that scene with him and his crutches and I just wanted to flail and grin like an idiot. haha

I have to wonder if Luhan will actually consider culinary school or something now that he's discovered he actually likes to cook. And if he'll keep in touch with Vinson perhaps. I don't know that I would request a sequel but it would be pretty neat to see one possible outcome of how things progress from here. I guess I'll just hope for the best here. It hardly feels worth it to mention the only thing I noticed throughout which were...
Amalya
#9
Chapter 7: And another hard hitting chapter. I really did cry this time when he found the pictures. I can't even imagine how Vincent feels but that hit close to home with all the memories and the sports and the family stuff and just... gyah! T_T Stop playing with my feels!! *not really* lol

Wonderfully done again. I loved the way that Vinson tried to play it strong and put on the brave front for his mother and grandfather but how that facade quickly fell after the fact. I liked it even more that Luhan got to see it. The insight into his inner workings also helped to get a better feel for how he's progressing and I really enjoyed reading what he could admit to himself, if no one else. And that was also really brave of Vinson too. I know it probably wasn't easy for him to get to where he's at as well. His statement of "I'm not a saint" definitely made me smile, not happily exactly, but because it's damnably difficult to try and be one under most circumstances. hah But it's progress with where they are and Luhan himself is still moving in the right direction. Nicely done.
Amalya
#10
Chapter 6: Damn you woman. His birthday? T_T Almost tears. Like legit, tightness in throat, slightly blurry eyes, and I want to just cuddle Mrs. Luo again. Okay. So maybe Luhan is working on redeeming himself, if only because a part of him that he's not really ready to admit to actually likes/cares about Mrs. Luo. I don't dislike him as much now. >.> haha

Short comment is short but this chapter hit hard. *nods*