THE BEATING

INNOCENT GHOST?

GAEUL POV

i looked at yijung and he ran out the door

"umm i have to go," i said

"where?" jandi asked

"just somewhere.i'll be back and call me if you find any more info about anything," i said before running out the door

i ran out after yijung and found him sitting on my car roof

i walked up to the car and leaned on the car

"hey," i whispered softly

yijung didn't reply and only sunk through the car which resulted him in  seating in the drivers seat of the car

i opened my car door and got in the passenger seat

"Yijung there just trying to help you,"

"THEY SUSPECT MY GIRLFRIEND!"

"i understand that but they need suspects.isn't it a good thing she became the first suspect because then there may be more evidence and she's out of the suspect list," i tried to reason

"i don't like of her being the suspect at ALL...she's my girlfriend,"

"I GET SHE'S YOUR GIRLFRIEND!" i yelled in frusteration

i exhaled loudly "look, i know she's your girlfriend and i get you can get overprotective over her but if you want to find out who killed you to help you come back to life then we have to suspect everyone. Even your most trusted person," i explained in my cop perspective

"yeah?" he asked looking at me, with a more hopeful expression

" yeah, i'm pretty sure eunchae unnie didn't do anything wrong,"

and yijung just nodded his head

"and hey, how dare you just come into my room without any notice?" i asked recalling what happened earlier

"what?~ there was nothing to look at anyways," he teased

"why you little," and i reached out to slap him but my phone started ringing

i groaned and picked up the phone

"what is it officer kim?" i asked

"alright be there in 2 minutes," i said and got into the driver seat

"yijung get out of my body or else," i threatened

"or else what? you can't do anything,"

"just get out of me," i said more calmly

and he did as i ordered and i the siren and drove quickly driving at around 200 m/h

"gaaahhh!" yijung yelled the whole way there

once i stopped in front of the destination, yijung breathed loudly

"man..whoo~. you..drive...fast...." he said still catching his breath from screaming like a girl

"thank you," i said and got out of the car

I walked to the warehouse with the gun pointed up in the air and yelled “POLICE! COME OUT!” but it was silent. No figures came out and I continued to yell. Yet still no response

I cautiously walked towards the warehouse and knocked down the door and scoped the place and couldn’t find anything…

Suddenly a bright light shone, and I looked to see a gang

“PUT YOUR HANDS UP!” but they didn’t do as I said

“I SAID PUT…UGH,” I groaned as they shot their gun and aimed at my stomach

They walked up to me and dragged me to what seemed to be the head gang

“Why are you here?” he asked

“Just here to arrest an unlucky bastard but it turned out it should be unlucky bastards,” I scoffed as I spit out blood

“Sorry to break it to you hot stuff but that’s not going to happen,” he said

I then looked at my gun that laid 3 feet from my grasp

I started looking around to see if I should take the chance and I did but one kicked me in the stomach, exactly where I got shot and I tried holding in my scream by biting on my lips and I could taste the fresh blood

I saw yijung running up to me

“WHY YOU!” he yelled and kicked a guy in the head but his foot went right through him

It was hopeless…he was useless

 i tried reaching for the gun again but they kept kicking at me

i covered my head with both my hands as they just continued to beat me

they suddenly stopped and i looked up to see the gang leader signalling them to

he got up and kneeled close to me

he grabbed me by the cheek using only one hand

"you know i can let you if you do something for me..."

"what,"

he turned me around and started ing my shirt

i bit his hands and he screamed in pain

"WHY YOU !" and he grabbed me by the collars and punched me twice in the face

i was now on the floor, right next to yijung's legs

he kneeled down and held me

"gaeul...gaeul yang. you'll be okay, i called the police," he said

i tried smiling but my lips hurt so instead i grabbed his warm hands

suddenly i was being lifted again only to be thrown back down on the floor

he kicked me again in the stomach and this time i didn't try to hold back my screams

my body was again faced towards yijung and i could see his anxious and guilty face

i just nodded towards him trying to tell him i'm fine

but the guy kicked me in the stomach again

i screamed again

i got up holding my stomach

the gang leader ran towards me with his fist aimed for my face but i managed to dodge that but the next attack i couldn't avoid

i was on the cold floor coughing out blood as i groaned

as the gang leader was about to hit me again he stopped as his  phone started ringing

he got out his phone and he walked several feet away. i only heard murmurs as he was whispering and then he yelled "Miss. Cha first you order us to kill him and now you ask us to hurt this girl. now what do you want us to do?!" he asked frusterated

"MIss cha? miss. cha eun...," and from afar we heard the police sirens

"let's head out the police are here," he said and ran out the back door as the others followed right behind him

"THIS IS THE POLICE! HANDS UP!" i heard officer kim say

"officer kim," i said but i realized it was too small for him to hear

i inhaled and yelled "OFFICER KIM!" and i heard footsteps

Officer kim and the rest of the team ran up to me worried

“why’d you take so long to get here?” I asked

“because we just got a call. Sorry were late,”

“what…*cough cough* are you talking about. You called me about 20 minutes ago to meet at this warehouse to arrest the gang,”

"what are you talking about gaeul? i only got a call 5 minutes ago from an anonomyous caller saying they heard a gunshot from this warehouse," he claimed

i got out my phone and showed him the recent call

"what the?! hey officer lim, take gaeul's phone and try to trace where this call was from," he ordered

"why?" i asked as i was being carried to the ambulance

"gaeul i never called you. i was talking with officer lim the entire time," he said lastly as i got into the ambulance

i started dozing off and i realized that yijung went missing

i looked around and couldn't find him

"miss. what's wrong?" the ambulance guy asked

"n..nothing," i said lastly before i went unconsious

YIJUNG'S POV

I couldn't bear seeing the country bumpkin get beaten like that, i had to go meet siyoon

i just closed my eyes and found myself in the white room again and silently called out "SIYOON! SIYOON! I NEED YOU!"

and in front of me was the angel

"you called?!"

"i need you to turn me back into a human..."

"you know the rules," siyoon interuppted

" i need to turn back to human only when gaeul's in danger," i finished saying

"i can't do that, i'm sorry," he rejected my proposal

"please. i need to help the girl. look..." i said as i waved my hand and in front was an image of gaeul in the ambulance knocked out

"i tried helping her but my body just went through the guys. i can't just look and watch a girl being trampeled on like that," i reasoned

"she's helping me by trying to prove my unjustice death and the least i could do is help her whenever she's in danger," i said as i did my best to persuade him

siyoon just turned silent as he kept looking at gaeul and me back and forth and he suddenlty sighed

"fine...," he said and snapped his fingers

i saw a glow in me

"you will become human only when chu gaeul needs your help," he declared and i nodded my head

i walked towards the image of gaeul in surgery and went in, directly sending me right where the image showed

gaeul was unconsious as they were finishing up covering her wounds

i went out to see my boys and jandi waiting anxiously

"how the hell did this happen? where did she go that this happened? why'd she go alone," jandi just ranted on asking particularly no one

the f3 were either pacing or sitting

finally the doctor came out and they all sprinted towards the old man who was only a couple yards away from them

"how is she doctor? is she fine? is she awake? why did this happen to her? any serious damage?" jandi rumbled on

the doctor chuckled "she's lucky she's even alive. though it was only a gun wound, the severe brusies and cuts on her stomach shows she was kicked there several times even after the bullet was in her. the bullet was so deep into her that it took awhile for us to finish the surgery," he explained

"and her condition will be fine . she just needs a little rest and the bullet wound will heal as well as the other wounds," he explaiined

"thank you doctor," they said and bowed and the doctor walked away

everyone sat down as they were glad that gaeul yang was going to be okay

"i wondered what happened to her," and right then eunchae and the officers gaeul works with came running through the door

"is she fine?" eunchae worriedly asked

"don't pretend like you care," jandi growled

eunchae just smirked "shut it you weed. i'm just here to see if my dear friend is okay but seeing she's fine i'm going to make a phone call," she said and walked out the door

i followed after her and she was in the middle of her conversation

"why did you hurt her so much? i only wanted her wounded enough to scare her, nothing else,"

eunchae groaned and ended the call

when she turned around i saw her do her infamous eye roll and started walking back to where everyone else was

we found everyone going in the room the bumpkin was in

and eunchae and i did as well

we found gaeul already awake

"GAEUL!" jandi yelled hugging her best friend only to find gaeul spazzing out

"your hurting her," eunchae said and pryed jandi off of gaeul

"hey sweetie, how are you feeling?" my sweet girlfriend asked

"fine. is it okay if i talk to just f4 real fast?" she asked

"but.." the 2 girls voiced but the guys carefully shoved them out of the room

i was going to stay and listen but i felt an invisible hand push me out of the room

i tried going back in but the door was shut and even though i was a ghost i wasn't able to go through at all or even hear what they were talking about

GAEUL'S POV

"what is it gaeul?" jihoo sunbae asked

"jihoo sunbae i really don't know how you know i had a problem,"

"just cut to the chase," the impatient junpyo sunbae demanded

"i need you to do a background search on eunchae unnie and her recent calls,"

"why?"

"at the warehouse, the guy was going to hit me again but he stopped because he got a phonecall and i couldn't really hear anything he was saying but i heard this..MIss. Cha first you order us to kill him and now hurt this girl. What do you want us to do now? MIss cha? Miss cha eun...." i repeated

" he was going to say the rest of the name but stopped at cha eun because the police came and he ran off with the rest of the gang,"

"you think cha eun chae had something to do with this?" woobin sunbae asked

"more than certain," i said and i looked to see that yijung wasn't hanging around because he would flip once he finds out

"but why would eunchae want to hurt you?"

"or murder yijung?"

"i don't know but we got to find out..."

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darling_noona
#1
Chapter 1: Wow! The story seems interesting.... Im gonna read this now!
pinkyberry
#2
boys over flowers?? i love that!!
nice story :)
ambercookiebee
#3
how does Yi Jung's ghost thing work? He can hold some things, but not all...
ambercookiebee
#4
Since I am proofreading your story...I should be asking questions.
Is Eun Chae a seriously good actor, because she was crying during his funeral, while she ordered some dude to kill him (sorry, forgot the dude's name! ^_^). Was she crying because she truly loved him (lol, forgot if you ever mentioned that...pretty sure you just said she was jealous of Ga Eul/So Eun), or was she crying because she realized she did something extremely stupid?
ambercookiebee
#5
Lol did I say redirection...I meant resurrection...
ambercookiebee
#6
Absolutely loved it! Seriously! Regarding you're questions...here's one.
You didn't really say how the F3 and Jan Di felt when they saw Yi Jung when they were questioning Eun Chae. I would be afraid if I saw my dead friend back to life.
Also, is his "redirection" brought to the media? And how do other people feel about a guy that just died is alive?
If I think of more question's I'll comment!
KimAmina
#7
the Cha family died!!*evil laugh*
I hate Yihyun.. how could he!
it's sad that the story ended.. :(
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Thanks for the wonderful story ^__^ I had fun reading it <3
Keep it up :D waiting for more :D
DalHeera
#8
Wah~it has ended...
IM SOOOO FRIGGIN HAPPY THAT EUNCHAE MET HER DEMISE!!!!!
And how can Yihyun just get away like that..after just doing that with Eunchae..WHY IS HE WALKING GAEUL DOWN THE AISLE?!?!?!
*thats my question for u author-nim!*
I just think Yihyun does not deserve that..
21bangyen
#9
waaahhh....I hated yi jung for some unknown reasons...hahaha
i hope they wouldn't encounter problems as big as those again..huh...
may they leave peacefully forever!!!<3
KimAmina
#10
Engaged! I'm shocked
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Please update soon
please don't end the story.. if you'll end it soon (Happy Ending please) ^_^