Fate

Writing Compilation

"You seem different,"

I see your inquiring glance, "did something happen?"

What's happened?

His messy, ebony hair was always unnaturally soft. He had eyes the shade of the ocean, and if I stared into them long enough, it would feel like I was drowning in those pools. His full lips were this seducing shade of rose, and his voice was husky, but oddly calming. He was optimistic, unlike me, not that he was always full of smiles, but he always believed that that was a silver lining on every cloud. 

Most of the time, he was right.
 
He was a dreamer, and a romantic, but what he believed in had oddly drew me in.
 
He did.
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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 28: Oooo I like this one. The last line gives me goosebumps. I like how you built up the tension to that point.
SkyeButterfly
#2
Chapter 27: “You weren't by my side anymore, and would never be.” I felt that… this was a very well written emotional piece
SkyeButterfly
#3
Chapter 27: “The mere presence of each other was taboo.” 😭 wow
SkyeButterfly
#4
Chapter 26: When i get a really good idea but the more i think about, the worse the idea actually gets
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 26: lol this is relatable
SkyeButterfly
#6
Chapter 25: At first, I thought someone died, but then I kept reading…
SkyeButterfly
#7
Chapter 25: Wow I’m not sure what to make of this because the writing is abstract in nature, but the sadness is very palpable
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 24: This reminds me of a quote where it’s like “a monster is not a monster if you love it” (I’m getting it wrong lol but it was something along those lines)
SkyeButterfly
#9
Chapter 24: Wow 😯 beautifully written!!
SkyeButterfly
#10
Chapter 23: this was very nice btw!