Butterflies

Writing Compilation

Another day;
Another commute —
It's our daily routine.

We step up — abreast,
And I fumble with the change I need.
This familiarity in my chest,
Are feelings I daren't feed.
I remind them to rest,
But again they pay no heed.

Our sleeves brush,
Our shoulders touch.
Elbows graze awkwardly.

Another glance;
Another smile —
Merely for pleasantries.

Just one more stop, and he gets off.
Yet, these butterflies remain with me.

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 28: Oooo I like this one. The last line gives me goosebumps. I like how you built up the tension to that point.
SkyeButterfly
#2
Chapter 27: “You weren't by my side anymore, and would never be.” I felt that… this was a very well written emotional piece
SkyeButterfly
#3
Chapter 27: “The mere presence of each other was taboo.” 😭 wow
SkyeButterfly
#4
Chapter 26: When i get a really good idea but the more i think about, the worse the idea actually gets
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 26: lol this is relatable
SkyeButterfly
#6
Chapter 25: At first, I thought someone died, but then I kept reading…
SkyeButterfly
#7
Chapter 25: Wow I’m not sure what to make of this because the writing is abstract in nature, but the sadness is very palpable
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 24: This reminds me of a quote where it’s like “a monster is not a monster if you love it” (I’m getting it wrong lol but it was something along those lines)
SkyeButterfly
#9
Chapter 24: Wow 😯 beautifully written!!
SkyeButterfly
#10
Chapter 23: this was very nice btw!