Enthralled

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I gasp, taking all of it in.
I'm captivated.
By those sapphire blue eyes;
His flawlessly sloped nose bridge;
That sweet, lopsided smile.
I know I'm helplessly enthralled.

His fingers run through his short brown locks, before coming back to rest on his notebook. His scrutinizing eyes squint at the papers — concentrating. I'm starting to think he's the cutest thing on earth.

He catches me staring, but I can't stop. My eyes refuse to tear away. His eyes hold confusion as an undercurrent, glancing blankly at me. His brows crinkle into a small frown.

That's when I finally snap my head away.

Those very eyes just shot me in the heart; that very expression cut me like glass. All painful reminders that we're strangers.

I've fallen hopelessly and utterly for this prince:

Who doesn't even know I exist.

 

 

A/N: It's sorta like I'm on an angst roll? Inspiration just hits me in all possible angsty ways, so less fluff can be expected.

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 28: Oooo I like this one. The last line gives me goosebumps. I like how you built up the tension to that point.
SkyeButterfly
#2
Chapter 27: “You weren't by my side anymore, and would never be.” I felt that… this was a very well written emotional piece
SkyeButterfly
#3
Chapter 27: “The mere presence of each other was taboo.” 😭 wow
SkyeButterfly
#4
Chapter 26: When i get a really good idea but the more i think about, the worse the idea actually gets
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 26: lol this is relatable
SkyeButterfly
#6
Chapter 25: At first, I thought someone died, but then I kept reading…
SkyeButterfly
#7
Chapter 25: Wow I’m not sure what to make of this because the writing is abstract in nature, but the sadness is very palpable
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 24: This reminds me of a quote where it’s like “a monster is not a monster if you love it” (I’m getting it wrong lol but it was something along those lines)
SkyeButterfly
#9
Chapter 24: Wow 😯 beautifully written!!
SkyeButterfly
#10
Chapter 23: this was very nice btw!